Author: Jenos  (signed)
Date posted: 9/16/2002 11:49:17 PM
Jenos's Comments:

THis is pretty nice...I like it, which is something. I generally (rather) dislike anything Gungan, but this wasn't that bad...I actually read it for once! All in all, though a nice short fic, that leaves us wondering...

Author: JeDi Wa|2|2io|2
Date posted: 9/17/2002 12:27:49 AM
JeDi Wa|2|2io|2's Comments:

i think this story was pretty well done as we get a more intimate understandind of the loveable gungans and Queen Jamillia. although how on earth could a siths spirit kill someone. Also i think Qui-gon was a mad chap, and that he got unlucky cause that rat bag maul had a double ended lightsaber. other than that this story rocked

Author: HandmaidenEirtae  (signed)
Date posted: 9/17/2002 3:04:39 AM
HandmaidenEirtae's Comments:

Yea, LadyEliane! I'm glad to see this story in the archive. Makes me so proud when I see a gifted author I beta-ed for here. ;) Congratulations!
~HandmaidenEirtae

Author: Seribaba
Date posted: 9/17/2002 3:03:14 PM
Seribaba's Comments:

Congratulations, LadyElaine! A well-written story, with just the right amount of mystery. I wish you luck as you continue with your series.

Author: Lady Padme  (signed)
Date posted: 9/17/2002 3:12:42 PM
Lady Padme's Comments:

Excellent story! Congratulations on being archived!

Author: Bant428  (signed)
Date posted: 9/17/2002 4:28:34 PM
Bant428's Comments:

Great story. The only thing I didn't like was that it was unresolved.

Author: Valeda Kor  (signed)
Date posted: 9/17/2002 7:47:58 PM
Valeda Kor's Comments:

I enjoyed this the first time I read it as a beta-reader. Always glad to see some of the "forgotten" characters get their proper recognition in fan fiction. A well written, entertaining story.

Author: Goald1701
Date posted: 9/18/2002 1:06:16 PM
Goald1701's Comments:

I loved this story. It was well written and was also a great idea. I was sad that poor Ocko was killed and it would have been great if the story had been longer or a series. It also provided some good insight into the new queen. First rate

Author: Josh
Date posted: 9/19/2002 9:32:43 PM
Josh's Comments:

That was a bloody great story. I enjoyed it how
there was a spooky, ghosty theme to it, and it
wasn't covered with action. The fate of Ocko was
obvious, but leaving it the way it was was a great way
to finish the story. I rate it 10/10

Author: BarissaOffee
Date posted: 9/20/2002 8:09:00 AM
BarissaOffee's Comments:

Not Bad, I think that it could have had more Jedi/Sith tension. But Good over all.

Author: jacen200015  (signed)
Date posted: 9/22/2002 3:24:21 PM
jacen200015's Comments:

This story was fantastic. i wonder what the students felt after Ocko was killed.

i rate it ten.

Author: LadyElaine
Date posted: 9/23/2002 5:53:13 PM
LadyElaine's Comments:

Yes, this is a series, but no, it doesn't continue with this story line. The series is Star Wars Fables, and the idea behind it was that, since Star Wars canon draws so much from real world myths and legends, why shouldn't I? Each short story in this series is based on a different myth or legend from a part of our world. This one's based on Washington Irving's "The Legend of Sleepy Hollow." I thought it doubly proper, since Ray Park played both Darth Maul and the Headless Horseman's fighting stunt double! ;)

Author: Asok Yeesrim
Date posted: 9/23/2002 6:14:31 PM
Asok Yeesrim's Comments:

Excellent story! When I finished, I had goosebumps on my neck! Nicely done considering the short length.

Author: JediPug1  (signed)
Date posted: 9/23/2002 8:56:26 PM
JediPug1's Comments:

I really enjoyed your story! It was clever and the ending was a real surprise...poor Ocko!! It's not easy being a Gungan I guess! You did very well with the short story format. The characters were fleshed out nicely. Good job!

Author: tiger_jedi_warrior_soul
Date posted: 11/9/2002 11:54:35 AM
tiger_jedi_warrior_soul's Comments:

'Twas a good story. I felt genuinely bad for Ocko. He had to deal with a daily dose of disrespect, & then this? I wonder how the hooligan children felt afterward.

Author: Yoda
Date posted: 11/16/2002 9:50:36 AM
Yoda's Comments:

interesting, mysterious.

Author: Darth Eowyn
Date posted: 2/19/2003 1:40:22 PM
Darth Eowyn's Comments:

Great story. My only question about is how could the spirit of a Sith hold a real lightsaber?

Author: LadyElaine
Date posted: 2/19/2003 2:34:40 PM
LadyElaine's Comments:

*grin* I knew someone would ask about that eventually. He's a Force user; his 'holding' could simply be manipulation through the Force.

Author: K9
Date posted: 2/25/2003 1:02:33 PM
K9's Comments:

I know, I know, the suno-name is dumb but I'm thinking of a STAR WARS one. Anyway, I thoght it was creepy! This is a good fic and I think you based this on the legend of sleepy hollow.

Author: Rasah
Date posted: 5/29/2003 12:50:56 PM
Rasah's Comments:

Awesome! I would have never had thought about a haunting in Theed Palance. Nor would it have been Darth Maul. Great Work!

Author: Rasah
Date posted: 5/29/2003 12:51:15 PM
Rasah's Comments:

Awesome! I would have never had thought about a haunting in Theed Palance. Nor would it have been Darth Maul. Great Work!

Author: DarthMaul431  (signed)
Date posted: 9/24/2003 1:45:42 PM
DarthMaul431's Comments:

I loved this story. It's perfect for Halloween and I like how you base all of your stories on fables. I like this one a lot.

Author: Jedi Nyte  (signed)
Date posted: 3/27/2004 9:10:03 PM
Jedi Nyte's Comments:

Wow! Awesome story! I really liked how it seemed to be a typical horror story, but in the end, you figure it really was Maul's ghost. The way you ended it, almost made my heart stop. I felt so sad and so scared at the same time. What an amazing story. Keep it up.

Author: Darth Ravenous
Date posted: 4/11/2005 6:48:28 PM
Darth Ravenous's Comments:

I absolutally HATE anything that is in anyway related to the dreaded JAR-JAR BINKS, but this was pretty cool. It's a story that you would read at a camp fire. Good Job!

Author: 1-800-jedigirl
Date posted: 2/2/2006 5:01:56 PM
1-800-jedigirl's Comments:

this is realy one jewel of a story its even better then the original legend of sleepy hollow

P.S. darth mual is simply one of my favorate sith aside from vader and exer kun

Author: Aricia
Date posted: 8/8/2012 12:57:37 PM
Aricia's Comments:

How did you know I was looking for a salsa reipce?! Our neighbor in denton (wow, 3 years ago) used to make the best salsa. Mr. B. told me how much he missed it last night. We might move back now :)