Author: Star Traveler
(signed) Date posted: 11/15/2005 2:23:11 AM
Star Traveler's Comments:
Wow! That was intense. Ray Jopaan was an interesting character, certainly a good counter-point to Obi-Wan, and the last scene was just... eerie. Well done.
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Author: Idrelle_Miocovani
Date posted: 11/15/2005 4:00:29 PM
Idrelle_Miocovani's Comments:
Wow! What an interesting story created from an interesting idea! Well done!
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Author: JoeHella
Date posted: 11/17/2005 3:42:11 AM
JoeHella's Comments:
Great Story! NOW they can rule the galaxy as Father and Son1 Muahahahahahahahahaha :D
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Author: me_luv_darth_squishy
Date posted: 11/18/2005 6:44:34 PM
me_luv_darth_squishy's Comments:
Wow. I mean wow. I NEVER saw that coming. And all this time I kept going "Stay with Beru and Owen!" over and over again. Odd...but great...
MTFBWY
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Author: votevader4prez
Date posted: 11/18/2005 8:35:47 PM
votevader4prez's Comments:
Loved the story. I must say that I was amazed by Vader's soft side, awwww! Is there a sequel? If not write one please!!!
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Author: Koon
(signed) Date posted: 11/18/2005 10:09:24 PM
Koon's Comments:
This fic, while an outstanding story, is in DESPERATE need of a sequel. I thouroghly enjoyed it, and hopefuly await the next one(??).
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Author: Darth Slaya
Date posted: 11/19/2005 12:45:47 PM
Darth Slaya's Comments:
*grabs tissue wipes eyes and blows nose*
Oh wonder i Love Vader/Luke moments! *blows nose louder,at the rememberance of the wonderful Father-Son moment*
tes i am very emotoinal but hey i'm aloud to be i blame it on hormones!
PS great fic!
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Author: gives_you_focus
Date posted: 11/20/2005 12:45:48 AM
gives_you_focus's Comments:
I think Vader just returned partially to the light. Great story, loved it.
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Author: Rynne
(signed) Date posted: 11/21/2005 12:37:41 AM
Rynne's Comments:
First of all, I want to thank everyone who's commented so far, and who will comment later. I appreciate all the feedback, and I'm glad you like the story.
Also, I wanted to let you know that there will indeed be a sequel--two of them, in fact. The first is currently complete and being betad, and the second is in progress. So yes, there will be more.
Thanks again! :)
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Author: Darth Fenrir
Date posted: 11/23/2005 9:51:11 AM
Darth Fenrir's Comments:
Oooh... Beautiful, haunting, and a delightful treat to read.
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Author: PrincessKenobi4
(signed) Date posted: 11/26/2005 2:23:36 PM
PrincessKenobi4's Comments:
Good work, Rynne! I really liked this one.
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Author: Darth Hippy
(signed) Date posted: 11/28/2005 7:53:51 PM
Darth Hippy's Comments:
I LOVE this fic! When is the sequel coming in? I gotta know!
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Author: Jedi-2B
(signed) Date posted: 12/12/2005 9:33:17 PM
Jedi-2B's Comments:
I had to read this story before starting your sequel, and am I ever glad I did. Wonderful job! Very moving and beautifully written.
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Author: Cal Hopeful
Date posted: 12/20/2005 4:32:22 AM
Cal Hopeful's Comments:
Champion!
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Author: anipadme_relationship
Date posted: 12/20/2005 5:37:54 PM
anipadme_relationship's Comments:
It was a great story and the ending was weird but it was a very inventive story.
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Author: BareBodkin
Date posted: 12/24/2005 3:43:38 AM
BareBodkin's Comments:
I liked your story, though, I thought more time should've been spent on Vader considering the repercussions of his actions. He seemed a bit too willing to me. Nine years is a long time and having (near)completed the Purge I would expect the loving Anakin Skywalker to be buried much deeper than he appeared to be. KEEP WRITTING!
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Author: Scarlett Raine
Date posted: 1/17/2006 12:09:29 PM
Scarlett Raine's Comments:
Gee i really likd your story. I love how in the end we really saw how much of Anakin was in Vader. Like the random not thought out not caring about what would happen decision of taking Luke home with him. Really good work.
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Author: darth_eowyn
Date posted: 2/28/2006 11:12:25 PM
darth_eowyn's Comments:
What's the Emperor going to do about it? Sequel?
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Author: Jedi Alchemist
Date posted: 6/24/2006 5:44:00 PM
Jedi Alchemist's Comments:
I loved this story :3 And joppan was an interesting character. Very real. Unlike alot of fan characters who are usually overpowered and..."plastic". It's nice to see some good quality fan fiction :D I eagerly await the sequal!!
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Author: JediGurl13
Date posted: 8/3/2006 2:11:04 PM
JediGurl13's Comments:
vaders soft side was umm, interesting but please please please write a sequal, sequal, sequal,please!
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Author: elayne
Date posted: 7/22/2007 12:06:38 AM
elayne's Comments:
i just find it slightly strange that luke would want to follow vader, considering he knew that vader had just killed 2 jedi, which luke had always dreamed of being, one of whom was obi-wan kenobi, whom luke knew of.
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Author: GreyKing1
Date posted: 4/28/2008 4:58:48 PM
GreyKing1's Comments:
Wonderfully written, you need to make a sequel to this !!!
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Author: courtney
Date posted: 5/23/2008 10:03:41 PM
courtney's Comments:
wow! i really liked that and you have to make a sequel! well, if you want. i love how vader had a soft side towards luke, so keep writing!
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Author: 2yuuki
Date posted: 4/11/2015 1:01:09 AM
2yuuki's Comments:
You know what this needs? A standing ovation. You know what else it needs? A Sequel.... so please???
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