Author: JediSkywalker13
Date posted: 2/18/2003 3:35:31 AM
JediSkywalker13's Comments:

Wow this story was great!

Author: Princess Beccerz
Date posted: 2/18/2003 6:46:38 AM
Princess Beccerz's Comments:

What a story! I think that you really ezpanded well on Obi-Wan and the Chancellor. Anakin's thoughts we pretty much knew already, but still, very well done,

~Beccerz~

Author: Umich Jedi
Date posted: 2/18/2003 5:38:00 PM
Umich Jedi's Comments:

Very well done...always need an update on the big three between Ep. II & III. One on Padme would have also have been cool! thanks

Author: Bundy
Date posted: 2/19/2003 7:33:12 AM
Bundy's Comments:

I like this addition to the archives. It is a good insight to the minds of Obi-Wan, Anakin, and Palpy. Keep up the good work!

Author: Jedi_Author
Date posted: 2/21/2003 7:27:28 AM
Jedi_Author's Comments:

this story was good, but i think you could have mentioned Padmé in Anakin's thoughts. But I thought this expanded Obi-Wan and Palpatine's character. Well done.

Author: Colix
Date posted: 2/23/2003 7:57:50 PM
Colix's Comments:

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Constructive criticism is the only type of criticism allowed here, Colix. Introspection is a valid form of story writing. Get your facts straight before you critique.

Author: Colix
Date posted: 2/23/2003 9:14:16 PM
Colix's Comments:

Sorry just trying to add pespective.

Author: Aunecah_Skywalker  (signed)
Date posted: 2/25/2003 6:04:56 AM
Aunecah_Skywalker's Comments:

I usually don't type anything less than a paragraph for a review, but sometimes I'm startled into a one-lined response: Wonderfully done.

Aunecah

Author: JediPug1  (signed)
Date posted: 2/27/2003 8:57:37 PM
JediPug1's Comments:

Ooh! Good one! I loved the whole sense of foreboding that you built up with each character...nicely done!

Author: Andy-Sith  (signed)
Date posted: 3/8/2003 8:15:59 PM
Andy-Sith's Comments:

It was a well written story and you could feeling what the words were saying to you.
I think you should try and a action or adventure story next and try to ad in the feelings of the characters.
Very good.

Author: Tanara
Date posted: 3/12/2003 10:01:16 PM
Tanara's Comments:

Hmmm...
Fear of Failing...
Confusion...
Lust of ultimate control...
Dangers of the Dark Side are clearly outlined.
Wonderfully dark and forboding. Perhaps: An outline of Episode III we see?

Ooooohhhh Mister Lucas....
Heh heh... write more!

Author: Jessie
Date posted: 11/10/2003 7:24:10 PM
Jessie's Comments:

OMG! this was so great! more!!!

Author: Ivy
Date posted: 12/14/2003 7:30:23 AM
Ivy's Comments:

Interesting prospectives.

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Date posted: 8/8/2012 6:33:35 PM
Ruby's Comments:

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