Author: Herman Snerd
(signed) Date posted: 5/17/2004 9:01:15 PM
Herman Snerd's Comments:
I really enjoyed the subtle humor of this story. I couldn't help but laugh as Trinn kept inadvertently crossing paths with Anakin and Obi-Wan during his flight through Coruscant.
I guess now I know whose speeder that was that Anakin borrowed that night.
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Author: Stormtrooper_Shrink
(signed) Date posted: 5/18/2004 12:26:18 AM
Stormtrooper_Shrink's Comments:
It *is* a great story. I'd like to make an apology to Nevarion for not beta-ing it properly. But I'm sincerely glad that it was archived. Well done, Nev!
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Author: MutantJediBouer
(signed) Date posted: 5/23/2004 5:29:23 PM
MutantJediBouer's Comments:
I'm so glad this got archived, it was excellent. A pleasure to beta, absolutely. I loved the sarcasm here, and the constant run-ins with Obi-Wan. It was great.
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Author: SpawnOfThrawn
Date posted: 5/26/2004 9:35:35 AM
SpawnOfThrawn's Comments:
Very nice. Maybe I'm just dense, but who was the jedi in the Train Station? Anyways, awesome story.
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Author: Nevarion
(signed) Date posted: 5/26/2004 2:00:26 PM
Nevarion's Comments:
SpawnOfThrawn --- To answer your question, we'll never know who the Jedi was. But, it doesn't really matter, since Trinn believes that all Jedi are "faceless and nameless enforcers who messed with his life." And, the ambiguity contributes to Trinn's mistaken identification of Obi-Wan Kenobi at the end. I'm glad you enjoyed the story - thanks for the positive comments!
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Author: Driekan
Date posted: 5/26/2004 6:27:40 PM
Driekan's Comments:
Simply brilliant... I just cant find any other way to describe it... Congratz
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Author: Darthishtar
Date posted: 4/27/2005 8:33:12 PM
Darthishtar's Comments:
This was pretty darn fantastic. Great explanation of the speeder, great action and 'battle' logic.
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Author: Sidi
Date posted: 9/19/2007 10:31:29 AM
Sidi's Comments:
Oh, this was so adorably cute! I hate Jedi too! Good job!
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