Author: BarissaOffee
Date posted: 7/19/2005 9:45:22 PM
BarissaOffee's Comments:

Well, I most certainly hope that this fic has a sequel, because I think it's great! Really, the way Obi-Wan thinks is so cannon and Anakin's lack of control.... it's just most definately one of the best, most believable AU I've read in a long time.

Cheers!
Barissa

Author: Jira  (signed)
Date posted: 7/23/2005 7:15:43 PM
Jira's Comments:

This was so well-written! The characterization was perfect! I wish Obi-Wan had been able to get through to Anakin like he did in this story. Things would have been so different. Great work!

Author: Bloodraven77  (signed)
Date posted: 7/23/2005 9:02:45 PM
Bloodraven77's Comments:

Oh this was wonderfully dark and so sad! I love how Obi-Wan is reacting to the news and how he begins to see what is starting to happen to Anakin. I only wish they could have included a scene like this in the movie...Ah well...

Anyways I truly hope there is a sequel in the making for this tale as it is far too good to be a stand alone! =D

Author: DarthIshtar  (signed)
Date posted: 7/24/2005 6:13:52 PM
DarthIshtar's Comments:

This was a stunning rendition of what might have been.

Author: Koon  (signed)
Date posted: 7/26/2005 4:10:59 PM
Koon's Comments:

An excellent "may have been" fic.
Better than most others i have read.

a sequel....?

Author: me_luv_darth_squishy
Date posted: 7/26/2005 7:20:17 PM
me_luv_darth_squishy's Comments:

Wow. That was an excellent portrayal of Anakin...and Anakin and Obi-Wan's friendship. I felt my own soul struggling with Anakin's. A sequel, please.

MTFBWY

Author: darth_sparrow  (signed)
Date posted: 7/27/2005 2:49:09 PM
darth_sparrow's Comments:

Wow...This story is awesome. I'm currently working on an Alternate Universe fic in which I'm struggling with how to keep Anakin from turning to the Dark Side, but also keep the story interesting and honoring to the actual story.

You did wonders with this story. The characterizations were top notch. Definitely one of the best stories I have read on this site!

Definitely begging for a sequel!

Author: Soccergirl
Date posted: 7/27/2005 10:29:52 PM
Soccergirl's Comments:

Wow! You are an incredible writer! I was glued to the screen the entire time. Please continue to write, you are wonderful!

Author: Darth Slaya
Date posted: 7/30/2005 11:30:49 PM
Darth Slaya's Comments:

this is so great it is like the story bettween the story Episode 2.5 Anakins secret i love the way the characters act you can imagine seeing this as a movie and imagine them acting like this bravo to who ever wrote it.

Author: Daryle
Date posted: 8/4/2005 8:27:06 AM
Daryle's Comments:

i think u should aslo make a segual as said in the first comment i was so attached at reading this
its all ur faull now i stayed up till 6:30Am
i had to read it more then once
GREAT BRAVO
i enjoyed
please make another and if u do please notify me by tucsondude661@yahoo.com
i beg u to make another no matter how long i shall wait

Author: rhonderoo  (signed)
Date posted: 8/4/2005 10:34:27 PM
rhonderoo's Comments:

This was wonderful! If only this was canon. The characterization was perfect and the imagery made it feel like I was right there. Like others, I certainly hope there is a sequel.

Author: Rachel (pink_saber_girl)
Date posted: 8/11/2005 5:00:36 PM
Rachel (pink_saber_girl)'s Comments:

Wow. I don't know anything to say besides that. You captured their personalities brilliantly, and it is one of teh best fan fictions of the two I've ever read. Good work!

Author: BrownEyes_Blue
Date posted: 8/12/2005 8:43:58 PM
BrownEyes_Blue's Comments:

Wow....this was really great. If only this would have happened instead....hehehe. But then we wouldn't get Darth Vader.

Your characterization was right on. Great job!

Author: Veloz  (signed)
Date posted: 12/29/2005 5:23:04 PM
Veloz's Comments:

This was really great.. u portrated Anakin's struggle and pain so well, even i was feleing it along with Obi Wan .. i found myself wishing that this had actually hapened, that Anakin would have been straight with Obi Wan *sigh*

Wonderfully done! *applause*

Author: andaere
Date posted: 6/19/2010 7:32:42 PM
andaere's Comments:

Aw... this 'fic brought tears to my eyes. It's so well-written, and you really understand Anakin and Obi-Wan's friendship. I wish things had gone this way... one thing that really made me sad about RotS (besides... well... the whole movie xD) was that Anakin didn't trust Obi-Wan enough to confide in him. And that Obi-Wan might've been too stuck-up even if Anakin HAD told him...

Anyways. I loved this 'fic. The conflict, the hurt/comfort, and yet that sense of unrelenting darkness pursuing Anakin. Thanks for writing this. :)

Author: anakin_girl
Date posted: 9/26/2010 5:21:13 PM
anakin_girl's Comments:

I just found this yesterday and I love it; it made me cry. It is beautifully written, and I could really "see" the characters; I could see this happening early in ROTS. If only Anakin had told Obi-Wan, how different things might have turned out. Very well done.

Author: Abdulrazakpt
Date posted: 4/8/2015 10:04:54 AM
Abdulrazakpt's Comments:

I went to tons of links before this, what was I thniikng?