Author: Cage Daal  (signed)
Date posted: 8/21/2011 7:59:20 PM
Cage Daal's Comments:

I enjoyed this story. The depth of story, the variety of characters, the dynamic features of secondary characters such as the idiot brother, all made for an intriguing and at times, funny, story. The writing style was not my favorite, but nothing necessarily wrong with it. Great job.