Author: Aralna  (signed)
Date posted: 5/14/2001 7:04:07 PM
Aralna's Comments:

I just wanted to say that as soon as I saw this here, a broad grin appeared on my face. :D

This is a great story, and I loved seeing it from the battle droid's POV. It was well written, and captured my attention instantly. :)

Author: ami-padme  (signed)
Date posted: 5/18/2001 1:19:59 PM
ami-padme's Comments:

This is an interesting concept...definitely not what you usually see in most fics. Nice job. :)

Author: Tracken Hit
Date posted: 5/21/2001 8:06:59 PM
Tracken Hit's Comments:

very good and extremely creative. A few questions like how he was even possible of having thought still linger afterwards, but still very refreashing to read something orginal. But who cares about that, this was very good.

Author: Darth Muis
Date posted: 5/27/2001 2:56:26 AM
Darth Muis's Comments:

I remember reading this fic a long time ago, when it was posted at FanFic board of the Jedi Council message boards. I instantly loved it! Great concept for a fic! And very well written!

Author: Mac Lyn
Date posted: 5/27/2001 2:59:23 AM
Mac Lyn's Comments:

nice :)

Author: Bubba
Date posted: 5/27/2001 3:16:08 PM
Bubba's Comments:

I'm surprised that the same dude who brought us those excellent Jedi Knight levels was a great writer as well. Nice description and flow. This is a story that should--and has--been told.

Author: Zim
Date posted: 6/7/2001 5:34:55 AM
Zim's Comments:

At the end I had to hold my tears. Fantastic!

Zim

Author: K
Date posted: 6/14/2001 8:43:30 PM
K's Comments:

GREAT!I LOVE IT!:)

Author: Lancer635
Date posted: 6/25/2001 12:36:47 PM
Lancer635's Comments:

Unlike others i didn't think this story was excellent

Author: Alli-Wan
Date posted: 7/7/2001 7:29:53 PM
Alli-Wan's Comments:

Very well written. The flashes of memory interspersed with commands were most interesting. In a way, it reminded me a bit of how Robo-cop was done, with memories of 'life' interspersed into the present.

In a strange coicidence, Elton John's "Circle of Life" came on the radio while I was reading this.

I enjoyed the twist at the end, where the droid remembers the last battle, and the impressions of the little girl; it was almost a divine salvation. Considering how much intelligence is given to the battle droids, at least the commander droids, it is not surprising that deeper feelings would crop up more than once, and the TF would have the need to erase the memory banks so often.

Excellent tale. Another great one for the Fanfic universe!

--AWK

Author: Z95headhuntertc
Date posted: 7/8/2001 7:46:23 AM
Z95headhuntertc's Comments:

The story makes you think and brings the starwars world alive. Brought me to tears!!

Author: Rori Firehawk
Date posted: 7/11/2001 4:55:35 PM
Rori Firehawk's Comments:

Certainly thought-provoking... a rather interesting premise, to be sure. Ah, what the hey, I'll dispense with the formal commentary! I liked it!!!

Author: ~Becky~
Date posted: 7/15/2001 10:37:28 PM
~Becky~'s Comments:

Well, that's something I wouldn't have thought of in a million years....great idea! (and story of course :)

Author: The Great Yoda  (signed)
Date posted: 7/29/2001 1:12:43 AM
The Great Yoda's Comments:

Enjoy this story I did. Fell it could have been better I do. We did not know the droid well enough to feel connected to him. Good the idea is however.

Author: Alderaan  (signed)
Date posted: 8/13/2001 10:58:15 AM
Alderaan's Comments:

Great! Very original.

Just one nagging detail- how'd it get a G rating?

Author: DroidReader
Date posted: 8/22/2001 7:22:12 AM
DroidReader's Comments:

Hey man, good story, I liked how he wasnt all ruthless and I had always wondered if battle droids were strong, and that part with the Villager in Arul was very informative.

Make a sequel!

One about a destroyer droid!

Author: X-Imperial
Date posted: 8/22/2001 8:44:20 PM
X-Imperial's Comments:

Very good, touched something inside me.
I found it particularly interesting since I'm in the process of making a similar story involving a stormtrooper. Not bad, not bad at all.

Cheers.

Author: somebody
Date posted: 9/2/2001 2:56:24 PM
somebody's Comments:

very interesting. reminds me of the way C3PO begins to act in the books.

Author: Mcily Nochi  (signed)
Date posted: 9/3/2001 3:38:10 PM
Mcily Nochi's Comments:

Hmmm. Certainly an interesting concept. I thought the story was told well, though it could have used some work, and I noticed a few nit-picky things that I would have liked to see beta-readers pick up on.
Very good, though.

Author: Dy-Lin-Wolfe
Date posted: 6/26/2002 6:06:53 PM
Dy-Lin-Wolfe's Comments:

Great Story!!!!!
Made me cry,Especially when he died and thought about the little woman touching him.

Author: Saponaria
Date posted: 9/10/2002 1:08:27 PM
Saponaria's Comments:

Absolutely sbashing! (do, It's dot a typo. I have to hold by dose to keep frob cryig.) *sniffs* A very lovely little tidbit of insight into a battle droid!

Author: TKeira_Lea  (signed)
Date posted: 9/14/2005 7:39:53 AM
TKeira_Lea's Comments:

Sometimes I like to hit the Random Fiction button. I would have never found this otherwise. What an original idea, and a fun read.

Author: Dustin
Date posted: 7/5/2006 11:01:43 AM
Dustin's Comments:

This story is unexpectedly compelling and a unique idea.

Author: THE_LUKE_SLAYER
Date posted: 9/16/2006 7:20:40 PM
THE_LUKE_SLAYER's Comments:

it was a nice fealing to see(you know what i meen) a drioid fight for a noble couse

Author: DarthIshtar  (signed)
Date posted: 1/15/2007 12:25:41 PM
DarthIshtar's Comments:

I loved the strangely real emotionality that you accomplished with computational input and visual cues. Well done!