Author: Jedi Dajuan
Date posted: 5/13/2003 7:33:17 AM
Jedi Dajuan's Comments:
I loved the story. It was very sweet, and a little sad knowing what is to come shortly for all characters involved. :)
Date posted: 5/13/2003 11:26:33 AM
This was adorable, Darth Breezy!
I loved the way you characterized Anakin and Padme! Because she's such a gushy romantic, sometimes it's easy to forget her grit and backbone. :)
Anakin's bewilderment with the whole situation was both endearing and funny, and was completely in keeping with the man we know he is. ;)
It was wonderful! Keep writing. :p
Date posted: 5/13/2003 2:23:21 PM
This is a lovely, tender story - great on characterization and very original. I'm so happy to see it here on the archive! It reminds us that depite what we know about the overall saga, there must have been many such moments in the lives of these characters - the kinds of events and experiences that give people a reason to struggle when confronted by darkness. Great job, DarthBreezy!
Date posted: 5/13/2003 4:08:15 PM
Really well written!! You captured Anakin and Padme's characters perfectly in those first few weeks of her pregnancy! I love this fic and I think it's one of the few really good A/P fics out there! Great job!!
Date posted: 5/13/2003 4:36:39 PM
Very sweet :) I loved it!
Author: Someone something
Date posted: 5/13/2003 4:48:26 PM
Someone something's Comments:
This was the best stuff ever
Date posted: 5/13/2003 7:38:43 PM
"Hello, little one, I'm your father..."
"I am your father"
Now at first I couldn't figure out how this could be PG-13....
Then I saw the name.... :p
Cute, sweet, and on the brink of what the JC will allow... :p
Date posted: 5/14/2003 6:35:17 PM
Another adorable Anakin fic by Darth Breezy. Where do you come up with these?! I must admit I'm jealous; I've been trying to think up a cute Ani/Ami fic for quite some time now, and here you just produced two in the course of two weeks! :P
Wonderful job. Very cute.
Date posted: 5/14/2003 7:02:03 PM
What a great little story! The characterizations were right on the money and the whole idea of Anakin making the rocking chair was original and written well. Good job!
Date posted: 5/16/2003 8:34:58 AM
The best thing I've read for the last 20 minutes.
Author: Siri Tachi
Date posted: 5/16/2003 11:18:23 AM
Siri Tachi's Comments:
that was wonderful!!! i loved the dialogue and the romance. it was beautiful!! great job, keep it up.
Author: The lost soul585
Date posted: 5/20/2003 12:16:37 PM
The lost soul585's Comments:
A great story , you described the starwars universe perfectly.Although I didn't get why they'd be someplace and automatically in another.
Date posted: 5/21/2003 9:39:07 AM
Aww... how sweet. I love it. The chair is such a pwerful symbol and metaphor
Date posted: 6/4/2003 1:20:41 PM
Very, very sweet. I enjoyed the characterization and how you showed not even Anakin and Padme's relationsip is perfect, even before their break from each other. I loved the way you gave a reason for every action and it wasn't just a pulled out of space one but a heartfelt one. I throughly enjoyed it, good job!
Date posted: 6/21/2003 11:12:59 AM
Well, I finally got around to reading it, and it was just as wonderful as I thought it would be. Your characterization of Anakin is perfect. I was unsure about Padmé cursing so much, but I guess it makes sense, what with the raging hormones and all. ;) The whole story is great . . . Anakin wanting to provide something for his wife and child that would make them feel "at home." Thinking about it, it's actually very tragic, considering what we all know will happen . . . but very, very beautiful. I wish I could give better feedback . . . but oh well, fantastic work! I'll definitely be reading more of your stories.
Date posted: 7/19/2004 3:00:43 AM
It's sooo sweet. I like the way Anakin deals with the knowing of that he is going to a father and the rocker chair is the most perfect gift.
Date posted: 11/28/2004 10:51:06 PM
Awsome! I loved it! You captured Anakin and Padme' perfectly. I loved his worries about being a father. I also loved the "I am your father" at the end. Great work!
Date posted: 3/27/2005 11:29:06 AM
I loved it! I remember reading it back when it was a thread. Good job.
Date posted: 1/29/2006 7:26:32 PM
that was so beautiful, Darth Breezy! I loved it!
Date posted: 2/8/2006 7:44:36 PM
very nice! great plot!
Date posted: 4/29/2006 2:12:49 PM
Hope you don't mind but, I posted your fic on my yahoo group fanfiction page (Vamps and Vader) and gave you due credit. This fic Rocks! Your fan, Lillith
Author: Hapless Tears
Date posted: 9/4/2006 7:34:00 AM
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