Author: Jane Jinn
Date posted: 12/14/2001 1:03:12 AM
Jane Jinn's Comments:

Excellent! Entertaining and suspenseful and funny! I loved the banter between Revin and Obi-Wan. Revin is such a believable, human character; so dedicated to her work! A joy to read!

Author: Quiller  (signed)
Date posted: 12/14/2001 2:10:04 PM
Quiller's Comments:

Hi Valeda. I must concur with Jane. I found your version of Obi-Wan to be a fun read -- a little flirtatious, while still managing to retain his Jedi dignity and poise. Loved the intensity. Great first person POV.

Author: Karoline
Date posted: 12/16/2001 2:51:00 PM
Karoline's Comments:

I loved the way you portrayed Obi-Wan. Just excellent!

Author: jav
Date posted: 12/17/2001 10:10:59 AM
jav's Comments:

all i can say to it is that it was great and i love how you've given obi-wan a love interest.he certainly deserves one.

Author: JainaSolo;)*
Date posted: 2/1/2002 3:40:40 PM
JainaSolo;)*'s Comments:

I would have thought that Zhan wrote that! It was a really good story!

Author: Valeda Kor  (signed)
Date posted: 2/9/2002 7:27:16 PM
Valeda Kor's Comments:

I am extremely flattered, JainaSolo, to be compared to Timothy Zahn! Thanks for your kind words. Revin is one of those characters that kinda write themselves, and I hope to do other stories in which she plays a prominent part.

Author: mfalkon
Date posted: 6/25/2002 2:21:11 PM
mfalkon's Comments:

What a great read! It feels like a blend of murder mystery cop novel (which is one of my favorite genres) based in the Star Wars Universe. With that in mind, you were able to keep true to the original SW characters'personas used in this story. Great portayal of Obi-Wan. Excellent job!

Author: STARWARSFAN
Date posted: 6/30/2002 9:34:05 PM
STARWARSFAN's Comments:

This was indeed a wonderful story! I really liked Revin. The plot was also good, it kept me very interested. Ok, you definitely wrote this before Episode 2 came out, right? Because Obi-wan seemed a LOT like Anakin. All well, I guess all padawans, and even Jedi MAsters, have a little bit of arrogance. As I've said before, beautiful story! Please write more!

Author: Barissa
Date posted: 10/11/2002 7:54:07 AM
Barissa's Comments:

Lovely!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author: Zane-Marit
Date posted: 7/18/2003 3:45:46 PM
Zane-Marit's Comments:

WOW...What can I say other than Fantastic. I wish I could write that well. The creativity and inventiveness is very Zahn like. This story is better than most of the books that have been published. You had he hooked from beginning to end.

Author: Critic
Date posted: 4/28/2004 1:00:30 PM
Critic's Comments:

I am a real fan of Obi-Wan Fan fictions. Usually they fit him to a tee, but this story was a little unbelievable if you ask me. I REALLY liked the storyline, but to have Obi-Wan's character added into the mix, in my opinion was not a great idea. But a real interesting story otherwise.

Author: jade_eyes
Date posted: 10/18/2004 3:01:52 PM
jade_eyes's Comments:

I really like the entire story. It's fast paced and the whole Predetan culture is fascinating. I really like Revin. She reminds me a bit of the way Iella or Mara are in their enforcer capacity. :) I like how she and Obi-Wan click. :-D

Author: WINGED_ANGEL  (signed)
Date posted: 1/13/2006 6:08:22 PM
WINGED_ANGEL's Comments:

i have read alot of Obi-Wan romance stuff, but this is the best by far. I loved her "oh i like" thing at the begining. So funny.

Author: Healer_Leona
Date posted: 5/17/2007 10:46:53 AM
Healer_Leona's Comments:

That is one of the most delightful stories I've read. It really reminds me of the ones written during my first discover fanfic and TF.N. and made me feel rather nostaglic for those days.

Author: MaryKenobi
Date posted: 10/20/2012 7:01:44 PM
MaryKenobi's Comments:

great story! Loved!!