Author: me2347
Date posted: 11/12/2001 2:07:19 PM
me2347's Comments:

very good.especially that last part. it was a great and interesting

Author: LittleJedi
Date posted: 11/12/2001 9:25:23 PM
LittleJedi's Comments:

Cool story! :D

Author: Somebody
Date posted: 11/13/2001 5:24:08 PM
Somebody's Comments:

{Long, low whistle...} Eeps. Powerful story.

Author: Seijin
Date posted: 11/14/2001 8:45:00 AM
Seijin's Comments:

Damn... That was exceptional.

Author: ZeeMee513
Date posted: 11/14/2001 8:50:06 AM
ZeeMee513's Comments:

very cool story can't wait for your next one.

Author: C4GO
Date posted: 11/14/2001 10:44:29 AM
C4GO's Comments:

This story was so cool!

Author: JordanR
Date posted: 11/16/2001 3:40:29 AM
JordanR's Comments:

Excellent story, I can very much relate to this too, last year I found out I was adopted and I met my real family, these emotions were very much like those in your story. It's very powerful and it brings to light what people do feel when they discover they are adopted. Well Done.

Author: trernst
Date posted: 11/18/2001 8:15:11 PM
trernst's Comments:

cool but who is this guy?

Author: The Phantom Sith
Date posted: 11/21/2001 5:42:00 PM
The Phantom Sith's Comments:

This story was very well written. It seems strange, however, to read of things like divorce in a Star Wars story, yet this almost works. As I read, I cringed when I thought that this might have taken place at Qui-Gon's funeral, thank you so much for proving me wrong! Keep up the good work!

Author: Mcily Nochi  (signed)
Date posted: 12/24/2001 3:23:42 PM
Mcily Nochi's Comments:

A very powerful story, with hidden depth. I, too, thought it would be Qui-Gon's funeral at the beginning, but soon figured it out.

Author: Shogunn2517
Date posted: 1/10/2002 12:16:15 AM
Shogunn2517's Comments:

This was a well written story. It is a incentive to read more of the author's work. Although, I got to admit as someone said earlier, it is quite unsettling to read about divorce in Star Wars. I personally would have changed that part a bit. Nevertheless, it was a good story and a good read.

Author: Phobia
Date posted: 2/19/2002 11:41:29 AM
Phobia's Comments:

Amazing story. You've done an excelent job in creating the characters. You may have a real future in writing if you keep it up. I applaud you.

Author: Alien_Jedi
Date posted: 1/15/2003 3:51:15 PM
Alien_Jedi's Comments:

Very cool! Although, I was a little confused at the end. The narrator's brother was his dad's Padawan? Maybe I got it wrong, but I think the padawan tried to burn himself along with his master? I'm confused...

Author: Jedi_Phoenix  (signed)
Date posted: 4/8/2003 5:22:17 PM
Jedi_Phoenix's Comments:

This story makes you stop and think.

Author: jedilittlebee
Date posted: 5/8/2003 7:44:44 AM
jedilittlebee's Comments:

Very deep and thought provoking story. It kept my interest to the very last word!

Author: Pamd Skywalker
Date posted: 12/17/2006 3:12:48 PM
Pamd Skywalker's Comments:

i don't understand is Luke the original Character or was it anakin i soo confused.