Author: Herman Snerd  (signed)
Date posted: 8/31/2004 12:09:14 PM
Herman Snerd's Comments:

Once again, I'm impressed with your ability to create interesting original characters.

Don't think I didn't notice the quick references to "Office Space" and "Clerks." ;)

Author: Nevarion  (signed)
Date posted: 9/1/2004 12:51:18 PM
Nevarion's Comments:

I agree with Herman Snerd - the references to real life (at least for those of us stuck in the boring *real* universe) kept the story bouncing right along! Good characters, good twist at the end.

Author: Jedi of Imladris  (signed)
Date posted: 9/2/2004 3:09:30 PM
Jedi of Imladris's Comments:

Very interesting. I enjoyed reading the story, the characters were well developed as was the story line. Great job.

Author: MJSLSBS
Date posted: 9/7/2004 6:28:16 PM
MJSLSBS's Comments:

This is really good. I'm glad I beta read it.

Author: The Other One
Date posted: 9/14/2004 9:27:36 AM
The Other One's Comments:

Very good! That was well written, and it made me grin quite a few times...

I didn't quite get the ending though

Author: Lokia-Jedi Knight
Date posted: 12/12/2004 11:10:24 AM
Lokia-Jedi Knight's Comments:

That kind of language isn't allowed.

MariahJade2

Author: Tylec
Date posted: 5/12/2005 12:35:32 PM
Tylec's Comments:

The mystery plot requires constant attention to follow along, but the main character is a loveable and sympathetic guy.
But is he real at all? There's a story-within-story here, but is Walthern himself just a creation of Hagall vin Yim, an author with a penchant for self-advertisement in his stories?
Really enjoyed the read.

Author: Theobroma
Date posted: 9/10/2006 4:59:00 PM
Theobroma's Comments:

Have you ever seen the movie The Secret Life of Walter Mitty? If not, you should....

Author: Darth Skuldren
Date posted: 4/19/2007 8:04:56 PM
Darth Skuldren's Comments:

Delightful read. Light and humorous. A real break from the typical Star Wars novels. Quite a few good laughs mixed in with a wonderful weave of reality and fiction. Good work!

Author: Writernoob12
Date posted: 7/3/2008 7:26:11 AM
Writernoob12's Comments:

I thought this was an amusing story. The writing outside of heath's was much better, I think, and it was fairly fun to read. A good story.