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Author: Tycalibur  (signed)
Date posted: 6/6/2005 7:54:39 PM
Tycalibur's Comments:

Author's notes:

Disclaimers first. All characters, ships, lightsabers, dialogue, planets, ideas, accessories sold separately and galaxies far, far away belong to George Lucas. I just use them to have fun with my own imagination, in a non-profit manner.

I'd like to thank Rhonderoo for the cover art, first of all. Secondly, my betas, Lady Padme and Obaona, who worked tirelessly on this fic to help me get it up to speed. Special thanks also to MariahJade and Boushh.

I wrote the story almost two years ago. The idea came to me when watching Episode II, and I realized -- with AOTC in place, that Shmi's gravestone wasn't present in Episode IV.

Thanks again to all my helpers, and thank you to all who have read the story!

Tycalibur
TF.N Fan Fiction Writer and Reviewer

Author: Dark Empress
Date posted: 6/6/2005 9:19:00 PM
Dark Empress's Comments:

Very impressive... good capture of all the characters thoughts and emotions. Good potrait of the life Luke Skywalker as a child and the challenges which are met. Excellent.

Author: Sani_Atasa  (signed)
Date posted: 6/7/2005 9:45:50 AM
Sani_Atasa's Comments:

Very well written. I felt every bit of emotion.

Author: Wendynat  (signed)
Date posted: 6/18/2005 1:07:26 PM
Wendynat's Comments:

I really enjoyed this story! The characterization of Owen and Beru were wonderful in particular - I love it when writers get behind some of the more "peripheral" characters and give us a window into their thoughts and motivations. I now have a soft spot for Uncle Owen!

In short, a very well done, compelling read and one I can see myself re-reading :). Thanks!!

Author: Mcily Nochi  (signed)
Date posted: 7/1/2005 4:08:41 PM
Mcily Nochi's Comments:

This is a very beautiful story. I particularly like the very simple style, which reflects the elegant simplicity of the storyline and, of course, Luke's childhood itself. You portray his relationship with his aunt and uncle very well, and I can really see how it will develop into what we see in ANH.

Thank you.

Author: Nom Inal
Date posted: 9/11/2005 8:31:37 AM
Nom Inal's Comments:

Excellent characterization

Author: Persephone_Kore  (signed)
Date posted: 2/4/2007 1:53:17 PM
Persephone_Kore's Comments:

This was wonderful. Well characterized, and very speaking... and the motif of covering up the past in the sand was a powerful one.

Author: jedi girl
Date posted: 6/20/2010 10:08:06 PM
jedi girl's Comments:

Great story! Loved the interaction between Luke and his uncle and aunt. Nice to see Ben Skywalker make a cameo in the epilogue.

Author: jedi1952
Date posted: 3/4/2011 11:39:37 PM
jedi1952's Comments:

I just found this story and all I can say is WOW. You where right on point for all the characters. And the ending was outstanding. Talk about coming full circle..

Sue


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