Author: pat
Date posted: 8/9/2004 9:10:45 PM
pat's Comments:

that was really well done it showed the part of Anakin that Luke brought out showed that no matter how much he deny it it was there just like he denyed the fact the obi-wans lightsaber ment something to him

Author: RogueJedi
Date posted: 8/9/2004 9:37:18 PM
RogueJedi's Comments:

WOW......Well done, this is the first time ive written a comment, but congrats, its really good!!! Well written!

Author: Elf
Date posted: 8/10/2004 9:08:09 AM
Elf's Comments:

Really well written. I like the notion that Vader was "rethinking his choices" before ROTJ and his fight with Luke.

Excellent story.

Author: nohopeop
Date posted: 8/10/2004 12:57:34 PM
nohopeop's Comments:

congratulations on getting archived!

great job on the story!

Author: Vivian
Date posted: 8/11/2004 6:31:37 PM
Vivian's Comments:

hi solojones? do u remember me? i guess not :) Anyway, im glad to see ur next fic up. U know about Obi Wan caring for Anakin was so beautiful... I was srsli crying, and I have this major exam tomorrow! LOL!!! But hey, it was beautiful. Congrats!

Author: bobill  (signed)
Date posted: 8/12/2004 8:13:28 AM
bobill's Comments:

Hey, it's archived! Congratulations, solojones!

Author: starwarspaintballer  (signed)
Date posted: 8/12/2004 7:33:45 PM
starwarspaintballer's Comments:

Wow. Very well written. Congrats on getting it archived. Yes, "just" a trophy.

Author: solojones  (signed)
Date posted: 8/13/2004 12:43:50 AM
solojones's Comments:

Thank you so much to everyone who's read and especially to those who have been kind enough to leave comments so far. This story was issued to me as a challenge by my friend spiritgurl, so I have to thank her for the inspiration. I also have to thank my betas for their help in cutting the fat and really helping the story along. Finally I just want to thank God for everything, especially whatever talents he's given me.

Author: ATeNaMent
Date posted: 8/13/2004 10:18:44 AM
ATeNaMent's Comments:

This piece blew me away with its tapestries of words. Every sentence, every phrase, was like a music, coursing through my eyes. Lives up to my highest expectations, and reaches the depth and realness of "In Another's Eyes". Thank you for five minutes with the Chosen One.



ATeNaMent

Author: solojones  (signed)
Date posted: 8/13/2004 10:23:41 AM
solojones's Comments:

Thank you so much to everyone who's read and especially to those who have been kind enough to leave comments so far. This story was issued to me as a challenge by my friend spiritgurl, so I have to thank her for the inspiration. I also have to thank my betas for their help in cutting the fat and really helping the story along. Finally I just want to thank God for everything, especially whatever talents he's given me.

Author: Daniel Jacques
Date posted: 8/13/2004 3:59:53 PM
Daniel Jacques's Comments:

This story was great, It showed that Anakin is not only physicly scarred, but also mentaly. I rate it a 10 out of 10

Author: Nade_Naberrie  (signed)
Date posted: 8/14/2004 12:19:56 PM
Nade_Naberrie's Comments:

What a beautiful piece! Quite honestly, it's one of the best I've seen on this site. Congratulations, and thanks for sharing it with us.

Author: Andrea Jade
Date posted: 8/16/2004 8:53:59 AM
Andrea Jade's Comments:

Great job. That inner wall is starting to crumble just a little. Wonderful imagery recalling his younger days and the commitment that was made and kept.

Author: Shorty
Date posted: 8/19/2004 4:28:40 PM
Shorty's Comments:

It's just brilliant! I love this story, really well done!

Author: Darth Haem
Date posted: 8/22/2004 1:53:26 PM
Darth Haem's Comments:

Very good. I really enjoyed that short story, hope you write some more, mabee Vaders thoughts before & during his duel with Luke on Cloud city? just a thought. if u do please email me on . First rate story! Well done
ccsinclaire@aol.com

Author: bearded yoda
Date posted: 8/28/2004 1:56:40 PM
bearded yoda's Comments:

great story! It really showed us that Vader did have a piece of him that was Anakin Skywalker...good job

Author: River Hobbit
Date posted: 9/16/2004 6:57:12 PM
River Hobbit's Comments:

Wow. I... I don't know what to say! You've taken my breath away with such a wonderful piece. Wow. I don't think I had dry eyes by the end of it, but now that I think about it, I'm sure that Vader would have kept the lightsaber as a memoir, like he would with all other lightsabers. 'A Trophy, Nothing More'. Fitting name for a well written piece. Congrats.

Hobbit.

Author: Katarn
Date posted: 11/18/2004 10:02:38 AM
Katarn's Comments:

I really thought this piece showed how Vader still that little bit of Anakin still in him. It's almost as if he was willing Anakin to come back, but the dark side took him over again.

Great Work!

Author: Ani-maniac  (signed)
Date posted: 11/27/2004 10:59:38 PM
Ani-maniac's Comments:

I...can't.. think... of what... to... say... All that comes to mind is...That was so cool!!!!! This is definitely one of, if not my favorite story delving into Darth Vader's head. It did a wonderful job showing the struggle that existed in him. I loved the way he had to convince himself that Obi-wan's lightsaber was only a trophy. God has certainly blessed you with a talent for writting. It's nice to know their are other Star Wars fans who are Christians as well. God bless!!!!

Author: JediMindTrick  (signed)
Date posted: 12/2/2004 5:03:02 PM
JediMindTrick's Comments:

I'm relatively new here, but I've already read a great number of fanfics, and this is the first one which has compelled me to write a response. All I can say is this is an incredible piece of literature. The characterization could not have been more exact for Vader. A very poignant piece. Very well done.

Author: darthbass123
Date posted: 2/23/2005 10:08:51 AM
darthbass123's Comments:

whimper, whimper, sniff, sniff,

Stop making me cry.

Beautiful. Academy award, Oscar, anything

Author: Drunkduck101
Date posted: 4/22/2005 4:51:50 PM
Drunkduck101's Comments:

Wow...just wow. That was extremly well written and came across the clearest of anything I have read in a really long time. Congratz and keep it up!

Author: Dylan Turk Jedi Knight  (signed)
Date posted: 5/3/2005 10:28:04 AM
Dylan Turk Jedi Knight's Comments:

very impressive, well done. Bravo.

Author: me_luv_darth_squishy
Date posted: 5/15/2005 4:08:38 PM
me_luv_darth_squishy's Comments:

wow. after having just seen the special edition 4 the ot this means something 2 me. thank you 4 writing this story.

MTFBWY

Author: Alia
Date posted: 5/20/2005 1:16:06 PM
Alia's Comments:

Beautiful. Extremely well written. I loved this piece. I was especially moved when Vader/Anakin struggled to breathe in his suit, and grieve.

Author: Anakin'sAngel359
Date posted: 9/27/2005 1:38:55 AM
Anakin'sAngel359's Comments:

this is so good. How can you write like this? It's amazing!!!! I enjoyed every bit of it. Awww( if it's not too bold to say) poor Vader...and Obi-Wan...It's soo depressing. Do keep up the awesome work! I love it!

Author: Veloz
Date posted: 12/31/2005 5:45:11 PM
Veloz's Comments:

This was awesome! no other words come out of me *applause*

Author: Exar_Kun
Date posted: 5/3/2006 12:47:04 PM
Exar_Kun's Comments:

Superb!!!!

Author: General San_3
Date posted: 2/21/2008 12:32:39 PM
General San_3's Comments:

I really liked this story, mostly because Vader's so inscrutable it's always fun to hear what's going on under the helmet. Thanks for the great story!

Author: Autumn
Date posted: 6/1/2013 2:20:58 PM
Autumn's Comments:

This is amazing! Very well written. I love how Obi-Wan had promised to always be there. It was very impressive.