Author: me_luv_darth_squishy
Date posted: 8/17/2005 12:00:04 PM
me_luv_darth_squishy's Comments:

O my gosh. That was so stunning that I felt tears.

*tears*

MTFBWY

Author: TheEmporer524  (signed)
Date posted: 8/17/2005 12:28:17 PM
TheEmporer524's Comments:

That was a very well written piece. Very interesting story line too.

Author: Marselles
Date posted: 8/17/2005 10:39:28 PM
Marselles's Comments:

Niiiiiiiice!!!! You are greasy good like a barbeque pork sammitch, baby!!! Keep up the good work! Snoogans!

Author: DarthIshtar  (signed)
Date posted: 8/18/2005 2:35:51 PM
DarthIshtar's Comments:

I loved the part about telling their fears, especially the line about Mace, but the emotions in this were both real and powerful. Well done.

Author: Darth
Date posted: 8/18/2005 8:52:17 PM
Darth's Comments:

Hey

Just want to say great story, I have always woundered what acutlly happened during Anakin's attack on The temple and I think you did a wounderful job of filling that part in for me.


Thank You

Author: Koon  (signed)
Date posted: 8/19/2005 10:21:39 AM
Koon's Comments:

An excelent fic.
I just finished the R.O.T.S game, and this was a good followup for it.

Author: Bookwrm17
Date posted: 8/20/2005 12:09:30 AM
Bookwrm17's Comments:

I loved this story. It's such a powerful piece emotionaly. Great job.

Author: Nom Inal
Date posted: 8/20/2005 2:19:38 PM
Nom Inal's Comments:

Excellent - keep 'em coming

Author: Daryle
Date posted: 8/20/2005 5:37:03 PM
Daryle's Comments:

nice i could see it all happen i felt sarrow for those in the story who died.
and even though i thought that Dralling died from the Troppers you did EXELENT!!!!!!
i love this story kept me reading (itch many do not.)

Author: Lindz
Date posted: 8/25/2005 8:51:28 AM
Lindz's Comments:

Great Job! I could see it in my head. I had thought, while reading it, it was a chapter in a novel! It was fantastic! It really followed the story lines and showed gfreat "voice" in the writing! (That's the way my 6th grade teacher would put it! Great Job! Keep it up!

Author: Yindz
Date posted: 8/25/2005 12:27:59 PM
Yindz's Comments:

Great JOB!

Author: Silvereyed
Date posted: 8/25/2005 3:34:19 PM
Silvereyed's Comments:

I loved it!

Author: shep
Date posted: 9/1/2005 10:24:17 PM
shep's Comments:

that was incredible! so sad! so amazing!

Author: Amy
Date posted: 9/6/2005 7:10:09 AM
Amy's Comments:

OMG! That was sooooo sad! Amazing story too. Well done!

Author: Bladeborn
Date posted: 9/8/2005 6:14:23 PM
Bladeborn's Comments:

Descriptions of certain parts of the action could use a bit of work, but then, that's not what this story was about, was it? The emotion is what mattered here, and you captured it well, even Anakin's slight tinge of regret at the mention of the burning infants. Nice fanfic, short and yet saying a lot more than some of the lengthier ones.

Author: LordTengu  (signed)
Date posted: 9/9/2005 6:38:18 AM
LordTengu's Comments:

Goodness, this is a bloody good story.

I have read a lot of good fic in this place, but this one really delivers a punch on the stomach. I still am in shock...

Very good. Congratulations.

Author: DarthBreezy
Date posted: 9/19/2005 10:48:38 PM
DarthBreezy's Comments:

So glad to see that one of my all time favorite authors has a plce here, especially with such a heartfelt, poignent work as this.

Author: one of the others
Date posted: 10/17/2005 12:02:48 AM
one of the others's Comments:

I literally cried when I read it
very touching

Author: Darth Breezy  (signed)
Date posted: 10/23/2005 11:58:49 AM
Darth Breezy's Comments:

I wanted to add that Rita's works that are not archived here are incredible as well. Indeed, her lyrical style and beautiful way of handeling 'other' situations inspired my two very beloved OCs and the way they were written. I hope more people will seek out her other works as well as enjoying this one.

Author: Darth Nizzleforizzle
Date posted: 11/29/2005 4:44:45 PM
Darth Nizzleforizzle's Comments:

Incredible story! A great story is one where you can almost "feel" the tension and fear. I can say that I was honestly afraid for The Jedi and the children.

Oh, kudos on not being too graphic with the violence. It's upsetting enough just thinking about Vader killing all of those kids.

Author: thebleetingnichodemus
Date posted: 12/2/2005 2:53:11 PM
thebleetingnichodemus's Comments:

Lord Vader, riiiiiiiiiiiise!

Author: Veloz  (signed)
Date posted: 12/29/2005 8:09:59 AM
Veloz's Comments:

WAO!.. this fanfic truly gave me chills .. wonferfully done!

Author: masteryodarlz
Date posted: 3/4/2006 12:29:24 AM
masteryodarlz's Comments:

This is a beatiful bit of work.I cried the whole time

Author: SR
Date posted: 3/20/2006 5:59:19 AM
SR's Comments:

Dying babies... =(

Author: Fallina  (signed)
Date posted: 3/13/2007 7:23:58 PM
Fallina's Comments:

Great job!

Author: scottie
Date posted: 4/4/2007 5:50:51 PM
scottie's Comments:

that was well written about master drallig, i am a great fan on master drallig and that was great. thanks!

Author: jedigirl
Date posted: 11/4/2007 6:49:47 PM
jedigirl's Comments:

OOOOHHHH Ani!!!!!! WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?! It was creepy in the middle of reading this cuz We're having a Star Wars Marathon right now and right when He said (in this story) "The Temple just received word that Kenobi has defeated Grievous" Mace Windu(in the movie) was telling Anakin that very same thing. CREEPY!

Author: Kylo Kenobi  (signed)
Date posted: 7/23/2008 8:29:08 PM
Kylo Kenobi's Comments:

Very good story! I enjoyed reading it! It was defintly worth my time, and it was probably the best story I have read this month.

Author: Atarumaster88  (signed)
Date posted: 2/16/2009 6:55:17 PM
Atarumaster88's Comments:

Good story. A minor canon quibble with Whie, as Anakin actually killed him, and also Bene was present in the room. However, regardless of those quirks, I liked the story, probably in no part due to using Master Drallig myself, but I thought the characterization was good.