Author: Nade_Naberrie  (signed)
Date posted: 7/15/2003 8:30:23 AM
Nade_Naberrie's Comments:

Hey, I'm the first to comment! This was a very powerful piece. Just a little moment in time, captured perfectly with almost poetic timing and word flow. And with original characters to boot!
Excellent job. Please keep writing!

Author: pencilnek
Date posted: 7/15/2003 10:26:33 AM
pencilnek's Comments:

A very nice different view of the war! I like how you brought up the orphans and widows like that, and how you made it a primitive feel, to show just how far the Empire supressed the people!

Author: HandmaidenEirtae  (signed)
Date posted: 7/15/2003 12:28:55 PM
HandmaidenEirtae's Comments:

Incredible piece, Celt. Intriguing way to show people other than soldiers fighting in the war. You have a wonderful way with words, and you painted the devestation caused by the war very well. You managed to put so much culture and feeling into the piece. The secret in her shoes was great, especially when the boys looked for the secrets following her. The last line was brilliant.
Cheers!
Tae

Author: Darth_Pepsi
Date posted: 7/15/2003 4:33:15 PM
Darth_Pepsi's Comments:

Woah...

Author: Billy Lariviere
Date posted: 7/16/2003 7:01:31 AM
Billy Lariviere's Comments:

WOW! Stories like that adds so much depth to the story. I was cold just just to read your words.

Author: Battle4Rome  (signed)
Date posted: 7/17/2003 1:53:02 PM
Battle4Rome's Comments:

Hey I'm not sure what to think, Is she working for the Evil Rebellion or the Good Empire? The summary said that she was a person 4 the Empire. I know ppl will call me names cause I don't understand, Srry.

Forever Live The Empire,
Battle4Rome

Author: Blazer  (signed)
Date posted: 7/18/2003 2:01:30 PM
Blazer's Comments:

CELT!! *hugs* I'm go glad you got it here. I knew it would accepted; it's practically flawless. You have a wonderful way with descriptions and words. Your character was so strong and believeable, and it's nice to see a fic not centered on the major characters. Excellent, brilliant job!

-Krys

Author: obaona  (signed)
Date posted: 7/19/2003 6:28:56 PM
obaona's Comments:

You truly do have a wonderful way with words, Rebekka. :) You present information so beautifully, and never cease to amaze me with your original plotlines. Who but you would think of an old woman carrying Rebel secrets in her shoes?

Inventive and well-written.

Author: Lady Padme  (signed)
Date posted: 7/20/2003 10:46:24 AM
Lady Padme's Comments:

Lovely vignette, Celt. I agree with obaona; it was very inventive. And I loved your lyrical prose. It managed to be sad and hopeful at the same time. Very enjoyable.

Congrats on getting this in!

Author: Mcily Nochi  (signed)
Date posted: 7/28/2003 5:59:09 PM
Mcily Nochi's Comments:

The language used in this piece was beautiful, and the idea completely unique and original. Very interesting, and very unlike anything else I've ever read.

Author: Flip
Date posted: 1/16/2016 2:08:04 AM
Flip's Comments:

It's great to find somoene so on the ball