Author: dianethx
Date posted: 3/14/2006 7:59:07 PM
dianethx's Comments:

That was lovely. I loved how Anakin realized that he was slipping down deeper and deeper and yet he couldn't seem to bring himself to open up to Obi-Wan as he needed to.

Great job as always.

Author: Layren  (signed)
Date posted: 3/14/2006 8:03:47 PM
Layren's Comments:

That was wonderful, MamaVader! But that's not a surprise coming from you :) Especially loved the ending where Anakin didn't confess; if only he had, how would things have turned out? Just wonderful.

Author: bloodraven
Date posted: 3/15/2006 5:10:12 AM
bloodraven's Comments:

This was utterly perfect. Everything about it just blew my mind. I especially loved how Anakin finds himself drawn to the darkness as though it is a drug that just really summed it up beautifully!

Author: Gina  (signed)
Date posted: 3/15/2006 6:33:12 AM
Gina's Comments:

This is definitely one of my favorites of your vignettes. You portrayed Anakin's inner conflict and sense of hopelessness so eloquently, and the jungle setting gave the story a primal feel, perfectly in keeping with his struggle between light and dark.

Author: me_luv_darth_squishy
Date posted: 3/16/2006 4:42:02 PM
me_luv_darth_squishy's Comments:

Really awesome....nice "analogies," I guess you could call them. Personally, the jungle reminded me of Mace Windu's struggle on Haruun Kal...I too think that the jungle has its share of light and dark. Well done!

Author: TKeira_Lea  (signed)
Date posted: 3/16/2006 9:26:03 PM
TKeira_Lea's Comments:

I love how you show Anakin's internal conflict. You draw the reader right into his struggle.

Bravo!

Author: Star Traveler  (signed)
Date posted: 3/19/2006 2:52:23 PM
Star Traveler's Comments:

Bold, poetic, and with a nice dark ending, it does the trick. Glad to see how you portrayed a chance for Anakin to unburden himself and even make the attempt.

Author: onyx falcon
Date posted: 4/21/2006 3:51:46 PM
onyx falcon's Comments:

very vivid. accurate depiction of falling to the dark side.

Author: Shaayla
Date posted: 4/24/2006 11:32:09 PM
Shaayla's Comments:

I wanted to cry at this story. It was so horribly sad and pulled at my heartstrings. I wanted so badly for Anakin to tell Obi-Wan everything, and everything to be alright, but then there would be no story. Wonderfully discriptive and the dialogue was beautiful. This is one of the few stories that gets me really feeling what the characters feeling. I felt every emotion Anakin was feeling and I wanted to cry. Keep writting, this it one of my favorites.

Author: Siri93
Date posted: 5/12/2006 12:24:27 AM
Siri93's Comments:

That was so good! I loved it! I think you captured how Anakin must have been feeling before he turned perfectly!

Author: jarogue
Date posted: 8/19/2008 5:18:44 PM
jarogue's Comments:

You sent ninjas to my house, didn't you? DIDN"T YOU?!?!? OH, well. Well, me and the ninjas both agree that it captures and portrays the anxieties and stress filling anakin's mind. He is slipping to the dark side...isn't he, ninjas?

Author: Kaylan
Date posted: 9/17/2008 11:07:52 PM
Kaylan's Comments:

Wow, this piece was SO good! I love the italic parts, wherein Anakin is thinking of what he really wants to say but doesn't. So well written! It would be cool to see an alternate of this same scenario where Anakin does reveal all those secrets to ObiWan and his reaction.