Author: Valiowk  (signed)
Date posted: 5/6/2003 2:49:29 AM
Valiowk's Comments:

I like the way your title is very fitting and very apt for the story. Your descriptions serve the exact purpose of almost being able to bring tears to our eyes. The ending is appropriate, for those who cannot bring themselves to cry.

Author: Bimo  (signed)
Date posted: 5/6/2003 3:19:04 AM
Bimo's Comments:

"Petals in Twilight" possesses a delicate inner beauty that is seldom to be found. Written in a very quiet, reflective tone, it is not only a story about grief and regret, but also one about hope.

Great job :)

Bimo

Author: Jauhzmynn
Date posted: 5/6/2003 11:08:49 AM
Jauhzmynn's Comments:

WOW. Amazing, I came )( close to crying myself. Excellant way to bring Obi Wan's emotions out. Even to help others heal who deeply need it.

Author: Nade_Naberrie  (signed)
Date posted: 5/6/2003 4:13:22 PM
Nade_Naberrie's Comments:

Enchanting. "Intoxicating." What more can I say? How perfectly, beautifully... wow.

Author: Frog Lady
Date posted: 5/6/2003 4:38:07 PM
Frog Lady's Comments:

I really liked this. It was beautifully written--almost lyrical!

Author: Sheila
Date posted: 5/6/2003 5:13:28 PM
Sheila's Comments:

Just as wonderful the second time around LuvEwan. This story is beautifully written and conveys the depth of pain Obi-Wan feels at having lost his Jedi family. Your imagery is fantastic and the words are often poetic. Simply lovely.

Author: Obi the Kid
Date posted: 5/6/2003 5:31:59 PM
Obi the Kid's Comments:

Beautiful, LE. Very heartfelt and emotional. I love the idea for the story and you did a nice job in not overduing it. Wonderful job!


Obi

Author: Blazer  (signed)
Date posted: 5/6/2003 8:13:19 PM
Blazer's Comments:

That was a very beautiful fic, LuvEwan. You captured an emotion that not everyone can easily grasp. You balanced logic with pure love and emotion. It was truly a wonder to read. Excellent job here.

Author: Jayel Kenobi
Date posted: 5/7/2003 12:16:38 PM
Jayel Kenobi's Comments:

Wow.

This is a simply beautiful story. Fantastic job with the emotions that Obi-Wan experiences. A job well done.

Author: Nat
Date posted: 5/8/2003 12:27:17 AM
Nat's Comments:

I've read it again, and again, it's so beautiful. Moving, heartbreaking, a real masterpiece, LE.
And... Poor Garen, my throat tightens every time I go through this passage.
Excellent work, really!

Author: Destiny  (signed)
Date posted: 5/8/2003 3:57:36 PM
Destiny's Comments:

This was beautiful, almost like a poem. Poor Obi-Wan... :( Great job, LuvEwan!

Ps: I do too. :p

Author: Princess1
Date posted: 5/8/2003 9:40:16 PM
Princess1's Comments:

Oh....my.....gosh..... That was simply amazing. You wrote it wonderfully, in a almost lyrical method. You captured the perfect balance of deep emotional heart ache without sending it down into melodrama. It was heart breaking, and beautiful. It was both painful and beautiful at the same time. Great job. :)

Author: Aelie
Date posted: 5/10/2003 12:17:04 PM
Aelie's Comments:

I don't know what to say. This...is absolutely amazing. You actually managed to take Obi-Wan's heart and put it in words. I just don't know what to say.

me

Author: obi_wanlover
Date posted: 5/13/2003 12:30:56 PM
obi_wanlover's Comments:

Dude this story was the bomb it was cool i hope you write more

Author: JediPug1  (signed)
Date posted: 5/14/2003 7:19:55 PM
JediPug1's Comments:

Simply beautiful! Obi-Wan's sadness and grief are easily felt by the reader...and are shared by the reader as well. Nice job!

Author: LianaMara
Date posted: 3/2/2004 6:56:28 AM
LianaMara's Comments:

This was so beautiful, sad and yet enchanting. I could feel Obi's pain and grief throughout the piece, and the end was a bittersweet little coda. Wonderful job! :)

Author: jade_eyes
Date posted: 11/6/2004 10:22:01 AM
jade_eyes's Comments:

Woo! The setting was lovely and tranquil. The whole setup with the candles was very vivid and moving. Obi-Wan's is so fabulously captured without being hokey. It's a perfect read! :)

Author: me_luv_darth_squishy
Date posted: 7/5/2005 5:58:27 PM
me_luv_darth_squishy's Comments:

Wow. I don't know what to say. Obi-Wan is definetly a person who deserves the "tears of Heaven."

MTFBWY