Author: DarthyVader
Date posted: 9/2/2003 8:23:28 AM
DarthyVader's Comments:

What do you know, I get the first one!
That was funny! I liked her punishment
Is there a connection between Mari-Zu and Mara Jade? Keep on writing!

Author: Viari Skywalker  (signed)
Date posted: 9/2/2003 12:15:10 PM
Viari Skywalker's Comments:

Kit, this is too hilarious! Glad to see you got it in the archives; you deserved it!

*chuckles* Mari-Zu...*snicker*

Author: Jainon Solo
Date posted: 9/2/2003 1:26:58 PM
Jainon Solo's Comments:

I like what you did with her. Write more.

Author: LuvEwan
Date posted: 9/2/2003 1:51:34 PM
LuvEwan's Comments:

**wipes tears from eyes**

Oh, that was just priceless, 'Kit. I looooved how the Masters reacted to her many heroic 'deeds'. This should be a must-read for anyone beginning a fic. Fantastic and utterly funny. Great job!

Author: LianaMara  (signed)
Date posted: 9/2/2003 6:40:33 PM
LianaMara's Comments:

That was so hilarious, Kit! I read it on the boards, and loved it. Mari-Zu, the perfect character, is revealed to the stereotypical silly that she really is. And her punishment was the best part. Great job!

Author: Jedi-2B  (signed)
Date posted: 9/3/2003 2:34:50 PM
Jedi-2B's Comments:

Very funny commentary on Mary-Sue ... I mean, Mari-Zu. But did you have to make her look like Mara? :)

Author: Kit (No, different Kit!)
Date posted: 9/3/2003 4:02:59 PM
Kit (No, different Kit!)'s Comments:

w00t! Death to the Mary-Sue! Hehehehe... Very nice. We appreciate it a great deal. ^_______^

Author: Mcily Nochi  (signed)
Date posted: 9/3/2003 8:13:21 PM
Mcily Nochi's Comments:

Oh my gosh, this is so funny! What a great little story! Thank you for sharing this with us.

Author: Fett Boy  (signed)
Date posted: 9/7/2003 6:20:20 AM
Fett Boy's Comments:

I liked it! I liked it!

Good job. Keep me laughing. Write more! More I say!

Author: Flask
Date posted: 9/7/2003 6:00:27 PM
Flask's Comments:

Great story, Kit! I read it first when you posted it on the forums and it was even more hilarious this second time around. ;)

Author: geo3
Date posted: 9/7/2003 8:50:49 PM
geo3's Comments:

..."No more shall we hear from you," the green monster quavered. "Dismissed you are, Mari-Zu."...

Oh, if only!!!! If only!!!!

Brilliant, Kit. Bravo!

Author: Raxonia
Date posted: 9/8/2003 12:23:28 PM
Raxonia's Comments:

The bit about the ex-boyfriend made me laugh as well as the description of the "perfect jedi". Short and sweet.

Author: Christina
Date posted: 9/8/2003 5:43:24 PM
Christina's Comments:

The scary thing? I think I've met this child. <g>

It was hysterical--an excellent parody.

Author: Bant428  (signed)
Date posted: 9/8/2003 5:58:47 PM
Bant428's Comments:

THANK YOU KIT'!!! I hate May Sue stories and it's about time I laughed after reading about her instead of cried in anguish... =-). Looove it!

Author: Qwi_Xux  (signed)
Date posted: 9/9/2003 7:16:27 AM
Qwi_Xux's Comments:

Yay! It finally got in! I love this piece...it's just hilarious, and so true to some fanfiction.

Author: Nemesis  (signed)
Date posted: 9/10/2003 8:58:58 AM
Nemesis's Comments:

I read this on the boards... it's still hilarious.

Great work Kit'.

Nem :D

Author: Jedi Kate
Date posted: 11/13/2003 4:13:36 PM
Jedi Kate's Comments:

Nice punishment for the girl. A nice fanfic over all. Keep up the good work.

Author: Y-Wing Ace  (signed)
Date posted: 12/3/2003 10:10:49 PM
Y-Wing Ace's Comments:

Gee, I thought Mary Sue only showed up in Star Trek fanfics. Nice to know the Federation isn't the only multi-planet government that has to deal with her, the Republic does too.
"Having one bad day and a temper tantrum does not a dark Jedi make." Nice to know. Otherwise Anakin would already have been doing his James Earl Jones impression at the end of AOTC.

Author: Jules
Date posted: 12/8/2003 9:30:25 PM
Jules's Comments:

haha...short and funny...just peachy

Author: Saber-of-Light  (signed)
Date posted: 4/22/2004 1:01:25 PM
Saber-of-Light's Comments:

"Gee, I thought Mary Sue only showed up in Star Trek fanfics. "

Oh, Y-wing Ace, if only you knew...I've been the fervent shipper of six fandoms and all have Mary-Sues. Yesssss, my preciousssss...

Er, moving on; excellent one, Kit! Ah, all seasoned authors have done battle with this former...Jedi? Huh. I've known Mary-Sue as a former salon owner and a rejected Elf, but a Jedi? Lurvely. That means ysalamiri will work on her. Eeeeexcellent. Anyways, lovely story ^^

Author: jarogue  (signed)
Date posted: 8/18/2008 8:55:59 PM
jarogue's Comments:

Ha ha ha!!!!! She so deserved that. Good work. OF all the Jedi council members, Mace Windu has got to be my favorite. Kit, keep on postin'. And Kit, I think you should turn around nice and slow and see who's standing...right...behind...you...