Author: Nevarion
Date posted: 8/17/2005 6:35:58 AM
Nevarion's Comments:
I'd like to thank obaona and jmann06405 for their fantastic beta work on this story, not to mention their great patience with my numerous revisions! Thanks also to obaona for her usual exemplary cover art!
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Author: DarthIshtar
(signed) Date posted: 8/18/2005 2:28:04 PM
DarthIshtar's Comments:
Wow, I definitely did not anticipate that ending. Very well done. The intensity was striking.
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Author: kestrien
Date posted: 8/19/2005 11:34:58 AM
kestrien's Comments:
chilling
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Author: Kyprioth
Date posted: 8/19/2005 8:07:39 PM
Kyprioth's Comments:
An awesome story! I never saw that ending coming. Thank you for writing this.
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Author: Koon
(signed) Date posted: 8/22/2005 4:26:41 PM
Koon's Comments:
Interesting
It was good, but "Saberette"? That is all you could come up with?
That was my only problem with this fic.
Otherwise, good work!
A sequel?.....?
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Author: me_luv_darth_squishy
Date posted: 8/24/2005 6:17:50 PM
me_luv_darth_squishy's Comments:
I liked how you were never really sure how it would turn out, by that I mean would "Saberette" or the Jedi win. It also through in a stunning life lesson and brings to (my) mind a proverb: revenge is a dish which is best served cold.
MTFBWY
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Author: Gee Red
(signed) Date posted: 10/10/2005 9:58:19 AM
Gee Red's Comments:
Well done! A taut well executed thriller, I look forward to reading more of your work.
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Author: Jedi and Christian
Date posted: 6/30/2006 2:37:42 AM
Jedi and Christian's Comments:
This story is one of the best iv'e encountered on this website, but the beggining (Forgive me father.....) is a little offensive on my part.
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Author: Indy
Date posted: 3/18/2009 10:23:27 PM
Indy's Comments:
Well done, and that was one heck of a shock ending!
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Author: PhantomJedi
Date posted: 12/6/2009 4:22:10 PM
PhantomJedi's Comments:
Good story, with a good sense of irony! I do wonder where you get the name for the main character, though. :)
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Author: Sidi
Date posted: 5/5/2010 3:14:29 PM
Sidi's Comments:
What in heavens was that? Can a Jedi, a fully trained one, really act like this? I could have sworn he's a Sith hiding among his enemies. That really went too far with no justification. The writing is great though. Still, my suggestion to any writer is... Let the Sith be Sith and the Jedi be Jedi. I mean... were I Kira, I'd stop to think for a moment and spare the ctying. Things will turn the way she wanted anyway.
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