Author: Destiny  (signed)
Date posted: 5/27/2003 8:04:04 AM
Destiny's Comments:

First Comment!!! :p

This was an adorable story, Ben_Max! I'm glad you had Beru include an explanation to little Luke of why his Uncle Owen acted the way that he did. The ending was heartbreaking, but fitting. Great job! :p

Author: Jedi Dajuan
Date posted: 5/27/2003 10:00:40 AM
Jedi Dajuan's Comments:

I loved it. It really gives good insite to Owen's harshness.

Author: JediSkywalker13
Date posted: 5/27/2003 5:17:38 PM
JediSkywalker13's Comments:

Great Story! I never knew that Owen could be soo mean in the stories. Having Luke starting to find out about his power and gifts was just at the right time. Awesome story!

Author: DeJade_Vu, the Muse
Date posted: 5/27/2003 6:12:25 PM
DeJade_Vu, the Muse's Comments:

What an absolutely clever idea! Luke being grounded for using the force....geez, why didn't I come up with that? It was well written too, and Owen sounds like Owen--if you know what I mean. I enjoyed it.

I've always been partial to Luke stories, and I'll remember this one. :-)

Author: James T. Skywalker
Date posted: 5/27/2003 6:22:46 PM
James T. Skywalker's Comments:

Well done, and fits well into other events as well (especially since this event did happen in the SW timeline). Good stuff.

~JTS

Author: Niki  (signed)
Date posted: 5/27/2003 6:31:15 PM
Niki's Comments:

Very well done! I enjoyed reading it :)

Author: Niki  (signed)
Date posted: 5/27/2003 6:32:45 PM
Niki's Comments:

Very well done! I enjoyed reading it :)

Author: lulu
Date posted: 5/28/2003 4:05:55 AM
lulu's Comments:

im impressed.. it makes sense

Author: shadesaw
Date posted: 5/28/2003 10:25:00 AM
shadesaw's Comments:

A very touching story great job.

Author: Doogie
Date posted: 5/28/2003 11:02:18 AM
Doogie's Comments:

That was really cool! A good, well thought out story that's a lot more effective than some of the over written stuff seen on here.

Author: Darth_Girth
Date posted: 5/28/2003 1:05:44 PM
Darth_Girth's Comments:

It was a good story. However, if Beru would have told Luke that much about his father, then Luke would have told Ben more than he did when Ben gave Luke his father's lightsaber in A New Hope. When Ben told Luke his father was a Jedi, Luke merely said, "But I thought he was a pilot on a spice freighter". Still a good story though.

Author: Blazer
Date posted: 5/29/2003 4:58:12 PM
Blazer's Comments:

That was very, very sweet. You captured a very real side of Luke and tied in Anakin real nicely. I enjoyed it immensely. Excellet job here!

Author: Savage
Date posted: 6/5/2003 9:41:08 AM
Savage's Comments:

Ayo, this story was really well put together. I liked how you captured the child Luke and the adult Luke. Good job, dawg.

Author: Leah bee
Date posted: 6/6/2003 9:26:42 AM
Leah bee's Comments:

oooooh! i got goosebumps!

this was such a fabulous story. :) it was really cute and connected everything from episode 1 to episode 4! :) GREAT job! i really enjoyed reading this.

Author: DARTHBANE77
Date posted: 6/8/2003 1:47:01 PM
DARTHBANE77's Comments:

I liked it. Very explainitory of Luke and Owen's relationship early on.

Author: BandKidSully
Date posted: 6/9/2003 3:58:59 PM
BandKidSully's Comments:

Wow. I really enjoyed reading this. Its was awesome. I liked how you included Shmi in this one. Would you eve considerwriting another fanfic?
I think it'd be great.


Sully

Author: Ben_Max  (signed)
Date posted: 6/10/2003 6:29:40 AM
Ben_Max's Comments:

Actually, I do have another story here that was posted about a year ago. An Obi-Wan story called "I Stand Alone."

Author: baby
Date posted: 6/13/2003 5:27:07 PM
baby's Comments:

excellent
it would make a nice little short

Author: Valiowk  (signed)
Date posted: 6/25/2003 5:04:08 AM
Valiowk's Comments:

When you recall that Shmi is Luke's grandmother, although she never saw her grandson, it seems fitting and natural that Luke would go to her tombstone. It's not a thought that naturally occurs to one, but it makes sense.

Author: VCGriffin
Date posted: 8/12/2003 12:47:15 PM
VCGriffin's Comments:

WOW, thats was good. I wasent expcting much but this just blew me away as one person has said "it gave me goosebumps" and it does really.

I`ve read three so far and there al been fablous. I wonder if there all this good.
*waners off to see.
Thanks.

Author: Dark Empress
Date posted: 5/22/2005 7:31:07 PM
Dark Empress's Comments:

Very good write. Simple and stated. Good capture on looks thoughts. I liked how his thoughts matched his age and situation. Great structure.