Author: Trevor47  (signed)
Date posted: 8/6/2002 7:08:43 AM
Trevor47's Comments:

The story "Resurgence" received some requests for a sequel. I am writing a sequel, but this story is unrelated to "Resurgence". Also, I'd like to express appreciation to the beta readers of "Resurgence" and of this story. Thanks! These stories would have gone nowhere without your input.

Author: trooper_fett
Date posted: 8/6/2002 6:06:29 PM
trooper_fett's Comments:

This story was very good. I like how it was more Imperial sided. A sequel should be written.

Author: Amidala_Skywalker  (signed)
Date posted: 8/10/2002 2:45:10 PM
Amidala_Skywalker's Comments:

Very interesting plot – compelling, in a sense. Ish and Taf were well-defined characters, though I felt the story lacked the information of their past. I would’ve liked to know more about them, but perhaps, that wasn’t your intention. Hmm, mad Jedi? I’m assuming this is an OC, because I tried to match him up with any Jedi I knew, and couldn’t do so. One point, your writing style; I like it. Descriptive, and yet, not over the top. Good work! Nice ending to an enjoyable piece.

I give this an 8.

Author: Trevor47  (signed)
Date posted: 8/12/2002 8:56:49 AM
Trevor47's Comments:

You're not the first to tell me that Ish and Taf lacked a background, but I just didn't feel it was necessary. I really believe less is more. The mad Jedi is an original character, but don't ask me how I cooked it up because I don't know. More like dug it up, I guess. Endings are hard but desperately important. They lead readers to your next story, I think. Thanks again. I love doing this.

Author: Nick Jamilla
Date posted: 8/14/2002 8:25:23 AM
Nick Jamilla's Comments:

Compelling story. The except got me to read the whole story and it was worth it. It's nice to read SW fiction in which whole worlds don't have to be saved.

Author: Trevor47  (signed)
Date posted: 9/21/2002 11:30:45 AM
Trevor47's Comments:

Maybe this isn't necessary, especially at this late date, but I want to clear up some potential confusion. It concerns the sentences, "Behind them, a clatter arose and echoed past. That would be the relay box. The power cable supports should fall soon. Shortly thereafter, two songs like tiny bells being struck rang out as the rings bounced across the stone floor."

In the last sentence, I was referring not to the devices (which are shaped like rings) that climb the stanchions and sheer away protruding equipment, but to the power cable supports in the third sentence.

Purely my oversight.

Author: Trevor47  (signed)
Date posted: 9/21/2002 11:31:49 AM
Trevor47's Comments:

Maybe this isn't necessary, especially at this late date, but I want to clear up some potential confusion. It concerns the sentences, "Behind them, a clatter arose and echoed past. That would be the relay box. The power cable supports should fall soon. Shortly thereafter, two songs like tiny bells being struck rang out as the rings bounced across the stone floor."

In the last sentence, I was referring not to the devices (which are shaped like rings) that climb the stanchions and sheer away protruding equipment, but to the power cable supports in the third sentence.

Purely my oversight.

Author: Super Card Board Tube Jedi
Date posted: 5/19/2003 9:15:19 PM
Super Card Board Tube Jedi's Comments:

Excellent narrative, I love how you portrayed the characters. You should write some more. Best Fan Fics I've read yet!!! Kudos to you!

Author: Trevor47
Date posted: 5/20/2003 8:30:19 AM
Trevor47's Comments:

Great! Thanks. Beta-readers are evaluating something new right now, an original fan fic featuring Padme Amidala.

I'm also in the middle of a sequel for Resurgence but I can't say how long it will take.

MTFBWY,

Trevor47

Author: L-Klure
Date posted: 9/8/2003 5:10:26 PM
L-Klure's Comments:

I enjoyed this story. What species was the mad-jedi? Or was it something that you had made up?

Author: Trevor47
Date posted: 9/17/2003 11:58:00 AM
Trevor47's Comments:

Thanks, L-Klure.

Withholding the species may have done more to characterize the mad Jedi than revealing the species could even approach, as it added mystery. I wrote the story too long ago to recall whether I did it deliberately, but I'm glad I left it that way. I think I also left the gender of the character unknown. I created the character beginning with the triangular head, having no species in mind, just a humanoid character.

Author: Trevor47
Date posted: 9/17/2003 2:03:26 PM
Trevor47's Comments:

Say, L-Klure, may I ask, how did you become aware of "A Matter of Territory"?

Author: L-Klure
Date posted: 10/2/2003 4:12:26 PM
L-Klure's Comments:

I found a "matter of territory" just by searching through the fan fiction database. I enjoy stories with original characters more than the stories that feature characters from the movies. I saw this one in my search. Great story.

Author: Earnhardt
Date posted: 9/4/2011 4:58:40 AM
Earnhardt's Comments:

It's much esaeir to understand when you put it that way!