Author: storyreader
Date posted: 5/31/2008 10:45:53 PM
storyreader's Comments:

That was the best story I've read in a long time! Well done, espesially with the ending!

Author: Darth KenObi-Wan  (signed)
Date posted: 5/31/2008 11:49:24 PM
Darth KenObi-Wan's Comments:

This is a wonderfully brief perspective writing! You captured the dynamics of the duo, and their grief, exactly how I've alway imagined them. Well done!

Author: ratna
Date posted: 6/2/2008 6:09:52 PM
ratna's Comments:

Oh, yeah. I remember this one all right. And it's made me cry again!

Author: Aethersprite_2534  (signed)
Date posted: 6/2/2008 10:32:04 PM
Aethersprite_2534's Comments:

wow. this story was somehow chilling and VERY well-written. i will definitely enjoy reading this one again! i think the characterization of obi-wan was especially good :D.

MTFBWY

Author: BurningEndor  (signed)
Date posted: 6/11/2008 8:23:06 PM
BurningEndor's Comments:

A heart-warming story, to be sure. If I weren't already a devout (though invisible) reader of yours, I certaintly would be now!

Author: miralys
Date posted: 6/12/2008 5:01:48 PM
miralys's Comments:

Excellent job with Obi-Wan's character! I could definitely see him behaving that way. A really touching story, sure to go in my favorites!

Author: Perigrine  (signed)
Date posted: 6/13/2008 6:55:49 PM
Perigrine's Comments:

That's a great story, Master! I really felt and enjoyed the emotions you conveyed throughout the whole story. You always make me feel what your characters are. Wonderful!

Author: Gina  (signed)
Date posted: 6/19/2008 9:39:00 AM
Gina's Comments:

This is such a touching and emotional story, and I'm glad to see it here in the Archive! :D

Author: tlw
Date posted: 7/7/2008 7:33:59 PM
tlw's Comments:

Makes it all the more sad how their relationship ends.:(

Author: Fan-of-Fiction
Date posted: 7/18/2008 12:25:28 PM
Fan-of-Fiction's Comments:

What a fantastic story!!! I have to admit I began to get choked up reading it. Wonderful job. This was well written and included a lesson for all of us about moving on, facing our responsibilities and not letting down those that depend on us. Also, I think it added some color/foreshadow as to the love and skepticism between Obi-Wan and Anakin. Please write some more.

Author: TonPhanan23
Date posted: 7/27/2008 10:18:36 AM
TonPhanan23's Comments:

Nice little sentimental story. The prose is great. Very polished and attentive to detail. This bridges well into ATTACK OF THE CLONES (Anakin's frustration with Obi-Wan). I would have avoided the tears and hugs. Anakin's resentment (in the films) with Obi-Wan stems from his inability to express and sympathize (and Anakin's adolescent angst).

Author: jenni
Date posted: 8/17/2008 8:29:06 PM
jenni's Comments:

{sobs uncontrollably} that is so sad!!!!!!!!!!!! sniff great wrok on this! It captures emotion very well. Poor obi-wan. He should see a physcologist. Bottlin' up all that greif can't be healthy. Now i'd better call him before he locks himself in a closet and starts {makes drinking out of bottle motion} again.

Author: Ki-Aaron-Mundi  (signed)
Date posted: 8/20/2011 11:41:13 PM
Ki-Aaron-Mundi's Comments:

This remains one of my favorites--I was surprised to discover I hadn't previously commented.

You so perfectly capture what I would expect of Obi-Wan in the months following Qui-Gon's death. Anakin's behavior, too, is pitch-perfect.

And though there are many great moments, this line in particular rung true for me: "As always, the call of duty was enough to rouse him." So very Obi-Wan.