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Author: bubbleyicious
Date posted: 3/31/2003 10:08:33 PM
bubbleyicious's Comments:

I like fan fiction, because it gives the chance to explore the character's inner thoughts; things you can't pick up on film, but can only imagine. Leia is one of my very favorite characters because she is so complex. Well written and insightful!

Author: Elinon Bybeth  (signed)
Date posted: 4/1/2003 12:53:39 AM
Elinon Bybeth's Comments:

Brilliant!!
The final line!! You almost broke my heart.
Beautiful piece which really allows us to empathise with Leia.
Lovely, Sologirl-keep at it!

Author: Cosmic  (signed)
Date posted: 4/1/2003 7:05:02 AM
Cosmic's Comments:

Wonderful, absolutely wonderful. Makes me want to go watch the movie yet again... Hope to see more of your work soon!

Cosmic

Author: Lady Padme
Date posted: 4/1/2003 7:20:56 AM
Lady Padme's Comments:


Absolutely lovely! You really captured Leia's voice down perfectly. Great job!

Author: Niki  (signed)
Date posted: 4/1/2003 1:54:47 PM
Niki's Comments:

Wow, that was great! I could 'hear' Leia saying these things to herself. Good work!

Author: SoloGirl
Date posted: 4/1/2003 2:56:42 PM
SoloGirl's Comments:

Thanks guys, I'm glad you liked it! A big thank-you to all my wonderful betas and my cover artist- you know who you are, and I love you guys!!

Author: Fish
Date posted: 4/1/2003 3:21:01 PM
Fish's Comments:

This is a great fanfic! I love the last line because it gives you a sense of completion and at the same time some food for thought.

Author: Bobilll
Date posted: 4/1/2003 3:24:57 PM
Bobilll's Comments:

Hey, congratulations! Glad to see it got archived! I love this as much as I did the first time I read it... very nice insight on Leia's feelings for those two men...

Author: bundy397
Date posted: 4/2/2003 6:20:05 AM
bundy397's Comments:

Wow! I thought your story was great! Way to shead light on what may have been going through Leia's mind during that brief scene in ESB. Keep writing!

Author: MoriahthePariah
Date posted: 4/2/2003 8:53:42 AM
MoriahthePariah's Comments:

A beautiful little story, such grace with words. Despite the fact that the outcome is already known, this didn't diminish the slight wash of emotion that ran through me with that last line. You are a masterful artist.

Author: Princess Beccerz
Date posted: 4/2/2003 5:03:29 PM
Princess Beccerz's Comments:

Beautiful, absolutely beautiful. It just tells me that I am not the only one who sees the value of loving someone. You voiced Leia's thoughts so clearly, it was almost like she was saying those things to me in person. Great job, and I hope to see more of your work.

~Beccerz~

Author: jedi_michele
Date posted: 4/2/2003 6:25:48 PM
jedi_michele's Comments:

i only had to picture the movie scene in my mind and i could totally see Leia saying all of those things. you did a wonderful job at capturing how Leia really is. hope to see more of ur work!

Author: JediPug1  (signed)
Date posted: 4/2/2003 8:16:06 PM
JediPug1's Comments:

Terrific!

Author: Emmi
Date posted: 4/3/2003 5:39:39 AM
Emmi's Comments:

This is a lovely story! You almost never see this side of Leia. Bravo, and I'll look for more work from you!

-Emmi

Author: Gabri_Jade  (signed)
Date posted: 4/3/2003 11:43:51 AM
Gabri_Jade's Comments:

Truly lovely. This is a very eloquent look at Leia's inner self, and powerfully written. Absolutely loved it.

Author: Blazer  (signed)
Date posted: 4/5/2003 2:23:46 PM
Blazer's Comments:

Excellent fic! Truly wonderful. You give Leia a whole new depth in this one. Great job!

Author: Wilhelmina  (signed)
Date posted: 4/6/2003 10:21:36 AM
Wilhelmina's Comments:

Glad to see this archived! It was a pleasure to beta. This vignette adds a lot of depth and emotion to that single moment -- that "Clang!" -- at the beginning of ESB. Lovely work!

Author: beef-somerset
Date posted: 4/7/2003 4:34:45 AM
beef-somerset's Comments:

very good i alway was and still are a big leia fan. hope to read more like this soon

Author: Jedi_Phoenix  (signed)
Date posted: 4/8/2003 5:37:40 PM
Jedi_Phoenix's Comments:

A great insite into Leia's feelings while waiting to hear news about Han and Luke.

Author: sashask8ter
Date posted: 4/19/2003 9:41:20 PM
sashask8ter's Comments:

Love the end note, "Please don't let me lose it."

Author: Cat
Date posted: 5/6/2003 8:11:40 AM
Cat's Comments:

This was amazing! I loved the insight into Leia's thoughts and her feelings for the two men in her life. I'm trying to write an ESB Leia fic myself, and this scene wasn't a quarter as good as your version.

Author: Mcily Nochi  (signed)
Date posted: 9/13/2003 7:11:57 PM
Mcily Nochi's Comments:

Wow. What a great insight into Leia! She's always been my favorite character, hands-down, and this is exactly how I've always imagined her thoughts during that scene.

Great job. I am very impressed.

Author: monkeygirl
Date posted: 11/13/2003 3:38:06 PM
monkeygirl's Comments:

good job!

I love the way you describe Luke in the story, as if every thought of hers is true!

And I also like her thoughts about Han...She doesn't know she'll be marrying the guy!

Author: The Stormtrooper Shrink  (signed)
Date posted: 2/15/2004 5:35:47 PM
The Stormtrooper Shrink's Comments:

You have Leia so well in this - well done! I love how she thinks of the two guys...But then, you have a headstart on her, don't you!


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