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Gungan to the left


Interlude (G)


By : Kara

Archived on: Monday, August 5, 2002

Summary:
Sometimes he remembers... Ep. IV vignette.

She stared at him. It surprised him, how defiant her face was. She was nothing but an impudent child, innocence still staring out at him from her dark eyes. Had he ever looked that young, even when he believed in justice and good and love?

There was something about her that made him remember things. It was in the shape of her face, the way she raised her chin as she glared up at him. Somehow, she reminded him of the women he'd known and loved, in those years when he'd been someone else. He could almost imagine a connection between the two of them, something that bound their fates together, if only because she was the rebel, and he was the one sent to destroy her spirit.

"I know your father sent you, Princess. What kind of a father uses his own child to do his dirty work?"

The smooth lines of her young face tightened. He knew how much she loved her father. He had seen that much in the Senate meetings from the time she was small. She didn't know how closely he'd watched her these past ten years, ever since Bail Organa brought her out of Alderaan to Coruscant. "What would the sum of all evil know about being a father?" she shot back with an ease that startled him.

His mechanical arm reached out of its own volition to touch her cheek. He stopped the reflex before the black metal touched her face. He imagined that her skin was soft. He knew another woman who had looked this young once, this beautiful. She had shone with the same rage and passion about the ills of the universe. She had fought with the same strength of belief. This girl-child in front of him could almost be her?

"We will find those droids, Princess. You know that. And then we will crush your rebellion at its petty heart." He saw the struggle she went through not to flinch. But her dark eyes burned into him, almost as if she knew he was going through the same struggle.

"You don't frighten me." And he knew it was true. He didn't frighten her. This daughter of Alderaan saved the energy behind her fear for a far greater passion. He almost remembered believing as hard as she did. He almost remembered being young, and loving?

He turned to the Imperial soldier beside him. "Prepare her," he barked, and strode out, black cape swirling behind him. Someone might call this child an angel, as he had once called one of his women an angel. Strange that the daughter of another world would remind him so much of those women he lost, one after the other? Meditation would clear his mind. And then he would break hers, destroying her planet and her father if he had to.

The End




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Author: JediShampoo  (signed)
Date posted: 8/5/2002 5:05:50 PM
JediShampoo's Comments:

Nice. I think Padme resembles a young Leia very much, and you brought this out well without being too forceful about it.

Author: Viari Skywalker  (signed)
Date posted: 8/5/2002 5:33:34 PM
Viari Skywalker's Comments:

Wow, I really liked this work! I love anything with Vader and his children in it...I am a Skywalker family fan through and through! You did an excellant job! Just one question...you mentioned "women" and losing them one after the other. Call me stupid for asking, but did you mean Shmi and then Padmé? Sorry if that was a dumb or obvious question. Anyway, it was a great story!

Author: Leif
Date posted: 8/7/2002 8:49:43 AM
Leif's Comments:

very touching. i loved the fact that vader blames this girl on allowing the emotions to resurface in him...

Author: Bant428  (signed)
Date posted: 8/7/2002 3:19:46 PM
Bant428's Comments:

Nice. The only thing I didn't understand was the plural "women." I mean, I would expect Vader to stay faithful to Padme's memory. I liked how subtle, short and sweet it is.

Author: PhantomSith
Date posted: 8/8/2002 11:45:56 AM
PhantomSith's Comments:

I think the author is definitely referring to Shmi and Padme. Personally, I think Leia bears a stronger resemblance to her grandmother, Shmi, than to her mother, but the resembalnce is there on both sides, nonetheless.

I think this story would've been better had it used dialogue from the film. I love the story as is, but I personally find these types of tales to be more effective when using a familiar setting, and then filling in the gaps with internal monologue and emotional insight.

Excellent work, overall. I'd love to see more like this!

Author: Mcily Nochi  (signed)
Date posted: 8/25/2002 1:33:55 AM
Mcily Nochi's Comments:

Very interesting, if short, vignette. I especially liked the last line, about destroying her father. Little does he know who her father really is . . .

Author: Jenowa
Date posted: 9/2/2002 8:16:58 PM
Jenowa's Comments:

I thought it was excellent!! It kept my attention, and it was entertaining

Author: SailorStarz  (signed)
Date posted: 9/8/2002 4:57:31 PM
SailorStarz's Comments:

I really liked the way you wrote this scene. I could actually see how this could be apart of the real screenplay! Great-Job!
SailorStarz

Author: Shadow69
Date posted: 10/25/2002 3:26:39 PM
Shadow69's Comments:

well..in a sense it was almost a prediction through the Force.
He technically destroys himself when he throws Palpy down the reactor shaft and gets electrocuted by the Sith Lightning..maybe the author intended it that way

Author: Helen Vader
Date posted: 11/19/2002 1:35:59 AM
Helen Vader's Comments:

This is easily one of my favourite SW vignettes. You manage to do much on such a very small space. Great atmosphere, good character interaction, fabulous last line. ;)

Author: tom
Date posted: 11/20/2002 9:28:19 PM
tom's Comments:

could have gone on a bit longer, this is good but leaves you hanging.

Author: RebelPrincessPadme
Date posted: 11/24/2002 5:41:00 AM
RebelPrincessPadme's Comments:

I thought that this fanfiction was great! We always wonder what Vader must have thought when he captured and interrogated Leia. You've done a superb job of telling us the conflict within Vader. It was that same conflict that brought Anakin back. Excellent! Keep up the great work. I know I'll be looking forward to your next fanfictions.

Author: RebelPrincessPadme
Date posted: 11/24/2002 5:41:05 AM
RebelPrincessPadme's Comments:

I thought that this fanfiction was great! We always wonder what Vader must have thought when he captured and interrogated Leia. You've done a superb job of telling us the conflict within Vader. It was that same conflict that brought Anakin back. Excellent! Keep up the great work. I know I'll be looking forward to your next fanfictions.

Author: reader
Date posted: 8/10/2010 12:30:50 AM
reader's Comments:

as far as i could tell, Anakin was referring to Shmi, as well as Padme, and her handmaidens, who were his friends and co-conspirators


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