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Author: Jack
Date posted: 7/8/2003 6:05:51 AM
Jack's Comments:

I really liked this! You portrayed Obi-wan and especially Yoda really well! I will look for more sories by you because you are obviousally a very talented writer!

Author: BobaFett688 (signed)
Date posted: 7/8/2003 11:29:42 AM
BobaFett688's Comments:

I knew you could get this one posted! Even better than when I beta-read it.

Excellent, excellent work.

Author: pencilnek
Date posted: 7/8/2003 12:06:13 PM
pencilnek's Comments:

ROFL!!!! That Siri and Obi-wan seem ALWAYS to be getting into trouble! Poor Master Yoda, having to deal with all those kids...

Author: DarthyVader
Date posted: 7/8/2003 2:45:42 PM
DarthyVader's Comments:

That is soooooooooooooooo funny! I loved how Yoda didn't punish her! keep on writing!

Author: morwenestela
Date posted: 7/8/2003 3:06:57 PM
morwenestela's Comments:

Congrats on getting your story archived... I knew you could do it from the moment I beta-read it. Great job, and keep writing!

Author: Jedi Dajuan
Date posted: 7/8/2003 3:16:17 PM
Jedi Dajuan's Comments:

You ended it perfectly. Great story!

Author: Ry
Date posted: 7/9/2003 8:07:41 PM
Ry's Comments:

Great story! Look forward to reading more!!!!

Author: Zane Marit
Date posted: 7/11/2003 2:24:31 PM
Zane Marit's Comments:

Excellent...light and warm with humor. The softer side of Yoda we continue to see.

Author: Gina (signed)
Date posted: 7/11/2003 3:15:59 PM
Gina's Comments:

I loved this! It was both touching and humorous.

Author: Nade_Naberrie (signed)
Date posted: 7/11/2003 6:44:23 PM
Nade_Naberrie's Comments:

Thanks everyone! I am SO thrilled to be archived, you can't even imagine! A great big hug and thank you to all of my betas and the reviewers, and also to my sister, who must have read this thing through at least twenty times. Couldn't have done it without you. :)

Last but certainly not least, I dedicate this story to my best friend, beta reader, and fellow Star Wars freak, Bobafett688. Love you to pieces!

Author: Siri Ruane
Date posted: 7/11/2003 7:47:09 PM
Siri Ruane's Comments:

Yay! It's archived! ...finally.
Once again, great story! I had real fun beta-ing it. :D

Author: ValedaKor
Date posted: 7/13/2003 8:40:32 AM
ValedaKor's Comments:

I enjoyed this when I beta-read it, and even more so with the subtle tweaking I noticed now that it's archived. Great ending especially, emphasizing the character growth. "The Bravest Jedi of All" is a prime example of a "small moment in time," producing a vignette that is a delight to read. Well done!

Author: Epiphany
Date posted: 7/13/2003 1:01:57 PM
Epiphany's Comments:

This was good, I shall definitly be keeping an eye out for your works in the future.

Author: Chewi333
Date posted: 7/14/2003 2:01:11 PM
Chewi333's Comments:

Very well written and very humourous.The scene with Yoda was great.

Author: Ryoo_Naberrie (signed)
Date posted: 7/14/2003 3:42:39 PM
Ryoo_Naberrie's Comments:

Good job big sis! I knew that this fic would go all the way. I will always be there to just push you the extra few feet. I love you SO much.

Author: Senator Leia
Date posted: 7/14/2003 10:13:24 PM
Senator Leia's Comments:

You did a wonderful job showing Obi-wan and Siri's relationship as friends. You did did a good job on showing an understanding side of Yoda. Another person you did a good job on was Adi and showing that her and Siri had a good relation ship even before they were master and Padawn. Anyway good job and keep them coming.

Author: daniel skywalker
Date posted: 7/16/2003 11:48:58 AM
daniel skywalker's Comments:

this is one hell of a story. you portrayed all the characters so well, so true to thier film counterparts. you r one heck of a talented writer. well done.

Author: Leviatha
Date posted: 7/17/2003 11:02:46 AM
Leviatha's Comments:

Awesome story! Great character development!

Author: Barissa
Date posted: 7/18/2003 6:15:24 PM
Barissa's Comments:

Ok, this is about the sweetest story ever. I loved it! It kinda stinks that Siri's character wasn't developed in the movies, but this story makes up for it. I enjoyed how it showed Obi-Wan's character too....with the snapping of the hair and all. Great Job! ~ Barissa

Author: haun solo
Date posted: 7/20/2003 6:37:56 PM
haun solo's Comments:

this story was really good.i don't know how to explain why it appealed to me, but it was great! yoda rules!!!!

Author: Destiny (signed)
Date posted: 7/21/2003 7:23:55 PM
Destiny's Comments:

I loved this!!! And apparently I'm the first one to comment, but it reminded me of a certain impish 'ape-boy' trying to prove himself to his 'brothers'... Siri parallels him remarkably. ;)

This was darling! Keep writing! :p

Author: Andy
Date posted: 7/28/2003 7:49:11 AM
Andy's Comments:

Hi from Italy! Since some weeks i save all the fan-fictions on my pc and read them quietly in the evening. I have really a lot of fun, even some are boring. This short one was one i most enjoyed. Very well written and described, it seems to be there, Yoda is very realistic!
Hoping to read some other things from you on the future. If someone wants to write me my adress is: artdaz@supereva.it

Author: Siri Tachi
Date posted: 8/9/2003 7:27:05 PM
Siri Tachi's Comments:

hey!!! great story!!! i helped beta read it the first time through. i loved it sooooo much, i loved siri and yoda in this one. obi-wan and siri are my fav. characters and i love to see stories about them!!! keep up the good work!!!
~SiRi

Author: Sandy
Date posted: 8/11/2003 9:25:19 PM
Sandy's Comments:

Your story is great! It is well thought out and well written. Congradulations on a wonderful story cous!

Author: Travis Sherry
Date posted: 11/11/2003 9:08:10 PM
Travis Sherry's Comments:

Yo this might sound stupid but, I haven't even finished this story yet and I am so stoked homie to finish it. You really need to pursue a career/switch to in a feild for writing. But just keep it real. MMFKKL!!

Author: Saber-of-Light (signed)
Date posted: 4/22/2004 1:08:47 PM
Saber-of-Light's Comments:

Awww! How precious! Dear goodness, she reminds me of me! That's a dang scary thought, but I loved it! Great work :p

Author: Jedi_Homie_G
Date posted: 5/19/2004 7:29:26 PM
Jedi_Homie_G's Comments:

I Love you Adi Gallia.....Awesome Story

Author: jabba (signed)
Date posted: 2/12/2005 10:44:20 PM
jabba's Comments:

i really like that fan-fic very well done! i hope to see more fan-fics by you soon i love young Siri stories

Author: Imag
Date posted: 4/20/2005 4:45:47 AM
Imag's Comments:

Heehee this was so cute!

Author: Rieko
Date posted: 7/7/2005 6:21:15 AM
Rieko's Comments:

That was good! yay yay yay yay yayyyyy! -_____-" forgive my bounciness. i am unnaturally bouncy after reading a good story

Author: jedi_rogue
Date posted: 9/4/2005 8:04:03 PM
jedi_rogue's Comments:

"Scaredy-shaak"... I'll have to use that one... The humor was amazingly realistic to the Jedi Temple. Keep writing! You should write something about Qui-Gon. I think you would get his personality right.

Author: Veloz (signed)
Date posted: 1/1/2006 7:24:57 PM
Veloz's Comments:

Aww this was so sweet!

I really loved this story, and i love the portrayal of Yoda and Obi Wan.

Author: Jedi Cat Kenobi (signed)
Date posted: 5/16/2006 6:57:26 PM
Jedi Cat Kenobi's Comments:

oh this was so cute!!!! I loved it!!!

Author: Padawan Aril Alanda
Date posted: 10/22/2010 7:19:20 PM
Padawan Aril Alanda's Comments: