Author: Zach
Date posted: 11/8/2008 2:15:34 PM
Zach's Comments:

Not bad. I'd like to read more.

Author: miralys
Date posted: 11/12/2008 5:36:40 PM
miralys's Comments:

I really loved this idea. Glad to see it made the Archives!

Author: ratna  (signed)
Date posted: 12/15/2008 6:59:11 PM
ratna's Comments:

this is so good

a heartbreaking ghost story

best kind

and you are the master

Author: Atarumaster88  (signed)
Date posted: 1/8/2009 1:57:16 PM
Atarumaster88's Comments:

Very nice work. I liked the descriptive detail in the beginning, and the way that Calix was characterized. The most surprising part about this is how it seemed to accomplish so much with so little dialogue.

A minor quibble from the grammar book:
"Tobias Malikar was legendary in the undergrounds circles of Calix's trade"

Personally, I think it'd read better as "underground circles" rather than what it currently does.

Still, I'm not trying to detract from the quality of the story. My apologies if I've posted inappropriately; I'm new. 9_9

Author: krystina
Date posted: 9/3/2009 12:45:56 AM
krystina's Comments:

I thought this story was absolutly beautiful, unfortunitly I feel kind of heavy hearted after reading it. I'm sad to think padme and anakin never reunited in the force. yet I still love this story. congrads on it. it is amazing.