Author: Gabri_Jade  (signed)
Date posted: 12/20/2004 8:57:29 PM
Gabri_Jade's Comments:

Thank you to my betas, LadyPadme and obaona. Your work is much appreciated, ladies. :)

Author: Nade_Naberrie  (signed)
Date posted: 12/21/2004 7:12:41 AM
Nade_Naberrie's Comments:

Your work always wrenches a giggle from me, no matter how sullen my mood may be. Thanks for sharing, Gabri_Jade; it's always nice to start out the morning with a chuckle. And congratulations on yet another well-deserved archival. :)

Author: mdfischer1
Date posted: 12/21/2004 4:23:32 PM
mdfischer1's Comments:

Great story! The whole Mara name thing was cracking me up. Keep up the good work.

Author: Erela
Date posted: 12/21/2004 8:24:28 PM
Erela's Comments:

Hilarious. Just hilarious. :-)

Too bad it didn't really turn out that way.

Author: Nevarion  (signed)
Date posted: 12/22/2004 9:16:51 AM
Nevarion's Comments:

This was a very cute story. It's certainly a unique spin on Palpatine, and one that you explored very well! Great job, well done! (You know, I've actually wondered about that handrail thing myself...)

Author: VaderLVR64  (signed)
Date posted: 12/24/2004 5:49:53 AM
VaderLVR64's Comments:

That was wonderful! Hilarious! It's wonderful to see it in the archives.

Author: Jaina Saru  (signed)
Date posted: 12/26/2004 3:05:45 PM
Jaina Saru's Comments:

Must. Resist. Temptation. To use. Acronym.

LOL!

... FOUR LETTER WORD!

Author: Thrawn75
Date posted: 12/27/2004 5:20:09 AM
Thrawn75's Comments:

This was seriously one of the funniest and overall best fanfics I've ever read! Seems almost like a cartoon! ROFL!

Author: Amidala_Skywalker  (signed)
Date posted: 12/27/2004 8:04:22 PM
Amidala_Skywalker's Comments:

Great work, Gabri! I love Palpatine's characterisation and the Vader/Mara interaction! Congratulations on the archival!

Author: Jedi_Master_ Sushi
Date posted: 12/27/2004 10:40:59 PM
Jedi_Master_ Sushi's Comments:

one word, man:

SEQUELS!!!!!!

Author: Valiowk  (signed)
Date posted: 12/30/2004 7:04:45 AM
Valiowk's Comments:

I love the reason for Palpatine's end. It was really so unexpected, and leaves us all thinking that it serves him right! ;)

Author: vader-incarnate  (signed)
Date posted: 1/1/2005 8:06:24 PM
vader-incarnate's Comments:

OMG, Gabri, I think I just about died. o.O Hilarious!!

Author: Darth_Pepsi
Date posted: 1/4/2005 6:31:48 PM
Darth_Pepsi's Comments:

ACH! *laughs hysterically* Oh MAN! HA HA!!!

Author: Antilles...Martyn Antilles
Date posted: 1/6/2005 1:29:51 PM
Antilles...Martyn Antilles's Comments:

Really cute. Why can't I come up with stuff like this?

Author: Tylec Asroc
Date posted: 1/10/2005 9:12:32 PM
Tylec Asroc's Comments:

Cute, and good for a chuckle. I enjoyed this look at the more farcical side of that galaxy far, far away.

Author: Nemesis  (signed)
Date posted: 1/19/2005 8:41:39 AM
Nemesis's Comments:

. . . hysterical. I loved it :D

Author: Costanza Vader (ex C. Snape)
Date posted: 1/22/2005 11:55:19 AM
Costanza Vader (ex C. Snape)'s Comments:

very good :)

Author: Obi-Wan Schultz  (signed)
Date posted: 1/22/2005 6:15:23 PM
Obi-Wan Schultz's Comments:

I LOVED that! I still can't stop giggling. I can sooo picture Mara asking Vader if Palpy'll be coming back soon. A sequel would be cool, but this is great on it's own

Author: Obi-Wan Schultz  (signed)
Date posted: 1/22/2005 6:18:13 PM
Obi-Wan Schultz's Comments:

I LOVED that. I still can't stop giggling, and I hope you never stop writing! Keep it up Gabri!

I loved the conversation between Vader and Mara

"Can I shoot his cap off too?" :P :) ^ ^
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Author: Shorty
Date posted: 1/24/2005 6:03:05 PM
Shorty's Comments:

**ROTFLMAO**
Oh that was good, hilarious, I'm gonna be laughing for days! Thank you, thank you, thank you!
Tee he he

Author: LianaMara  (signed)
Date posted: 1/25/2005 9:08:30 AM
LianaMara's Comments:

Absolutely giggle-worthy, Gabri! :)

*huggles*

I love it. Little Mara is adorable, Palpatine's distractions make me laugh everytime I read this, and Vader's thoughts are priceless. Belated congrats on getting this archived!

Author: Idrelle Miocovani  (signed)
Date posted: 2/1/2005 11:12:29 AM
Idrelle Miocovani's Comments:

I think I'm still laughing. That was hilarious!

Author: Lost Jedi
Date posted: 2/5/2005 8:42:00 AM
Lost Jedi's Comments:

That was funny! I really enjoyed the converstion between Mara and Vader! You should defently write a sequel! I just lover you writing!

Author: Anakin Starkiller  (signed)
Date posted: 2/8/2005 10:11:17 AM
Anakin Starkiller's Comments:

Fantastic. I am still smiling.

I think the artist of the "cover" should be awarded as well, that girl to be the percocious young Mallia? Mary? Market? Mara! is perfect. Very cute, but I can totally see her innocently killing because its fun.

Author: Commander Stan
Date posted: 2/20/2005 4:26:34 PM
Commander Stan's Comments:

I guess Palpatine forgot the rule: "Watch out for that first step."

Author: DarthAJ
Date posted: 3/2/2005 5:11:22 PM
DarthAJ's Comments:

HA! You should of put Merlin too! Hilarious! And I note that you used Jamilla as in Queen Jamilla from episode II. Great work!

Giggle Rating-10/10

Author: Alhon
Date posted: 3/5/2005 6:32:44 PM
Alhon's Comments:

I must have read this a month ago, and I still re-read it, due to it's great look at Palpy. The geezer got what he deserved!

Author: Saber Girl Leia
Date posted: 3/6/2005 7:18:46 PM
Saber Girl Leia's Comments:

Amazing. Simply amazing.

Maria-- er, I mean Maya is adorable, heehee.

MTFBWY :D

Author: C3SoloP0
Date posted: 3/9/2005 6:46:25 AM
C3SoloP0's Comments:

This was sooo funny.

I always wondered what Vader's real take on Palpy might have been. Always fun to read.

Author: Emperor Skywalker
Date posted: 3/20/2005 6:23:16 PM
Emperor Skywalker's Comments:

After reading more of the serious, touching stories, this was a great breath of humour. I couldn't stop laughing, especially visualizing Palpatine falling down from the blaster.

Author: isola-jedi-padawan  (signed)
Date posted: 3/24/2005 8:58:54 AM
isola-jedi-padawan's Comments:

That was funny! I always like stories of adult characters as kids and this was no exception, a very good example in fact.

Author: me_luv_darth_squishy
Date posted: 3/25/2005 5:59:30 PM
me_luv_darth_squishy's Comments:

that is one of the best stories ive read

you can hear anakin in him when he says thats because theyve been cut, little one.

ROTFLMAO
MTFBWY

Author: Bria921  (signed)
Date posted: 4/2/2005 11:35:14 AM
Bria921's Comments:

Man, that is SO funny!!

("Mr. Vader, why don't they ever put rails around the service shafts? I would if I was them." )

And Palpy bouncing down the stairs and dropping like a stone. Love it!

Author: Janny36
Date posted: 4/9/2005 8:11:04 AM
Janny36's Comments:

I thought this was so funny!!!! I really liked P.'s commentary, it's so sarcastic... especially the part whree you can almost hear the fact that he's falling down the stairs in his voice "someones... going... to pay... for this...."

very cute.

Author: Jedigirl_1
Date posted: 4/9/2005 10:24:29 PM
Jedigirl_1's Comments:

I have to say it's the first time I've read of a comical side to Vader, but Anakin did have a bit of a comical side so I'm not surprised. Any way I loved it. It was hillarious, especially the part where Palpatine fell. Loved it.

Author: Sana Ri
Date posted: 4/20/2005 4:46:52 AM
Sana Ri's Comments:

I loved that delightful laugh I got out of the story. It was quite refreshful to read something of Mara Jade's childhood.

Author: K9: The First  (signed)
Date posted: 5/20/2005 12:22:51 PM
K9: The First's Comments:

BAHAHAHAHA! That was hysterical! The name thing, as someone has already mentioned, was pure GOLD!

Author: leandar
Date posted: 7/1/2005 11:47:31 PM
leandar's Comments:

That's funny. I don't care who you are, that's funny right there. You can't laugh at this fanfic, you need to get the hell out of here cause that's a funny fanfic right there.

Author: Mara_Kenobi
Date posted: 7/11/2005 1:13:42 PM
Mara_Kenobi's Comments:

DUDE! i have read that story at least 5 times and i still can't stop laughing! i love it
that was awesome!

Author: 1-800-jedigirl
Date posted: 2/3/2006 5:22:48 PM
1-800-jedigirl's Comments:

one of star wars historys greatest sith lords done in by a childs play thing

rather fitting dontcha think

Author: darth_meg
Date posted: 5/8/2006 1:46:03 AM
darth_meg's Comments:

still wetting my pants every time i read it

Author: 007135  (signed)
Date posted: 7/5/2006 4:02:34 PM
007135's Comments:

That was funny.

Author: THE_LUKE_SLAYER  (signed)
Date posted: 9/13/2006 9:29:43 PM
THE_LUKE_SLAYER's Comments:

hahaahahahaahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhaha(hahahaha)



psahahahahahahahahahahahahahaahahahahahaahahahaha

Author: The Chosen One  (signed)
Date posted: 10/10/2006 2:09:02 PM
The Chosen One's Comments:

Excellent! I can justimagine the obituary...'he shuffled off this mortal coil at the hand of...a Hand!'

Author: Amy
Date posted: 9/1/2007 12:38:01 PM
Amy's Comments:

Hilarious, as always. The little-girl thing was just perfect.

Author: Niralle
Date posted: 9/30/2009 3:30:07 PM
Niralle's Comments:

Cute fic. It made me smile; I especially enjoyed Palpatine calling Mara every other name that started with an "M". Malia...Mia...nice details throughout.