Author: ratna
Date posted: 5/29/2007 1:17:10 AM
ratna's Comments:

I remember reading this on the boards.

Evil, slimy Palpatine can make the wrongest thing seem right.

Too bad Ani falls for it.....

Very well portrayed in both characters.

Author: Captain Niarc  (signed)
Date posted: 6/8/2007 6:41:22 PM
Captain Niarc's Comments:

Very well written. Good character feelings for Anakin and Papatine. I love on how you made Anakin feel a little nervous and sacred. Very good on portraying Papatine's evil wisdom.

Author: Roger Memb. .
Date posted: 6/15/2007 5:17:00 AM
Roger Memb. .'s Comments:

Good. I ate a curry to this and was satisfied. Has anyone heard of the stories regarding Wuher being Bigg's father? These are intriguing me.

Author: Roger Memb. .
Date posted: 6/15/2007 5:17:34 AM
Roger Memb. .'s Comments:

Good. I ate a curry to this and was satisfied. Has anyone heard of the stories regarding Wuher being Bigg's father? These are intriguing me.

Author: Jedifan89
Date posted: 6/16/2007 10:28:14 PM
Jedifan89's Comments:

Very good fanfic. It was cool to to see Palpatine going to work in a way similar to "Revenge of the Sith" in twisting the truth to make things work out for himself. I didn't really know how it was going to explain how Anakin could've done something good out what he did, but it played out very well and very convincing.

Author: SWpants666  (signed)
Date posted: 6/24/2007 8:28:29 AM
SWpants666's Comments:

Oh wow, that was amazing. You got Palpatine's entire slimy behavior down perfectly. I could see him manipulating Anakin into telling him about the Tusken Raiders just like that. It sent shivers down my spine.

Author: Diane Kovalcin  (signed)
Date posted: 7/1/2007 6:14:44 PM
Diane Kovalcin's Comments:

Loved this the first time I read it and every time since then. Great job on showing Palpatine's slimy nature!

Well done.

Author: Chad
Date posted: 9/21/2007 3:50:06 PM
Chad's Comments:

Good short story. The characters were in proper form, and I could easily envision this as a short scene. Typical of Palpatine to make something so gruesome seem acceptable.

Author: tidal mind  (signed)
Date posted: 2/9/2008 8:41:18 PM
tidal mind's Comments:

For the most part, exemplary. You might reconsider use of the colloquialism "shipping out." Palpatine's style is more formal, even when trying to promote friendship.

Author: Kaylan
Date posted: 9/18/2008 9:31:22 PM
Kaylan's Comments:

Wonderful, wonderful writing! Excellent character development! It is rare to find authors who can capture the same personality of the original and this piece really does that with both Palpatine and Anakin. Anakin, still young and overly emotional and Palpatine, so cool in his evil tactics.

Author: Kaylan
Date posted: 9/18/2008 9:34:08 PM
Kaylan's Comments:

Ah, I meant Palpatine was cool (meaning, chilly, evil...downright vile)... wanted to clarify that. :)

Author: Ki-Aaron-Mundi  (signed)
Date posted: 8/21/2011 12:59:19 AM
Ki-Aaron-Mundi's Comments:

What a great look at the way Palpatine conditioned Anakin prior to his full turn to the Dark Side. The scene felt very natural.

Author: Hatim
Date posted: 4/8/2015 6:26:23 AM
Hatim's Comments:

Sm-caadkb what I was looking for-ty!