Author: Jack90Cool
Date posted: 9/2/2003 5:33:17 AM
Jack90Cool's Comments:

Yay! Im first to comment! First of all, Great Story!! I love the way u think. Amazing idea with how Luke doesnt even recognize her! You r obviously a very talented writer. I hope to see more work from u soon!

Author: Jainon83
Date posted: 9/2/2003 1:38:38 PM
Jainon83's Comments:

I think it is neat how they all ended up in the same place but nothing came of it.

Author: joy_noel
Date posted: 9/2/2003 1:54:28 PM
joy_noel's Comments:

This was a good story about what could have happened to Callista. It was sad, but good. Congrats on getting archived!

Author: Jedi-2B  (signed)
Date posted: 9/3/2003 9:28:33 AM
Jedi-2B's Comments:

Wonderful introspection into one possibility of what became of Callista. I think it was best that Luke and Mara didn't recognize her. There would've been too much guilt felt on their parts otherwise, especially by Luke.

Author: NarundiJedi
Date posted: 9/4/2003 1:36:04 PM
NarundiJedi's Comments:

Ahhhhhh!!!! :D It got in! Congrats!!!

You already know how much I love this, but I'll just say it again - I LOVE IT! :)

Congrats on your first archived fic! :D

Author: Jedi Knight Safira Felan
Date posted: 9/4/2003 3:40:04 PM
Jedi Knight Safira Felan's Comments:

Great fanfic! Really well written! It was so sad, but I can see how that could happen. Good job! I look forward to reading more of your fanfics!

Author: Naboos_Princess  (signed)
Date posted: 9/5/2003 12:43:16 AM
Naboos_Princess's Comments:

This is a lovely fic, LianaMara. I don't generally like Callista, but this story was so beautiful that I found myself changing my opinion about her. Good job!

Author: vader-incarnate
Date posted: 9/5/2003 1:24:21 AM
vader-incarnate's Comments:

Beautiful extended metaphor, and lovely vision of Callista. :)

Author: Bant428  (signed)
Date posted: 9/8/2003 6:03:13 PM
Bant428's Comments:

I love Callista (ok now I'm just inviting flames from Mara Jaders!) and this is an excellent characterization of her. Awww, I'm gonna cry ... =). Just one thing: Mara's a redhead, not a brunette ;)

Author: LianaMara  (signed)
Date posted: 9/9/2003 6:00:24 AM
LianaMara's Comments:

Wow, I can't believe I didn't leave this earlier. ;)

First of all, I'd like to thank everyone who left comments on this vig; your feedback is very much appreciated.

And now, thank you to my two main betas, obaona and JediDajuan. You guys helped a lot, and oba, thanks for reading through ALL of my drafts and always being so sweet. I'd also like to thank my TFN betas (TenelKaJedi, and the others I can't remember at this time): you gals are great.

And double thanks to oba, for her wonderful cover art; it's so beautiful, and the author's name is a good idea. ;)

This story was written as a chance for me to explore some possiblem ideas into Callista's future, and I hope everyone enjoyed it. :)

Author: Darth_Pepsi
Date posted: 9/12/2003 7:01:53 PM
Darth_Pepsi's Comments:

Geeze... you're making me like Callista... ACH!!!!
Great story, ;-)

Author: Meredith
Date posted: 10/4/2003 3:21:55 PM
Meredith's Comments:

Wow. Yay for Liana! You should join up with John and me in our literary magazine beginnings... we got Dixon to sponsor!!

Author: Jedi of Imladris  (signed)
Date posted: 10/20/2004 8:15:48 PM
Jedi of Imladris's Comments:

This is a lovely and very touching piece. I truly enjoyed reading it. The analogies and references to the ocean and water were delightful and well handled. Though I have never really liked Callista, this fic made me feel a bit more empathetic towards her and her situation. Great job!

Author: Indy
Date posted: 3/22/2009 8:50:43 PM
Indy's Comments:

Thanks for a sad, yet heartwarming story.

Author: benskywalker22
Date posted: 12/13/2009 7:31:29 AM
benskywalker22's Comments:

I love this story, keep writing please

Author: Burchard
Date posted: 9/3/2011 8:34:31 PM
Burchard's Comments:

This arctile is a home run, pure and simple!

Author: Kayden
Date posted: 4/24/2016 8:21:19 PM
Kayden's Comments:

Good job mankig it appear easy.