Author: Iceheart
Date posted: 6/13/2001 3:59:15 PM
Iceheart's Comments:

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Well written, it captures much of the same pace of the movies, while adding another facet to the personality of one of my favourite EP 1 characters.

Qui Gon as a 15 year old was very convincing, I was almost wondering how Quiller managed to abduct my neighbours' boy, and study his mannerisms, actions, and impulsiveness. The attention to the Living Force was quite interesting as well.

Waiting to see more!!

Author: FernWithy  (signed)
Date posted: 6/16/2001 5:28:31 PM
FernWithy's Comments:

I loved this story. A wonderful interpretation of Qui-Gon and Yoda's master/padawan relationship, both unique in itself and reflective of their other appearances. Just a really good job.

Author: Valeda Kor
Date posted: 6/26/2001 4:05:29 PM
Valeda Kor's Comments:

A very evocative story, with terrific characterization. Fascinating to read the "beginnings" of a character we know so well, from EP-1. The interplay between Yoda and Qui-Gon is superbly handled, and a joy to read. Very well done.

Author: Mcily Nochi  (signed)
Date posted: 7/31/2001 8:21:52 PM
Mcily Nochi's Comments:

I loved the insight into Yoda's character. In ESB and ROJ, his connection to the Force is the ultimate goal for Luke, and in TPM he is just another Jedi in the council. I loved the personality you gave him. Nice work!

Author: PeterTutham27
Date posted: 8/28/2001 9:52:37 AM
PeterTutham27's Comments:

LOL! As a 16 year old, I can truthfully say that
this really catches the character of a teenager
who wants to do right.. but just HAS to do something
else that he's not supposed to! Perfect!

Author: jacen200015
Date posted: 1/14/2002 11:45:01 AM
jacen200015's Comments:

You did a very good job.

Author: Christy
Date posted: 9/5/2002 4:05:34 PM
Christy's Comments:

Great Great Great Story.I totally loved it.

Author: BarissaOffee
Date posted: 11/13/2002 4:21:19 PM
BarissaOffee's Comments:

Hey Q,

Very cool, always liked Qui-Gon, But I thought that Qui Gon's master was Count Dooku? No difference, but you know I like the niggling. :)

TTYL,
Barissa

Author: General_Iblis
Date posted: 12/8/2004 7:29:42 PM
General_Iblis's Comments:

Qui-Gon's master was Dooku, but this could have been around the time Dooku left the Jedi Order

Still...a great story!

Author: jedigirl
Date posted: 10/31/2007 11:32:16 PM
jedigirl's Comments:

funny...almost thought Jarga was going to turn out to be Chewie(before we found out he was Jarga) good story.

Author: MJ_KenobiJinn  (signed)
Date posted: 12/9/2012 10:16:42 PM
MJ_KenobiJinn's Comments:

I loved this!!! I think that, for Qui-Gon, was difficult to be himself because the Force told him to do things that no one else understood. I've always being divided... I like Qui-Gon as Dooku'as padawan but to see him as Yoda's padawan is also very nice.. I can't make a choise.. Either way, thank you... I loved this story..

PD: sorry if I wrote something wrong.. I'm not a native speaker and I have some troubles to write things down...