Author: obaona  (signed)
Date posted: 11/18/2002 9:32:28 PM
obaona's Comments:

I liked it. 'Nuff said. :)

Author: Darth Bong
Date posted: 11/18/2002 10:11:50 PM
Darth Bong's Comments:

I liked this a lot. short, and great. I wished the movie had shown this scene in it's entirity, to see the anger and rage would have really given an insite into how he becomes darth vader. well done.

Author: Sinlock Shad-dow
Date posted: 11/19/2002 8:11:19 AM
Sinlock Shad-dow's Comments:

The writing was OK, but the story is not that much diffrent from the AOTC novel.

Author: Dark_johnny
Date posted: 11/20/2002 5:47:07 AM
Dark_johnny's Comments:

its cool.

Author: Rachael..again..o.o
Date posted: 11/22/2002 6:07:48 PM
Rachael..again..o.o's Comments:

Hi again! I liked this one toooo! Forget anybody who says it's not good, I say! :D

Author: Fool of a Took
Date posted: 11/23/2002 8:58:33 AM
Fool of a Took's Comments:

Wow. Very exellent. I love it! Good job! ^_^

Author: Jenos  (signed)
Date posted: 11/25/2002 3:50:53 AM
Jenos's Comments:

Nice stuff! That's basically all I can say!

Author: BarrissaOffee
Date posted: 11/26/2002 8:52:38 AM
BarrissaOffee's Comments:

Cool, I alwaysed wished they had filmed the scene when Padme bring Ani food after he gets back. Thought that that scene was veryyyy well acted on Hayden's part. But off piont. Very good. Glad you keep prudcing Jira!

Author: jedi hoppy
Date posted: 11/30/2002 6:27:39 PM
jedi hoppy's Comments:

I thought this story was well detailed, of course we all saw the movie and we knew word for word as we followed along in our mind by the movie. But this story furthers the anger and rage that anakin feels then, his transition from light to dark shows a lot here, eventhough he didnt turn but thats what episode 3 is for...cant wait for that one. Good job!!

Author: Nova
Date posted: 12/8/2002 8:27:14 AM
Nova's Comments:

It doesn't seem climatic enough. The Anakin/Shmi scene was too short to have the proper tension, but scenes like that really need a movie or at least a picture to underscore the tension in it. It was a good description of Anakin's probable thoughts, however.

Author: I read the book.
Date posted: 12/8/2002 3:04:11 PM
I read the book.'s Comments:

Isn't that plagiarism? It isn't original.


EDIT: Plagiarism is a very serious accusation. You'd be well advised to not use that word casually.

Author: Jira
Date posted: 12/8/2002 3:07:33 PM
Jira's Comments:

Let me explain something here. I have NEVER read the Attack of the Clones novel. I was just bored one day and this story was created when I was bored. I'm sorry if this has offended anybody, but obviously if it was plagerism the reviewers would have said something. This story is undoubtedly similar to the book because it's one of the scenes from the movie! It isn't plagerism.

Author: Jedi Jules  (signed)
Date posted: 12/8/2002 5:53:54 PM
Jedi Jules's Comments:

Though it did sound a lot like the novel...because it was based on the movie...it was still decent. I wish I had more time to write because I'm "bored"....*sigh* oh well...keep up the good work:-)

Author: Ani's girl
Date posted: 3/2/2003 7:38:53 PM
Ani's girl's Comments:

I liked the way, Anakin's feelings were displayed and described. Very well written :)

Author: JediPug1  (signed)
Date posted: 4/2/2003 7:18:59 PM
JediPug1's Comments:

Great!!!

Author: Fish
Date posted: 4/5/2003 4:05:46 PM
Fish's Comments:

nice work!

Author: elvenjedi1303
Date posted: 5/2/2005 12:00:07 PM
elvenjedi1303's Comments:

Forget what everyone else has said I thought it was great.

Author: Jedi Knight Hella
Date posted: 7/5/2005 5:17:54 AM
Jedi Knight Hella's Comments:

...how can i explain this...it wasnt all that great,sry. The rage of Skywalker in those moments...(since u decided to write about that)u culd have taken more time to express the waterfall of rage as it filled his mind...u know..