Author: me_luv_darth_squishy
Date posted: 4/4/2006 6:57:44 PM
me_luv_darth_squishy's Comments:
hehe...very funny. I liked this one. Especially when Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, and Anakin were arguing and then boom! enter Mace Windu and the horde of Jedi. Very nice.
MTFBWY
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Author: Yodan
(signed) Date posted: 4/4/2006 9:08:21 PM
Yodan's Comments:
That was great Diane!
Poor Luke and Mara... Well it seems they have some alone time now...
Bravo!
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Author: BooGrl
Date posted: 4/4/2006 9:21:17 PM
BooGrl's Comments:
That was hilarious! I love this fanfic. Luke and Mara making out and then a mob of Jedi interupt. I'm suprised that Anakin didn't do any "over-protective father" business. LOL! :)
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Author: Barissa Offee
Date posted: 4/5/2006 1:33:19 AM
Barissa Offee's Comments:
"Loose the blaster."
Perfect way to end it. I was hoping it wouldn't be quite as much of a humor piece, but I understand why you did it so. I thought it enjoyable, though I would have liked to have seen the other Jedi go through had discuss the aspects of the Code!
Still, enjoyable. :)
Barissa
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Author: Dark Side Master
Date posted: 4/5/2006 10:01:28 AM
Dark Side Master's Comments:
To be honest, I found it so utterly ridiculous I don't know where to start. I hate to be negative, and you can write, but this story just doesn't work for me at all.
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Author: davey wan Kenobi
Date posted: 4/6/2006 1:06:33 PM
davey wan Kenobi's Comments:
I loved it. I never thought that Luke could be so in love with someone that he would actually kick his old mentor out of his room on his wedding night. Great Job!!!!!
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Author: Jedi Trace
(signed) Date posted: 4/7/2006 9:53:27 PM
Jedi Trace's Comments:
That was delightful, Diane!
My favorite part had to be Mara back-talking Yoda, LOL. And I was glad to see my three favorite blue-eyed Jedi in agreement. ;)
Thanks for the laugh! And the L/M-ness. You should write more L/M. ;)
~Trace
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Author: LuvEwan
Date posted: 4/9/2006 7:36:36 PM
LuvEwan's Comments:
So funny and original. I really loved reading this. Your talent for humor is remarkable.
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Author: Commander5052
(signed) Date posted: 4/17/2006 9:20:31 AM
Commander5052's Comments:
This is classic. Absolutely hilarious
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Author: VaderLVR64
(signed) Date posted: 4/18/2006 10:07:35 AM
VaderLVR64's Comments:
This was absolutely hilarious! I can imagine that having such a crowd show up on your wedding night would be a bit exasperating! LOL!
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Author: Princess_Arulmozhi
(signed) Date posted: 4/22/2006 10:57:20 AM
Princess_Arulmozhi's Comments:
Lol. Poor Luke - what a time to be interrupted - and by a whole posse, to boot! This was hilarious. Loved every bit of it. :)
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Author: Obi-isa
Date posted: 4/26/2006 4:37:38 PM
Obi-isa's Comments:
I can't belive Mara took a blaster with her to bed on her wedding night!!! LOL!! where would she hide it?? A verry enjoyable piece i must say! Good job!!
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Author: Dustin
Date posted: 6/2/2006 11:37:52 AM
Dustin's Comments:
Haha, very funny story. And yes, Obi-wan's timing was very bad!
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Author: Idrelle_Miocovani
Date posted: 6/4/2006 12:18:44 AM
Idrelle_Miocovani's Comments:
LOL!
That was hilarious! I loved how that... what was it... "gaggle of dead Jedi" just kept appearing and arguing... brilliant!
::giggles::
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Author: Selene Antilles
Date posted: 6/22/2006 6:19:59 PM
Selene Antilles's Comments:
I don't usually like romance fics with Luke, but this was great! I especially liked the part with Yaddle! ;-)
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Author: Jedi Master Patrick
(signed) Date posted: 7/14/2006 9:14:20 PM
Jedi Master Patrick's Comments:
This is the first story I've read on this site and I was NOT disappointed! Loved the whole thing- especially seeing all the old Jedi's dark secrets exposed to Luke (Qui-Gon & Tahl, Obi-Wan and Siri, Yoda & Yaddle), and Mara holding the blaster on Ben's ghost. Keep up the great work!!!!!!!
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Author: JediGirl032190
Date posted: 7/21/2006 2:28:20 PM
JediGirl032190's Comments:
I like it it was funny, keep writing
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Author: Piera Jade
Date posted: 8/28/2006 3:47:13 PM
Piera Jade's Comments:
I loved that you used so much information on this piece!!I am an avid Star Wars reader and I understood everything that you mentioned. I was laughing so hard I nearly cried! I hope that you will continue writing fanfic. I am an amature myself. Encore,encore!! ;)
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Author: Glinauth_SLM
Date posted: 9/2/2006 8:50:51 AM
Glinauth_SLM's Comments:
*ROFLMAO* I really wouldn't put it past Obi-wan to do that... Qui-Gon!! YAY!! YodaXYaddle 4ever! I feel sorry for Luke. No, wait, I don't. *begins arguing with herself*
Frae Naline (My Original Character): Well, folks, it's gonna be a while before she resurfaces. Bye! *hits enter*
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Author: Jaya Solo
(signed) Date posted: 10/21/2006 12:52:12 AM
Jaya Solo's Comments:
Wow. That was really cute and funny. :) Great job!
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Author: Caroline
Date posted: 1/4/2007 2:27:51 AM
Caroline's Comments:
hahhahahahahaha Loved Yaddle's comment and Yoda's reaction. Still laughing...
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Author: SugarBant Jinn
(signed) Date posted: 2/18/2007 8:47:16 PM
SugarBant Jinn's Comments:
very funny! i really enjoyed it! good work - again!
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Author: squeakybauer
Date posted: 3/1/2007 6:36:16 PM
squeakybauer's Comments:
Cool story very funny with having all of the old jedi coming in on the wedding night I just think that it would be Mara running them all out not Luke gotta say though it makes sense
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Author: jedigirl
Date posted: 10/30/2007 8:25:41 PM
jedigirl's Comments:
Funny. I loved how first it was just Obi, then Ani and Qui-Gon come in and they're all fighting, then in comes everyone else! Good job.
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Author: wover30
(signed) Date posted: 3/6/2008 12:08:33 AM
wover30's Comments:
The hatchings. I laughed so hard, I had tears in my eyes. And the last line rocked! Awesome job and great writing.
Wover
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Author: darthmatrx101
Date posted: 10/6/2008 3:44:15 AM
darthmatrx101's Comments:
HILAROUS <**> hatchlings (i wonder if they'd be cute or disgustingly ugly)
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Author: Forcebane
(signed) Date posted: 10/7/2008 5:49:48 AM
Forcebane's Comments:
Oh!! This is good and funny.
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Author: Master Rambo
(signed) Date posted: 3/30/2009 6:13:27 PM
Master Rambo's Comments:
Ok that was soooooooo funny. Here is a translation of Yoda and Yaddle. "You can't get married. Yoda says. "In my days.... Whoosh. "Well that didn't stop you from @#&$*$! me did it?" Yaddle says. "And you left me with kids, though I did enjoy it.
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Author: Natasja
Date posted: 11/28/2009 6:59:00 AM
Natasja's Comments:
I'm guessing that this debate has been quietly ongoing for a long time.
Then again, it's been violated enough times that I don't know why they even bother with that rule anymore.
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Author: Johnjoshua
Date posted: 4/3/2012 8:06:45 AM
Johnjoshua's Comments:
Not easily.You'll only ever rlleay make a living off your writing if you hit it big, say work for a newspaper or become a top-selling author. You likely won't make a lot of money off of stories on a website.If you want to try though, look into publishers that sell eBooks, or try self-publishing on sites like Lulu.com.
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Author: TheLiberator
Date posted: 6/19/2012 9:01:31 PM
TheLiberator's Comments:
1) There is no doubt that the reason they have this discussion at that time is for the humor 2) Not all Jedi were able to appear as Force spirits. Only those that were wise and powerful 3) This was really hilarious
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