Author: BOBtheJEDI
Date posted: 5/16/2001 9:08:47 AM
BOBtheJEDI's Comments:

This was such a good story! I love it. I read it the first time on fanfix.com, and I'm very glad to see it here. The idea that Princess Leia and Vader met before really appeals to me. It makes the scene in A New Hope more meaningful when Leia and Vader talk in the corridor before she is forced away. Thanks for this great story, and continue writing!

Author: Belle Bayard  (signed)
Date posted: 5/18/2001 11:18:34 AM
Belle Bayard's Comments:

Nicely done. JediGaladriel/FernWithy had another take on Vader and Leia, but this one has a great deal of merit as well. Loved Bail Organa's panic in the city when he sees Vader with his daughter (hehehe... [b]whose[/b] daughter. Big grin on this reader's face!

Author: Obi's Chick
Date posted: 5/19/2001 6:42:32 AM
Obi's Chick's Comments:

I loved it!!
Bail Organa's panic and then amusment where great, as was Leia's attitude. Continue to write!

Author: Sreya
Date posted: 6/14/2001 11:19:32 AM
Sreya's Comments:

Wow, I can't believe so many people have read this story. Over 450 hits! However, I'm disappointed that so few have left a comment. Please leave something, even if it's just a few words. (Especially if you're giving me a low rating!) For those of you who have commented, thank you, they are well appreciated.
Happy reading to everyone!
~~Sreya

Author: Mor'hia Corte'
Date posted: 6/21/2001 6:31:41 PM
Mor'hia Corte''s Comments:

I have just one thing to say about this movie. It was incredible! I loved it! Amazing! Stupendous! Incredible! Astounding! Wait a minute, that was six things. Ahh well, it was great.

Author: Anaka  (signed)
Date posted: 6/27/2001 2:36:19 PM
Anaka's Comments:

Great Work! This story is wonderful. I will tell everyone I know about it!

Author: somebody
Date posted: 9/3/2001 9:52:10 AM
somebody's Comments:

Ironic and amusing. I like it.

Author: Mcily Nochi  (signed)
Date posted: 9/3/2001 3:46:11 PM
Mcily Nochi's Comments:

Very, very well done. Not only was it a good idea, but the story was well executed (no pun intended :) and the characters were wonderful. I could see Leia's personality in it, and I loved how Bail Organa was alarmed to see Vader talking to her. I can just hear what he thought Vader was saying (i.e., "Leia, I m your father . . .").
Keep up the good work!

Author: Frank Natera
Date posted: 10/11/2001 3:03:16 PM
Frank Natera's Comments:

Excellent!
Wel written. It is both light and dense at the same time, great characterization. Any film director should find this tale a very good excuse to make a short film. It could deliver some great performances out of actors and some dramatic camera shots. I just Know it. Keep up the good work!

Author: Rogue 8  (signed)
Date posted: 11/11/2001 4:31:05 PM
Rogue 8's Comments:

good personalaties, good story.

Author: mara
Date posted: 12/18/2001 4:27:31 AM
mara's Comments:

how spooky!! when i read it i thought leia would meet palpantine but she met her real father. i can imaging why bail organa had a near heart attack if vader knew the truth bail and probably leia too would have been daed in a second

Author: LLL  (signed)
Date posted: 1/10/2002 9:24:31 PM
LLL's Comments:

Good grief, what is WITH you guys??? I thought this was a very good little story ... certainly didn't deserve a *6.3* .

Nice job!

Author: BlueTuna
Date posted: 2/1/2002 5:03:08 PM
BlueTuna's Comments:

Wonderful story. Enjoyed it very much.

Author: Zahn_Matrix  (signed)
Date posted: 2/20/2002 1:15:30 PM
Zahn_Matrix's Comments:

I think the author captured Leia's essence perfectly. It was very easy to 'see' her at fourteen. I admit a moment of shameful surprise. I thought the secret guest was going to be Tarkin.

A fun read.

Author: Kenya Starflight
Date posted: 2/22/2002 8:12:52 AM
Kenya Starflight's Comments:

Wow, wow, and wow! What else is there to say? Wow again! Love it!

Author: Lianna C.
Date posted: 2/23/2002 1:07:54 PM
Lianna C.'s Comments:

This was really good. I like the idea they had met before. Heaps good.
Lianna C.

Author: Skyla Doragono  (signed)
Date posted: 2/25/2002 10:51:26 AM
Skyla Doragono's Comments:

I really like this story. I've never seen this kind of take on when Leia first meets Vader before. Keep up the good work. :)

Author: Kitt327
Date posted: 2/26/2002 4:15:14 PM
Kitt327's Comments:

Great job. This was a well-written short, and your characterisations were very good.

Author: Zal Taur
Date posted: 3/5/2002 9:54:21 PM
Zal Taur's Comments:

Very interesting scenerio. I liked it. I would have liked to a less restrained Vader. I imagine the Dark Lord would have great difficulty attending a formal diplomatic function.

Well writen.

Author: lockhart
Date posted: 3/12/2002 6:47:40 PM
lockhart's Comments:

good story

Author: Bria  (signed)
Date posted: 3/16/2002 12:31:19 AM
Bria's Comments:

Very good. Bail's panic was cute. :)

Author: Viari Skywalker  (signed)
Date posted: 5/24/2002 6:36:36 PM
Viari Skywalker's Comments:

Great story! I don't understand why the rating is so low. I thought it was excellent! I love how Vader and Leia meet! It's very believable. Great job!

Author: dc boy
Date posted: 6/10/2002 9:18:24 AM
dc boy's Comments:

good story, but i had always thought vader didn't know of leah being his daughter till he fought luke on the death star... o well nice concept, :)

Author: Sabbrielle
Date posted: 6/14/2002 1:12:37 AM
Sabbrielle's Comments:

This is a really cute, well-written story. I'm rather intrigued by the fics that explore the pre-trilogy relationship between Leia and--it's so strange to call my one true love "Vader"--the Dark Anakin. Also, everyone's in-character, which is always good. Great job :)

Author: Anya_Skywalker
Date posted: 6/25/2002 3:44:51 PM
Anya_Skywalker's Comments:

I wasn't going to leave a comment, but as I read through the rest I noticed Sreya had said something on that matter, so I re-thought my initial idea.

I really don't know how to comment, so I'll just say that I enjoyed this story very much. It's a heart warming scene, at least to me, and like others have mentioned before, the intereactions are wonderfully made.

I give my most sincere praise to this lovely piece of fiction.

Author: Destiny
Date posted: 1/16/2003 9:14:05 PM
Destiny's Comments:

I almost didn't read this story because it recieved such a low rating - I don't know why THAT is! It was a wonderful story! I agree with Sabbrielle - I can't imagine Ani - er, VADER - being so collected in a room full of boring stiffs. They must have irritated him with their petty chatter, and he isn't known for his self-restraint. I loved how the crowd parted for him - very realistic! :p

Author: Fish
Date posted: 4/1/2003 5:25:19 PM
Fish's Comments:

interesting! I liked how you wrote the conversation between Vader and Leia...however I wished it were a little longer. I rated it a 9 so keep up the good work!

Author: angel_gidget
Date posted: 4/24/2004 4:46:04 AM
angel_gidget's Comments:

"No, dearest, he hasn't had much experience with adolescents." I found that rather funny. Filled with a lovely irony, it's a cute little fic.

Author: Jedi of Imladris  (signed)
Date posted: 9/8/2004 12:30:30 PM
Jedi of Imladris's Comments:

Great story! I really enjoyed reading it. I also really liked the cover art--the drawing was beautiful. Leia was wonderfully done--I could really see her saying and doing what she did.
Great job!

Author: soccerfanatic  (signed)
Date posted: 11/12/2004 6:22:00 PM
soccerfanatic's Comments:

Wow, great job! I really enjoyed reading it. I love fanfiction about Leia and Darth Vader. The cover art is brillant too!

Author: SithLord13
Date posted: 7/8/2005 10:00:54 PM
SithLord13's Comments:

Great! That's the one word that comes to mind.

Author: eowyn
Date posted: 1/23/2006 11:02:19 AM
eowyn's Comments:

GREAT ! Even in the movies, there was "something" going on between Leia & Vader( a bit like Lecter & Starling). I could imagine people spreading rumours he´s in love with her...
When Luke tells Leia the truth she answers:"Somehow I´´ve always known..."
I think Vader knew too...

Author: Skywalking
Date posted: 7/14/2007 10:04:58 PM
Skywalking's Comments:

I was linked here today via a fanfiction recomendation community and I really enjoyed this. Such lovely characterizations!

Author: BetaReject
Date posted: 4/8/2008 6:25:15 PM
BetaReject's Comments:

This was an incredibly lovely piece of work. I truly enjoyed the subtle and yet beautiful interaction between Lord Vader and his daughter. Even though neither is aware of the other you can see the connection between them, they are on the same wavelength so to speak in that moment.