Author: ApprenticeEternal
Date posted: 1/23/2007 1:08:48 PM
ApprenticeEternal's Comments:

No comments! Unbelievable!
Good style, good imagery, good character portrayel...gdgd :)

Author: Kadi-Ahn_Tanye  (signed)
Date posted: 1/23/2007 8:02:00 PM
Kadi-Ahn_Tanye's Comments:

There are very few stories that I have cried in.

Or admit that I have cried in.

This is one of them.

You have gotten the fierce Kadi-Ahn_Tanye to cry.

Congratulations.

Author: Diane Kovalcin  (signed)
Date posted: 1/23/2007 9:36:57 PM
Diane Kovalcin's Comments:

So glad to see it in the Archives. It's such a lovely piece, so poignant. I especially loved her talk with Obi-Wan. Great job once again, VL!

Author: Persephone_Kore  (signed)
Date posted: 2/4/2007 4:39:53 AM
Persephone_Kore's Comments:

Aah.... Well done. There's something exceptionally touching, and disquieting, and vivid about her feeling Padme's belly and finding that the child isn't there.

Author: ratna
Date posted: 3/17/2007 11:20:14 PM
ratna's Comments:

beautiful use of understatement and small, poignant details -- the aesthetic seems almost asian to me.

i liked the characterization of obi-wan, and the way you wrote the exchanges between him and padme's grandmother.

lovely vignette

Author: jainasolo
Date posted: 7/2/2007 8:14:56 PM
jainasolo's Comments:

it was so good i cried
im just weird like that

Author: jainasolo
Date posted: 7/2/2007 8:15:31 PM
jainasolo's Comments:

it was so good i cried
im just weird like that