Author: FernWithy  (signed)
Date posted: 3/18/2003 11:37:39 AM
FernWithy's Comments:

I love this story--it's just so... Siri. The friendship with Obi-Wan, the disdain for the boys' credulity... It's really just a lot of fun, and a neat way to look at both characters.

Author: Master Vader
Date posted: 3/18/2003 1:41:00 PM
Master Vader's Comments:

An original way of looking at both characters. Excellent work!

Author: SupremeChancellor
Date posted: 3/18/2003 7:03:50 PM
SupremeChancellor's Comments:

This was a great story!! If and when you write a sequel plz email me and tell me! I would love to learn more!!!
Chancellor

Author: Barissa
Date posted: 3/18/2003 7:37:57 PM
Barissa's Comments:

That was really sweet! I think you caught the attitude of all six year old little girls! Ha! Excelent! I really enjoyed the story, and totally want a sequel! ~Barissa

Author: Quiller  (signed)
Date posted: 3/18/2003 8:10:58 PM
Quiller's Comments:

An enjoyable read, the second time as much as the first. You captured the voice of a child with unfailing accuracy. Great work.

Author: Darth Pipes  (signed)
Date posted: 3/19/2003 2:30:26 PM
Darth Pipes's Comments:

A wonderful look at young Siri and Obi-Wan. Great job, Muse. :)

Author: Nade_Naberrie  (signed)
Date posted: 3/19/2003 5:47:54 PM
Nade_Naberrie's Comments:

How cute! You gotta love Siri... :) This fic sure brings back some memories. Great job.

Author: ProfessionalMuse  (signed)
Date posted: 3/19/2003 6:06:47 PM
ProfessionalMuse's Comments:

Thank you! I'm thrilled to see how many people like this piece. For something that started out as a challenge to write a fic where Obi-Wan asks to sleep with Siri, it did take an odd turn. Very nice to know the turn was as enjoyable to read as it was to write.

Author: obaona  (signed)
Date posted: 3/19/2003 8:46:03 PM
obaona's Comments:

Very adorable. I loved beta-ing this piece, but I liked reading it more. ;) Both Siri and Obi-Wan were perfectly in character (IMHO). And who hasn't heard a story about if you're bad, something will come and get you? A nice addition to Star Wars, methinks. ;)

Good job!

Author: Siri Ruane
Date posted: 3/21/2003 4:57:39 AM
Siri Ruane's Comments:

Dang Muse! You made me cry!
I love it! You captured Siri's personality PERFECTLY!
I don't know what else to say but great fan fic! This is one of the best!

Author: Padawan_Mindalen
Date posted: 3/22/2003 3:34:19 PM
Padawan_Mindalen's Comments:

Muse, I am so impressed with your imagination! The voice you used fit perfectly with age, character, and everything! Very, very good work!
~Padawan_Mindalen

Author: Darth Sing (Aurra Sing)
Date posted: 3/24/2003 2:08:52 PM
Darth Sing (Aurra Sing)'s Comments:

That was one of the funniest and cutest stories I have ever read!! It was extremally good and funny!!
It was so cute when obi-wan asked siri if he could bunk with her!! Well anyways it was very good, keep up the good work!!!!;^)

Author: Darth Lomas  (signed)
Date posted: 3/25/2003 3:38:19 PM
Darth Lomas's Comments:

Ahh yes, the Shadow Sith..
What shall we say about this wonderfull nugget of mastery by Muse?
Good? Neat? Nice? All fitting words yes, but I prefer brilliant, enjoyable, and wonderous. For that is what this fec, and that comes from a cynical FF reader, namely me.
Why is this so enjoyable? Simply because its so wonderfully simplistic, and yet something I think we all can relate to, during sometime in our lives,the fear of the dark, coupled with the fear of a boogeyman.. So as I read this, I saw reflections of me in my youth, and that was priceles.
Another thing I have to applaud Muse on, was her writing the characters to their personalities when they were six. Sounds easy, but its not..

Yet, she mde us see frightened children soothing one another.. And in doing so, produced a drilliant fan fic.. Well done Muse.. Bravo

Author: JediPug1  (signed)
Date posted: 4/2/2003 6:57:16 PM
JediPug1's Comments:

What a cute & clever story! Nice job!

Author: obi-wan359
Date posted: 1/14/2006 3:02:58 AM
obi-wan359's Comments:

awwww, i love this SO much!!! Obi-wan is just too cute for words!!!!!