Author: Idrelle_Miocovani
Date posted: 11/28/2006 5:10:26 PM
Idrelle_Miocovani's Comments:

Oh! That was beautiful, Nienna! Absolteuly stunning. :)

Author: Barissa
Date posted: 11/28/2006 10:21:36 PM
Barissa's Comments:

Usually I don't comment, more of a lurker myself, but I had to tell you. This fiction was stunning. I felt SUCH a connection to Kerra and to Ben.

Really, the way you put the gentle sadness on Ben... I was taken back.

Brava.
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Barissa

Author: Jonesy
Date posted: 11/30/2006 11:22:20 AM
Jonesy's Comments:

This was extremely well written. I was very impressed. The imagery and the interaction between the characters were very believable and the story was touching.

Author: me_luv_darth_squishy
Date posted: 12/3/2006 6:48:06 PM
me_luv_darth_squishy's Comments:

Wonderful. I felt more and more attached to this character as the story progressed.
Smashing...[haha I've never used that word before!]

MTFBWY

Author: Jturtle
Date posted: 12/3/2006 10:19:30 PM
Jturtle's Comments:

Wow!

That was magnificientand it really makes you think. I really enjoyed this piece.

Author: geo3
Date posted: 12/8/2006 2:48:45 AM
geo3's Comments:

This story is lovely. Just lovely. Ben shines out of it. By the time I reached the end, I, too was filled with some of his peace...

Bravo!

Author: Botim Waverider
Date posted: 12/24/2006 8:14:18 AM
Botim Waverider's Comments:

This is a brilliant piece - congratulations to the author!

Author: Diane Kovalcin  (signed)
Date posted: 12/29/2006 8:21:24 AM
Diane Kovalcin's Comments:

This was just wonderful. I loved how the viewpoint of the child grew into an adult and yet she still had the same affection for Ben. Lovely.

Author: Persephone_Kore  (signed)
Date posted: 2/4/2007 6:00:39 AM
Persephone_Kore's Comments:

Awww. I love this. Wonderful OCs, I really like the early interactions especially. Poor Obi-Wan, run afoul of Tatooine's not using credits again -- but it's not like he could stop and go shopping for trade goods before he got somewhere too obscure to take his money. I liked that they were kind to him and the warmth of her mom giving him the cloth she'd first ever woven. (I get the sense that Shena is too pragmatic to have ever really balked at selling it, but that it was special to her all the same, and liked the way she talked it down enough he could take it, while still in a way that he'd have to know it was special.) I like the friendship, the staying over during the sandstorm, the reassurance... the main character growing up, and the rescue. It's good to think of him having friends while he was there, hermit or not.

Author: nickenobi
Date posted: 6/10/2007 4:11:52 AM
nickenobi's Comments:

WOW! What an incredible story. *sigh* Poor Ben, I really felt his sadness. So well done :)

Author: Indy
Date posted: 2/27/2009 10:24:57 PM
Indy's Comments:

Thanks for a truly beautiful, touching story.

Author: MicaC
Date posted: 1/8/2011 9:44:55 PM
MicaC's Comments:

Wow! What an awesome fanfic! This was really well thought, and well written. Great Job! I too felt Obi-Wan "Ben" Kenobi's sadness, knowing what he went through and all that. And I love the main character, and how she was portrayed from a little girl to a matured woman. One thing I loved though was how the author described the way it was to live in Tatooine. From the sights, to the sounds, and the smell, just beautiful. It makes me want to live in that backwater of a planet!