Author: Melkor  (signed)
Date posted: 8/3/2005 2:41:27 AM
Melkor's Comments:

Very amusing; I particularly liked the pun with "jedd eye." ;)

I also wrote a Palgueis fic that is still awaiting the verdict of the reviewers, so when I saw this, I thought "no, it can't be..." But when I read it, well, you can guess I was greatly relieved.

Good work secretly sticking in old Star Wars lines. That was probably the best part. That and the R2-D2 twist.

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Author: Melkor  (signed)
Date posted: 8/3/2005 2:42:32 AM
Melkor's Comments:

Very amusing; I particularly liked the pun with "jedd eye." ;)

I also wrote a Palgueis fic that is still awaiting the verdict of the reviewers, so when I saw this, I thought "no, it can't be..." But when I read it, well, you can guess I was greatly relieved.

Good work secretly sticking in old Star Wars lines. That was probably the best part. That and the R2-D2 twist.

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Author: DarthIshtar  (signed)
Date posted: 8/3/2005 7:26:34 AM
DarthIshtar's Comments:

The first part always has me banging my head to get the phrase out of my head because it's so funny and the Lord Waiter...flies! nearly had me doubled over in laughter.

Author: me_luv_darth_squishy
Date posted: 8/3/2005 6:05:25 PM
me_luv_darth_squishy's Comments:

I too loved the "jedd eye" pun, and the "sensing him sensing me" joke. Very humorous and likeable.

MTFBWY

Author: Koon  (signed)
Date posted: 8/4/2005 4:22:36 PM
Koon's Comments:

Kinda goofy...i wonder, would the dark lord of the sith instantly reveal himself like that...hm

Meditate on this, I will....

I would plead for a sequel, but it appears that you have already shamelesly used up all the classic lines from all six movies in one fell swoop. O well...

Brilliantly done, if you like that sort of thing... ;-)

Author: Idrelle_Miocovani
Date posted: 8/4/2005 6:05:16 PM
Idrelle_Miocovani's Comments:

LOL!

This was hilarious! ::grins:: Loved the pun that everyone has already mentioned.

Author: DarthSabe  (signed)
Date posted: 8/5/2005 10:05:30 AM
DarthSabe's Comments:

Heehee, great! I loved how you had jokes scattered all through, and then the punch line at the end of each section. Write more!

Author: Clutch D'Rofab
Date posted: 8/9/2005 7:17:32 PM
Clutch D'Rofab's Comments:

That was absurd, silly, and contrived.

I LOVED IT!

More please!

Author: darth_sparrow  (signed)
Date posted: 8/11/2005 5:14:06 PM
darth_sparrow's Comments:

I never get tired ot Star Wars humour fics... *rolls on floor laughing*

The use of so many phrases from the 6 movies was sheer brilliance...and I loved the little jokes (particularly the 'jedd's eye' and 'sensing me sensing him...sensing me...')!

Definitely a spectacular idea! May the Force be with you, always...

Author: Sani_Atasa  (signed)
Date posted: 8/14/2005 6:44:49 PM
Sani_Atasa's Comments:

So silly. I wasn't expecting that. Loved it lots.

Author: kestrien
Date posted: 8/16/2005 12:59:46 PM
kestrien's Comments:

Frank?????

Emperor Frank?????


No way.

Author: Jon Cory
Date posted: 8/16/2005 1:13:13 PM
Jon Cory's Comments:

Please review Episode I again; in the Coruscant apartment, Palpatine says to Queen Amidala "If I may be Frank...."

His first name is Frank. If you don't like it, let George know.

Author: kestrien
Date posted: 8/19/2005 11:20:54 AM
kestrien's Comments:

Um, you're not serious, right?

Author: Jon Cory
Date posted: 8/19/2005 11:42:20 AM
Jon Cory's Comments:

Kestrian, you need to do your research. I don't have the movie in front of my to give you the time index of the scene, but here it is straight from the Episode I script:

http://www.blueharvest.net/scoops/pm-script.shtml

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INT. PALPATINE'S QUARTERS - LIVING AREA - DAY

PALPATINE is pacing as CAPTAIN PANAKA enters. EIRTAE and RABE stand to one side.

PALPATINE : ...the Republic is not what it once was. The Senate is full of greedy, squabbling delegates who are only looking out for themselves and their home sytems. There is no interest in the common good...no civility, only politics...its disgusting. I must be frank, Your Majesty, there is little chance the Senate will act on the invasion.
AMIDALA : Chancellor Valorum seems to think there is hope.
PALPATINE : If I may say so, Your Majesty, the Chancellor has little real power...he is mired down by baseless accusations of corruption. A
manufactured scandal surrounds him. The bureaucrats are in charge now....
****************

I'm not going to post the rest, but you can clearly read that he says he's Frank.

Author: Sith Man  (signed)
Date posted: 8/21/2005 5:09:30 PM
Sith Man's Comments:

Very Funny. I like how you used lines from the movies. I especially liked the "jedd eye" bit. Very good.

Author: Martyn Antilles
Date posted: 8/23/2005 2:31:13 PM
Martyn Antilles's Comments:

Lol! That was funny, especially with all the movie lines put in.

Author: SkyJediM6  (signed)
Date posted: 10/3/2005 5:56:23 PM
SkyJediM6's Comments:

I think it is very hummerous, but i noticed many lines from the original movies, just put in the sentence differently.

The fish was very interesting.

But i would perswade you to maybe create what really happened before someone does.

Author: PrincessKenobi4  (signed)
Date posted: 11/13/2005 11:22:15 AM
PrincessKenobi4's Comments:

Ooh, it made it in! As always, very funny.

Sorry for the fish eating you. LOL :P

Author: Roger Memb
Date posted: 11/20/2005 9:12:28 AM
Roger Memb's Comments:

Editors Note: No flaming.

Author: Jorge_Lucas
Date posted: 11/22/2005 2:16:29 PM
Jorge_Lucas's Comments:

I don't know what you said, or even if it was good or bad. The piece was written as a humorous joke, so feel free to critique it any way you please, as long as it's constructive. I think you can also send comments directly to my email through the site, so you're welcome to do that, too. Thanks!

Author: Roger Memb
Date posted: 11/27/2005 3:10:06 PM
Roger Memb's Comments:

Hi 'Editor'. Hope all is well. Have been reading the stories, many good tales, especially from Princess Kenobi. Now all rest whilst we consider further.

Author: Jon Cory/Jorge_Lucas
Date posted: 11/28/2005 5:38:43 AM
Jon Cory/Jorge_Lucas's Comments:

No, I'm not the editor, I'm the author. I'm not quite sure what your beef with the editor is, but like I said, you're welcome to email comments directly to me if you think what you'll say will be edited out again. I tried emailing you, but your address at MSN must not be valid anymore.

Author: Roger Memb
Date posted: 11/29/2005 2:05:43 PM
Roger Memb's Comments:

Hello Jon. No, I think your work is wonderful, but I do have a problem with the 'editor' who removed my comment because he disagreeed with it. Others may have agreed, so who is this 'editor' to decide the opinions of many? However, I hope to read more of your work, Jon. This was quite amusing, do another one - may I suggest a humourous piece featuring Luke and Biggs? Take care.

Author: 1-800-jedigirl
Date posted: 2/9/2006 5:13:16 PM
1-800-jedigirl's Comments:

weird its like you put luke, anakin, yoda, sidiouse, and vader into a blender and hit frappay

Author: Sidi
Date posted: 9/15/2007 7:39:52 AM
Sidi's Comments:

OMG!!! That was HILLARIOUS!!!
It gave me the feeling as if you got drunk, watched the 6 movies in a raw and clearly answered the so bothering question "HOW THE HELL CAN BE A TECHNO DROID SO SUCCESSFUL AND SMART???"
I adore your work!! Well done!!!

Author: jedigirl
Date posted: 11/4/2007 6:00:06 PM
jedigirl's Comments:

"Not from a Jedd eye."

Author: DarthShindor  (signed)
Date posted: 10/11/2008 2:12:07 PM
DarthShindor's Comments:

Palpatine's name isn't Frank. It's Dantius.

Author: Ki-Aaron-Mundi  (signed)
Date posted: 1/31/2009 1:52:40 AM
Ki-Aaron-Mundi's Comments:

I've read this piece multiple times, but I keep coming back to it. Great humor, great interweaving of lines from the saga. And I love your Gungan dialogue!