Author: Herman Snerd  (signed)
Date posted: 6/7/2004 9:26:33 PM
Herman Snerd's Comments:

A very enjoyable read. I must admit I selfishly wish this story was longer just so my enjoyment at reading it could last that much longer. :)

Author: VaderLVR64  (signed)
Date posted: 6/8/2004 7:24:04 AM
VaderLVR64's Comments:

Very beautifully written. You did a wonderful job of capturing the emotions of a mature man looking back on his life, the mistakes and the joys. Bravo!

Author: Jedi-2B  (signed)
Date posted: 6/8/2004 3:09:53 PM
Jedi-2B's Comments:

A wonderful introspection of Luke's that sounded very much in-character for him. Great job! I imagine he would also wonder if he will do as well raising his own son.

Author: missouritwist
Date posted: 6/8/2004 3:11:42 PM
missouritwist's Comments:

skillfully wrought with emotions with which nearly every reader may somehow find a relation to their own life!

Author: MJSLSBS  (signed)
Date posted: 6/14/2004 7:10:11 PM
MJSLSBS's Comments:

god that really emotional. i loved it. keep up the goood work! it reminds me of a sotry i'm writing at the moment on the smae topic except yours is much more better than mine.

Author: -AE-  (signed)
Date posted: 6/14/2004 8:35:18 PM
-AE-'s Comments:

Very nice expression of the relationship between Owen, Beru, and Luke. I really enjoyed the suttle touch of love and playfulness that came with the Bantha game.

Author: luke on endor  (signed)
Date posted: 6/21/2004 4:16:39 PM
luke on endor's Comments:

very cool! nice how you show what luke is thinking!
keep on writin.

p.s. wasnt there a line in a song that went like:
"the better part o' me"

Author: Vicu Bro'lya
Date posted: 1/11/2005 5:23:24 PM
Vicu Bro'lya's Comments:

I'm finding these introspecitive narrations to be some of the best fanfic, they don't specualte or clutter consinuity, they give the heros and villians of star wars even more depth.

This story did that in the perfect way.

Author: Ki-Aaron-Mundi  (signed)
Date posted: 8/21/2011 4:01:13 PM
Ki-Aaron-Mundi's Comments:

Nice job portraying the various conflicting emotions with which Luke no doubt remembers his aunt and uncle.