Author: Lady Padme  (signed)
Date posted: 10/25/2004 9:10:13 PM
Lady Padme's Comments:

WOOHOO! It's been archived! Great job on a quirky little romance, GJ! I knew this one would be a shoe-in!

* grins madly *

Still batting .1000!

Author: Gabri_Jade  (signed)
Date posted: 10/26/2004 12:30:17 AM
Gabri_Jade's Comments:

*grins back* Thank you, Jieh darling. ;)

A quick thanks to LadyPadme, Darth_Lex, and dreamspirals for looking this story over for me, and an extra hug for dreamspirals for the great cover art. :)

Author: LianaMara
Date posted: 10/26/2004 5:39:04 PM
LianaMara's Comments:

Congrats on getting this archived, Gabri!

I love how you took two minor characters from AotC and fully fleshed them out - especially Hermione. Like LP said, it's undeniably quirky, and a wonderfully funny vignette. Great job!

*huggles*

Author: Jedi-2B  (signed)
Date posted: 10/28/2004 11:49:53 AM
Jedi-2B's Comments:

I didn't know you'd submitted this! It's so funny and off-the-wall; I don't know how you ever came up with the idea.

Author: Obi
Date posted: 10/29/2004 10:16:35 AM
Obi's Comments:

Great fanfiction! I usually don't read stuff like this, but how you wrote it was just excellent. I loved how it all flowed together and didn't disappoint. I hope to read some more of yours!

Author: Nevarion  (signed)
Date posted: 10/29/2004 2:06:58 PM
Nevarion's Comments:

Romances don't usually interest me for long, but the snappy pace kept me going, and I really liked the colloquial characterizations, too. I also love it when minor film characters get a chance at the spotlight! Great job!

Author: Jeff 42  (signed)
Date posted: 11/4/2004 7:13:13 PM
Jeff 42's Comments:

The concept and execution of this story were both quite amusing. You did a nice job with the characterization of Hermione as well. Keep up the good work.

Author: TenelKa_YoungJedi
Date posted: 11/6/2004 3:12:17 PM
TenelKa_YoungJedi's Comments:

very intressting!
dark kind of romance and fresh new people
i like it very much

Author: Mich'uck'uodo(chiss)  (signed)
Date posted: 11/6/2004 8:25:59 PM
Mich'uck'uodo(chiss)'s Comments:

I'm new to THEFORCE.net fanfic and was interested in seeing what kind of fan fiction they published and I must say I'm impressed with how the author used characters from Episode II as a template for the characters.

Author: maverick0716
Date posted: 11/8/2004 7:37:33 AM
maverick0716's Comments:

Nice story! Very well written!

Author: LaLaLa2004  (signed)
Date posted: 11/9/2004 1:23:27 PM
LaLaLa2004's Comments:

I thoroughly enjoyed this! Its nice to hear the backstories of minor characters, no matter how minor they are.

Author: Ani-maniac
Date posted: 11/11/2004 2:39:29 PM
Ani-maniac's Comments:

I really liked your story! I am glad to see someone telling the back stories for the minor characters. It was very well written, and I enjoyed it!

Author: Idrelle Miocovani  (signed)
Date posted: 11/16/2004 4:13:21 PM
Idrelle Miocovani's Comments:

Awesome story! I must say that though I'm not too fond of the Prequel trilogy itself, I cannot disregard the fan fiction written about it. Your characterization makes those two minor characters come to life!

Author: JanLomona  (signed)
Date posted: 12/3/2004 8:30:12 AM
JanLomona's Comments:

Brilliant! Laughed my head off reading this one, ties up two minor characters brilliantly, and it all makes sense! Gabri-Jade deserves a big pat on the back for this one, I might even be in touch about writing a story or ten for my own site (www.lightsabre.co.uk)!! Cheeky little plug there I know!
Anyway, I will be looking out for much more from this writer! Great stuff!

Author: Keiran_Halycon  (signed)
Date posted: 1/17/2005 7:28:39 PM
Keiran_Halycon's Comments:

I'm new to this forum, but this story is pretty good. I'd like to add, though, a suggestion. You don't have to take it seriously, but maybe look into the expressions used in the movies and novels, and use those in "for Force's sake"'s stead. Just a suggestion.

The whole story was well written, by the way, and I enjoyed it very much.