Author: Phantom Jedi
Date posted: 10/7/2007 7:39:38 PM
Phantom Jedi's Comments:
Amusing, yet with quite a bit of depth. Good work all-around.
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Author: Healer_Leona
Date posted: 10/11/2007 7:32:30 PM
Healer_Leona's Comments:
Anne, a rather brilliant viggie. I very much felt Obi-Wan's frustration at the way things wre and how much he wished them otherwise. Qui-Gon's words, though not entirely saitsfying were truth.
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Author: me_luv_darth_squishy
Date posted: 12/9/2007 6:54:27 PM
me_luv_darth_squishy's Comments:
heh...that was pretty funny. nice work.
MTFBWY
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Author: LLL
(signed) Date posted: 1/28/2008 10:22:09 PM
LLL's Comments:
I really love this little story. People treat SW as if flashy space battles, mortal combat, stunning acrobatics, and other glitz and spangles were the only appealing things about it.
The most important things in SW are the ideas you find in quiet little stories like this one.
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Author: la_cara1106
Date posted: 2/6/2008 3:15:21 PM
la_cara1106's Comments:
I get bored of the galaxy-in-the-balance-destroy-the-superweapon storyline. Great job at writing a well-thought-out and personable story. The characters were believable. Plus I love thrift shopping!
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Author: Darth Bane II
Date posted: 4/26/2008 4:48:20 PM
Darth Bane II's Comments:
Obi-Wan buying clothes. It sounded like a silly idea, but wierdly, this story has some interesting ideas. Very well written.
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Author: jarogue
Date posted: 8/31/2008 5:05:15 PM
jarogue's Comments:
quite good. A simple senerio that you turned into an intricate web of ideas. Well done. Can you please untie me now?
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Author: Lakesha
Date posted: 1/16/2016 2:01:12 AM
Lakesha's Comments:
This info is the cat's paaamjs!
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