Author: ratna
Date posted: 4/30/2007 8:52:47 PM
ratna's Comments:

the so-called New Order.

New, indeed. Can greed be new?

love that

Author: dianethx
Date posted: 5/5/2007 8:13:42 PM
dianethx's Comments:

Beautifully done. I especially liked the ending where she was trying to hold onto the moment.

Great job.

Author: Beta_Commado
Date posted: 5/21/2007 7:14:20 PM
Beta_Commado's Comments:

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. I absolutely love it. Maybe you could write more into this Alternate Universe? I'd read it for sure.

Author: Jenny
Date posted: 2/23/2008 2:56:35 PM
Jenny's Comments:

Beatiful and sad. Perfectly in Padmes character.
You could write a sequal where Padme meets the adult Luke and/or Leia.