Author: tess
Date posted: 7/9/2001 10:43:22 PM
tess's Comments:

i like the story, very romantic, but not long enough. Just make it a little longer and this will make an awesome piece of work. It shows the lovable side of anakin.

Author: Rae Poet
Date posted: 7/11/2001 9:17:17 AM
Rae Poet's Comments:

I like this story, it's romantic and cute. I like the way you made Padme and Anakin speak the same dialogue that Leia and Had spoke in ESB, and how C-3PO intruded in their kiss. A classic moment, I'll say.

Author: Amidala_Skywalker
Date posted: 7/13/2001 1:53:49 AM
Amidala_Skywalker's Comments:

Lovely work.....full of romance.

Author: Chocos_Ramabotti  (signed)
Date posted: 7/21/2001 3:55:32 PM
Chocos_Ramabotti's Comments:

Sweet and "mushy". The little ESB-dialoge and 3PO's interruption were good.

Author: Mara Jade00
Date posted: 7/24/2001 11:07:08 AM
Mara Jade00's Comments:

Very cute story, I loved their meeting and first kiss. I think it has the potential to be a longer story, but I think the way it is is just enough to give the reader a feel of their romance. = )

Author: Quiller
Date posted: 7/24/2001 12:55:32 PM
Quiller's Comments:

The story was originally written as a response to the writing challenge here on TFN, hence the length and some of the story elements. I hope that someday time and inspiration will overlap and I will be able to expand the story.

Author: Princess_LaLa
Date posted: 7/24/2001 2:49:24 PM
Princess_LaLa's Comments:

I really don't have anything to say diferent than everybody else.
Loved it. It was cute. Should have been longer. The ESB reference was pretty cool.
You get the picture.

Author: Mcily Nochi
Date posted: 7/25/2001 8:25:29 PM
Mcily Nochi's Comments:

Awww . . . Cute!

Author: Javu Korint
Date posted: 7/26/2001 8:53:54 AM
Javu Korint's Comments:

A very good use of the challenge posted on the web site.

Author: The Great Yoda
Date posted: 7/26/2001 10:45:45 PM
The Great Yoda's Comments:

When 900 years old you be write romance this good you sill will.

Author: Jeff 42  (signed)
Date posted: 7/28/2001 5:22:07 PM
Jeff 42's Comments:

For a response to the challenge, it is just about perfect.

Author: Sreya
Date posted: 7/31/2001 9:14:04 AM
Sreya's Comments:

That was very sweet, and could definitely see the challenge elements in there! I liked the time that it took for Amidala to recognize Anakin -- gave it that bit of awkwardness they needed.

Author: Padawon So-Ver-Leet
Date posted: 8/17/2001 2:59:56 PM
Padawon So-Ver-Leet's Comments:

Good story. I also enjoyed the ESB comieo. If you were to write a longer story to go along with this one, I would read it religiously.

Author: Ladybug  (signed)
Date posted: 8/21/2001 7:03:27 PM
Ladybug's Comments:

"Insufferably nice men" - that was beautiful!
I loved this story. great work!

Author: ruffem
Date posted: 8/23/2001 8:43:54 AM
ruffem's Comments:

you try to hard

Author: Quiller  (signed)
Date posted: 8/28/2001 10:11:16 PM
Quiller's Comments:

Hi ruffem,
In the words of Han Solo, I can only say,"Yes, I do. I really do."

Author: Ames
Date posted: 8/30/2001 8:46:58 PM
Ames's Comments:

Ahh! This was very good!! You had me laughing out loud at the ESB reference! :) I liked their meeting. It'd be nice if Lucas actuallly made Anakin and Padme meet like that. Except for the fast kiss, 'cause that's just not fair! :)

Author: Johnjay
Date posted: 10/20/2001 3:37:10 PM
Johnjay's Comments:

Aww... that's so sweet... uh, short, spontanious and diffuccult to make sense of without knowing the backstory, but very sweet nonetheless.

Author: Qwi_Xux
Date posted: 11/10/2001 11:04:05 PM
Qwi_Xux's Comments:

Awwww...that was so sweet!

Author: Madison
Date posted: 5/22/2002 5:06:52 PM
Madison's Comments:

I love this story, but i think it needs to be longer. It'll make a wonderful piece.

Author: kk
Date posted: 6/17/2002 3:33:46 PM
kk's Comments:

This is a great story. good romance. i wish it was longer though.

Author: Chinook Z
Date posted: 6/24/2002 12:57:17 PM
Chinook Z's Comments:

It's a cute story; although it could stand to be longer and include more developing details. =]
Is it a re-writing of their first meeting, instead of whats in Ep. II or somat? o-O;; *Is confused. Ah well*

Author: Skysong
Date posted: 6/27/2002 4:20:30 PM
Skysong's Comments:

AHHHHHHHHH! So sweet! So romantic, i wish it was longer!!!!! Add on to it or something, i dont care what! OMG, i'm such a sap, but nice story, i loved it!

Author: Count Dooku
Date posted: 7/3/2002 4:53:28 PM
Count Dooku's Comments:

Please make it longer !!!

Author: Yodiss
Date posted: 7/8/2002 3:00:23 PM
Yodiss's Comments:

Awwwwww, it's cute! but what about the danger Amidala was in?

Author: Anjelica
Date posted: 7/29/2002 1:02:50 AM
Anjelica's Comments:

I love the story....It was brilliant, but if it could be just a little longer...... than it would be fantastic.

Author: vader-incarnate  (signed)
Date posted: 8/2/2002 4:15:30 AM
vader-incarnate's Comments:

How do you do it?? How do you freaking do it?? You write Ani/Ami stories with the same depth, the same proficiency that you can write Obi/Ami ones. Gosh darn it... I'll just go over here and feel insecure now....

Author: Angel of the X-Wings
Date posted: 9/2/2002 8:08:58 AM
Angel of the X-Wings's Comments:

oh now that was just too cute!!!!!!!! I loved the ending!!!!!!

Author: Barissa
Date posted: 10/11/2002 7:01:11 PM
Barissa's Comments:

Needs more length, other wise could be very cool.

Author: Rogue Dom
Date posted: 10/22/2002 1:55:57 AM
Rogue Dom's Comments:

I was really impressed with the intone this short took, but what really made it emjoyable for me was the intertwining of story lines between Ani & Amidala and Han & Leia. Nice work. Hope to see more in the future.

Author: mmmm...burgers145
Date posted: 7/28/2003 7:15:43 AM
mmmm...burgers145's Comments:

make it longer......longer, LONGER!!!!!
but i thought it was SO sweet how ou took the ESB lines and put them in it
SWEET! very sweet!

Author: carmenskywalker
Date posted: 11/20/2003 3:49:17 PM
carmenskywalker's Comments:

vary nice storie really got in2 it. just need to write another one 2 tell what happend next!