Date posted: 9/30/2003 9:26:11 AM
Not bad, not bad at all. In fact brilliant!! I would have much more prefered if this would have happened because I did not enjoy reading about how Tahiri and Riina became one in Reunion. Great stuff!
Author: Twin Suns 4
Date posted: 9/30/2003 5:22:59 PM
Twin Suns 4's Comments:
You did a great job. I was intreeged by the title and you got me hocked from word one. great job!
Date posted: 9/30/2003 7:28:54 PM
Nice job, Mcily. The Anakin/Tahiri relationship, had it been allowed to flourish, would have been just this sweet, just this strong. And you handled the dichotomy that would have been Tahiri's mind, right after her indoctrination and torture, very realistically, I feel. Good solution, too, having Anakin take her to Dagobah. The Vong would have had little use for an uninhabited place such as that, far off the beaten track.
Very engaging piece!
Author: Jedi Anakin Solo
Date posted: 10/1/2003 5:08:24 AM
Jedi Anakin Solo's Comments:
Well, you already know very well what I think about this story ;) :). This is great, Emily, you've managed to capture the essence of Anakin and Tahiri's relationship, and the dream sequences are just phenomenal. On a scale of 1 to 10, I give it a 20 :D.
Date posted: 10/1/2003 2:15:27 PM
I loved your story better for the Books Edge of Victory:Conquest and Reunion for both Tahiri and Anakin, especially the end Riina Kwaad's death.
I am already waiting for your next story to come out in the future.
Author: A Secret Admirer
Date posted: 10/3/2003 8:51:13 AM
A Secret Admirer's Comments:
Brilliant effort! I'd like to hear more about the Delian League (or was it Melian?)!
Date posted: 10/6/2003 1:30:44 PM
Wow. Excellent story substance, I really enjoyed the whole thing. Great portrayal of the Anakin/Tahiri relationship. This is definatly the alternative that allot of us would have liked to see.
Date posted: 10/6/2003 10:01:50 PM
Very nice job. I liked FH3, and believed ahead of time that Tahiri and Riina would merge. I also felt it was necessary in order for Tahiri to live. Still, I enjoyed this AU fanfic. :)
Date posted: 10/7/2003 4:26:04 AM
Absolutly Brilliant, this is one of the best star wars stories i have read, Good Work and Well Done on your half
Date posted: 10/7/2003 5:04:16 PM
hey i loved this. i am sad about how it really turned out for these two, they were robbed. it's a reall lift after tahiri has been fighting this without his help. you are really good!
Date posted: 10/15/2003 1:08:58 PM
Yay! It got in! :) :) Excellent job on the story, Em. I love the characterizations, and the twists that you put on the whole story is fantastic. The style of this story is unique and captivating.
Date posted: 11/23/2003 1:56:24 PM
Great fic! I loved how you depicted Anakin's feelings, and the way Riina acted. I only wish this had happened instead of the EU stuff. Wonderful job! :)
Date posted: 1/27/2004 8:06:32 AM
Wow! This was one of the sweetest Anakin and Tahiri stories I have ever read. Indeed, it was brilliant!
Date posted: 5/18/2004 9:44:03 AM
Wonderful. Great job depicting the actions of both Anakin and Tahiri. Marvelous job with the story line, and I think this is how the story would have gone if the original turned out differently. Good work.
Date posted: 7/2/2006 10:31:30 PM
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Okay... Some of the punctuation could have been better. Unless A. Solo thinks in run-on sentences... Aniwho (Get it? ANI-who?), all in all it was a great story.