Author: Mcily Nochi
(signed) Date posted: 8/11/2003 3:34:24 PM
Mcily Nochi's Comments:
This is lovely. I loved the touch about Padme not being able to sacrifice herself anymore. It never occurred to me that she might have had that choice, and that she would view giving up Luke as the selfish thing to do.
Very insightful and thought-provoking.
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Author: Bri-Alla Segion
Date posted: 8/12/2003 10:33:53 AM
Bri-Alla Segion's Comments:
EXCELLENT! EXCELENT! VERY TOUCHING AND LOVELY.
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Author: Danny
Date posted: 8/12/2003 6:51:11 PM
Danny's Comments:
I really liked this little fanfic Roo. Good job.
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Author: jedi_michele
Date posted: 8/13/2003 9:02:43 AM
jedi_michele's Comments:
its even better in the archives!
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Author: padme_sky81
Date posted: 8/13/2003 7:46:05 PM
padme_sky81's Comments:
You can feel Padme Love for Luke How much she did not want to let him go, but she knew she had no choose giveing him up was the harding thing for her to do and she had to let him go
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Author: Nade_Naberrie
(signed) Date posted: 8/14/2003 11:07:10 AM
Nade_Naberrie's Comments:
Never in my fanfic-reading life have I come close to tears in less than 3 pages. Wow. You poured so much emotion into such a short "letter." Awesome job.
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Author: Jedi Knight Safira Felan
Date posted: 8/14/2003 8:00:02 PM
Jedi Knight Safira Felan's Comments:
Great job! I really enjoyed reading this!
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Author: Qui-Gon Tim
Date posted: 8/14/2003 9:53:14 PM
Qui-Gon Tim's Comments:
Outstanding. A letter with emotions that only a parent could understand completely, yet only a mother could compose with such gut-wrenching authenticity.
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Author: Chad Moore
Date posted: 8/15/2003 10:08:17 AM
Chad Moore's Comments:
Beautiful and heart wrenching. I absolutely loved Padme's brilliant letter. Excellent writing!
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Author: Senator Leia
Date posted: 8/15/2003 9:01:00 PM
Senator Leia's Comments:
A beautiful letter from Padme I loved it. I enjoyed it very much. Keep them coming.
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Author: princeskw
Date posted: 8/16/2003 10:27:50 AM
princeskw's Comments:
Awesome, a great touch, I almost can fill the tears in padme´s face, and the air, soft but tense in her bedromm! Excelent job.. I believe tha GL himself will aplause it
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Author: Larena_Jade
Date posted: 8/16/2003 2:17:04 PM
Larena_Jade's Comments:
I like your story a lot. I like how you made it so Padme DIDN'T know Anakin was Darth Vader now, that Obi-won told her as well that he was dead.
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Author: ktbug5384
Date posted: 8/16/2003 3:04:02 PM
ktbug5384's Comments:
Wow! GL should read this! That was very pretty. The best fan fic I've read yet. Awesome, got a web page that you have more?!
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Author: Mara14
Date posted: 8/16/2003 5:05:51 PM
Mara14's Comments:
Very Very touching. I liked it when you added the name Padme Skywalker, Not very many people put her Married name in Fan Fiction. I hope you write more in the future.
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Author: Joanna Xux
Date posted: 8/16/2003 7:38:39 PM
Joanna Xux's Comments:
very good, and very touching, interesting perspective. I like the faith she has that she will see Luke again. :0)
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Author: morwenestela14
Date posted: 8/19/2003 6:26:00 AM
morwenestela14's Comments:
Wow! Great job. I like it even better now then I did when I beta-read it. Keep up the good work!
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Author: viggosgirl760
Date posted: 8/20/2003 9:05:25 AM
viggosgirl760's Comments:
this storyis was soo sad!
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Author: Aeryn
(signed) Date posted: 8/23/2003 8:13:52 PM
Aeryn's Comments:
Short and still very powerful - if it had been much longer the waterworks would definitely have been going. ;) Beautiful job.
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Author: Jedi Trace
(signed) Date posted: 8/26/2003 11:36:06 AM
Jedi Trace's Comments:
Oh wow. I'd never thought of it like that before....that she had planned to come back for him. Very touching. Great job!! :)
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Author: Julie
Date posted: 8/26/2003 7:47:31 PM
Julie's Comments:
I never thought I'd wish something that was short would be longer....a touching letter....in the words of a beloved if much criticized jedi, "good job"
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Author: MJSLSBS
Date posted: 8/27/2003 7:17:53 PM
MJSLSBS's Comments:
So touching. I never really thought about this topic before how Padme wrote a letter to him. It was a great story. I liked it how you signed it Padme Skywalker. Keep writing
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Author: Fett Boy
(signed) Date posted: 9/7/2003 6:27:55 AM
Fett Boy's Comments:
Very touching. I could hear Padme's sweet, soft, sorrowful voice as I read on. That's how a good story is made. A+
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Author: JediMasterMariana
Date posted: 9/9/2003 2:24:21 PM
JediMasterMariana's Comments:
I LOVED IT!That Padmé acttually wrote a letter to Luke.It almost made me cry.
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Author: Nameloc Rillem
Date posted: 9/12/2003 8:13:35 AM
Nameloc Rillem's Comments:
Wow! Great job!
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Author: Vadooku
Date posted: 9/20/2003 6:53:06 PM
Vadooku's Comments:
I really enjoyed this. What I found to be the most gut-wrenching part was the fact that we know Padme will never see Luke again. It is a very sad thing. Very interesting....good job!
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Author: Mark Jade
Date posted: 1/13/2004 9:26:51 PM
Mark Jade's Comments:
Great Job....
I can almost hear Natalie Portman's voice while I was reading this. A sad tone to her voice... with a slight touch of hope as well.
Awesome
Mark J
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Author: Little girl sith
(signed) Date posted: 4/10/2004 4:53:04 PM
Little girl sith's Comments:
i thought this was sad, but i loved it. u portray Padme so well.
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Author: Beth
Date posted: 10/22/2004 1:26:04 PM
Beth's Comments:
Yeah, that story really gets me. I just can't believe that after they'd married he'd betraid her like that...
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Author: VaderLVR64
(signed) Date posted: 11/2/2004 7:03:28 PM
VaderLVR64's Comments:
Incredibly well done! Lovely and poignant. I expect nothing less from you, though!
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