Author: SoloGirl59
Date posted: 12/30/2003 6:30:32 PM
SoloGirl59's Comments:

Aww! Very very cute :-) I love Anakin in this pre-dark phase, he's adorable! You did a good job of carrying the narrative through Sola's eyes, it's a nice peek into Padme's family life. Great job with this!

Author: StarManaiye
Date posted: 12/31/2003 7:48:51 AM
StarManaiye's Comments:

me like.

Author: bobill
Date posted: 12/31/2003 8:54:18 AM
bobill's Comments:

Hey, it got archived! Congratulations! I always liked how Anakin didn't even know how to make juice. Can't wait to see more of your work here!

Author: Senator Leia
Date posted: 12/31/2003 11:41:02 AM
Senator Leia's Comments:

Good job, I liked it alot.

Author: Jedi_Onion14  (signed)
Date posted: 12/31/2003 5:09:46 PM
Jedi_Onion14's Comments:

Hey its me!(Elf-formally-known-as-legolas) from fanfiction.net. I'm really happy that you posted you story finally on Fanforce.net. I Think your story really deserves to be here beacause it is so good and its a bit harder to get stuff posted here then in fanfiction.net. good job again and keep up the work!

Author: Greenleaf from LakeRetreat
Date posted: 1/1/2004 3:08:07 AM
Greenleaf from LakeRetreat's Comments:

Very interesting!!

Author: nyletak
Date posted: 1/1/2004 7:31:29 PM
nyletak's Comments:

At first when I read the summary I didn't think much of it, however I was bored out of my mind so I clicked on it anyway. I absolutely and positively loved it!! It adds new characteristics to the characters we never see in the movie (even in the deleted scenes) and shows us how human Padme can be, feeling threaten by Sola's interactions with Anakin. I hope you continue to write more work hence I would be bored less often LOL!! :)

Author: Andrea Jade  (signed)
Date posted: 1/2/2004 7:25:51 AM
Andrea Jade's Comments:

Great family setting. The touch of sisterly competition was super. Good story.

Author: Nade_Naberrie  (signed)
Date posted: 1/2/2004 1:56:00 PM
Nade_Naberrie's Comments:

Thank you so much for this story! I only wish there were more fanfictions like this, centering around the Naberrie family. The bit with Padme was too funny... please write more!

Author: geo3
Date posted: 1/8/2004 7:52:11 AM
geo3's Comments:

Cute? I wouldn't call this story cute. It's brilliant, actually - original, subtle, clever, supremely well-observed, and flawlessly written. I agree that the summary doesn't do it justice, but that has nothing to do with the many joys of the story.

I can't decide whether I'm more enchanted by the perfect, original details of daily life and rituals in the Naberrie family, with the stunning and memorable characterizations of Anakin, Sola, and Padme, or with the number of themes and topics from the film you manage to touch on accurately and deftly in a single short story. It's so incredibly well done!

Grandmother Winama's dresses, eh? Well, we all know what happened with that...

Beautiful. Just beautiful.

Author: JediPug1  (signed)
Date posted: 1/18/2004 10:32:32 AM
JediPug1's Comments:

Very nice story! I loved Padme's poorly veiled jealousy!

Author: Andrew
Date posted: 6/26/2004 7:49:49 PM
Andrew's Comments:

This is Cool, you know I happen to Love Cute Stories like this one. Good Job.

Author: Bloodraven77  (signed)
Date posted: 7/24/2005 5:35:37 PM
Bloodraven77's Comments:

oh this was so endearing! I love the little games played to draw Padme and Anakin together and the priceless reaction it brought!!!

Author: tinuviel
Date posted: 4/27/2006 12:43:45 PM
tinuviel's Comments:

I like it. I had just watched the movie a few days before i read this and had been wondering why Padme was wearing all those sexy dresses :-P

Author: Azure_Angel
Date posted: 8/24/2006 12:23:33 PM
Azure_Angel's Comments:

I loved it, it was truely wonderful, we got to see Anakin naturaly flirtatious side, and a side of Padme we havent seen yet, jealousy.
Truely well done.

Author: Azure_Angel
Date posted: 8/24/2006 12:23:48 PM
Azure_Angel's Comments:

I loved it, it was truely wonderful, we got to see Anakin naturaly flirtatious side, and a side of Padme we havent seen yet, jealousy.
Truely well done.