Author: Master_Rush
Date posted: 12/30/2003 6:20:25 PM
Master_Rush's Comments:

This is an awseome story. I love how Anakin's bad habits get him into trouble. Thank you for writing a story that has morals.

Author: Jedi_Knight150
Date posted: 12/30/2003 10:46:11 PM
Jedi_Knight150's Comments:

That was hilarious! The best part is that I could really imagine Obi-Wan doing that. This is a *very* well written story. Bravo.

Author: Jack90Cool
Date posted: 12/31/2003 5:50:47 AM
Jack90Cool's Comments:

Awsome! Finally a story about moral issues and not blood, guts, and gore! lol. Keep up the good work!

Author: Jedi4EB
Date posted: 12/31/2003 7:04:55 AM
Jedi4EB's Comments:

Great story! You really captured Obi-Wan and made the narrative visually clear.

Author: Senator Leia
Date posted: 12/31/2003 11:54:00 AM
Senator Leia's Comments:

Great job! I loved how Obi-Wan was tricked by a ten year old. Anakin really knows how to get his way with Obi-Wan.

Author: Perle Des Antilles
Date posted: 12/31/2003 1:07:28 PM
Perle Des Antilles's Comments:

Cute, however, could you explain why *Obi-Wan* is cleaning up the mess when it was Anakin who caused it? Surely he knows better than that!

Author: Templar
Date posted: 12/31/2003 2:54:49 PM
Templar's Comments:

Adi? As in Adi Klem? :D

Author: ninjaking
Date posted: 12/31/2003 7:12:35 PM
ninjaking's Comments:

this is a grate story I loved it I could see the look on ani's face

Author: Ivy
Date posted: 1/1/2004 2:54:18 AM
Ivy's Comments:

What a cute story! Anakin was as annoying as ever, but Obi Wan's reactions and "payback" was priceless!

Author: Andrea Jade  (signed)
Date posted: 1/2/2004 7:13:06 AM
Andrea Jade's Comments:

What a hoot! Just to prove that sometimes one can be a little to smart for one's own good.

Author: Nade_Naberrie  (signed)
Date posted: 1/2/2004 1:27:51 PM
Nade_Naberrie's Comments:

Adorable ending! I'm glad it was archived. Great job, and keep writing. :)
-Nade

Author: seanpb
Date posted: 1/3/2004 5:40:19 AM
seanpb's Comments:

great, ewan as ob1 is summed up so perfectly, i can just see him like that, ice cool....10/10

Author: Aunecah_Skywalker  (signed)
Date posted: 1/5/2004 10:57:32 AM
Aunecah_Skywalker's Comments:

Wonderfully, wonderfully done.

Aunecah

Author: benskycrawler
Date posted: 1/12/2004 6:08:11 AM
benskycrawler's Comments:

to templar - i think adi is adi gallia from the jedi apprentice series

funny story, after reading shatterpoint, i realized no one could discipline an unruly padawan like mace windu. mace glaring at anakin was the perfect ending. keep it up!

Author: JediPug1  (signed)
Date posted: 1/18/2004 10:34:10 AM
JediPug1's Comments:

Great story! I wouldn't want to be Anakin having to deal with Mace at the end!

Author: sidious618
Date posted: 1/19/2004 9:06:26 AM
sidious618's Comments:

A very nice story. I found it quite funny. Good job!

Author: Master Sáwen  (signed)
Date posted: 1/21/2004 3:14:18 PM
Master Sáwen's Comments:

Wonderfully done. I really enjoy stories like this that have more of a personal edge to them.

Author: MutantJediBouer
Date posted: 1/26/2004 9:30:55 PM
MutantJediBouer's Comments:

Excedingly well written story. Obi-Wan is my favorite character and you really captured him, and his budding relationship with Ani. I like the comment about Ani breaking the firgure Adi (Gallia?) gave Obi-Wan and Ani having to deal with Mace. Very good story, it stays true to Obi-Wan's personality.

Author: AshJediKnight
Date posted: 1/28/2004 6:00:09 PM
AshJediKnight's Comments:

Very funny and believable! I love the end w/ Mace visiting!

Author: Sith+Jedi=Me
Date posted: 1/29/2004 6:17:04 PM
Sith+Jedi=Me's Comments:

Evil Anikin and Evil Obi wan, I like!!!!!

Author: LianaMara
Date posted: 2/10/2004 4:53:53 AM
LianaMara's Comments:

I thought I left a reply earlier, but I guess not. ;)

Thank you to everyone who read this or reviewed it! I really appreciate it. This little viggie was written with the intent of both amusing and developing Obi and Ani's relationship a little bit more, and I hope it succeeded.

Thanks to all my betas, especially Nade_Naberrie and oba. *huggies*

And thanks to oba for telling me that my cover art wasn't as stupid as I thought. :)

Again, thanks for reading! And I have plans to write a few more viggies like this.

Author: Darth Virididan
Date posted: 5/5/2004 9:32:12 PM
Darth Virididan's Comments:

LOL!

That little but thinkin he's so smart just ends up with a little chat with Mace Windu.

The best part is that I can just see Obi-wans smug smile when he got Anakin like that. It shows that even through his calm composure he's still very much as obstinate as he was when he was Qui-Gon's Apprintice, lets not forget the classicly smart reply he made to Qui-gon in Ep 1 "You were right about one thing Master, the negotiations were short."

Great story, I've read better, but humor always helps make one come back a second time :)

Author: Endurwen_Kenobi  (signed)
Date posted: 7/1/2004 5:39:20 PM
Endurwen_Kenobi's Comments:

Hehe that was cute. Leave it to Anakin...

Author: Ani-maniac
Date posted: 11/10/2004 9:38:40 PM
Ani-maniac's Comments:

That was a very cool story. It made me laugh. You did an awsome job of capturing Anakin and Obi-wan. It also shows that Anakin has always been willing to minipulate people to get what he wants. I loved it!

Author: JaylaKenobi87  (signed)
Date posted: 4/2/2005 2:29:33 PM
JaylaKenobi87's Comments:

This was a really good story. I love how Anakin and Obi-Wan act like father and son. It is so cute! Keep up the good work!

Author: Darth Slaya
Date posted: 8/3/2005 2:37:11 AM
Darth Slaya's Comments:

I just love the little arguments Anikin and Obi-Wan have all the time it just makes there Master-Apprentice relationship seem all the cuiter.

Author: anipadme_relationship
Date posted: 12/20/2005 8:00:49 PM
anipadme_relationship's Comments:

It was funny. It was exactly what Obi-Wan would do in a real situation with Anakin. I lauged myself hoarse.

Author: Veloz  (signed)
Date posted: 1/1/2006 5:57:52 PM
Veloz's Comments:

This was really funny hahaha

Author: Kadi-Ahn_Tanye
Date posted: 8/17/2006 11:37:19 AM
Kadi-Ahn_Tanye's Comments:

That was very funny! I was on the ground laughing!

Author: jarogue
Date posted: 8/24/2008 6:21:01 PM
jarogue's Comments:

Obi-Wan should hire someone to -ahem- 'take care of' his cheeky little padawan. I know I have, i mean, would. Great story.

Author: Lady_Nomad  (signed)
Date posted: 4/28/2009 12:55:57 AM
Lady_Nomad's Comments:

That sounds like something a ten year old would do. Oh man, Anakin is such a little jerk and are those really bad words?

Author: MJ_KenobiJinn  (signed)
Date posted: 12/9/2012 3:48:07 PM
MJ_KenobiJinn's Comments:

Jajaja I thought this is really how Obi-Wan and Anakin are...