Author: Darth Vegas
Date posted: 6/16/2003 10:14:20 PM
Darth Vegas's Comments:

Very good. Short and sweet, and it really shows their friendship. It begs the question, "What would it be like if they didn't have eachother?"

Author: Quiller  (signed)
Date posted: 6/17/2003 8:27:26 AM
Quiller's Comments:

Good dialogue. It captured the character of each person in turn and made for an enjoyable read.

Author: X-wing Ace
Date posted: 6/17/2003 2:36:05 PM
X-wing Ace's Comments:

I liked it.

Author: Nyiestra
Date posted: 6/19/2003 11:28:35 AM
Nyiestra's Comments:

It's just me, the author...

As you can guess, I like writing about Wedge, Tycho, Wes, and Hobbie, and I like doing these missing scene things. Any ideas for others?

~Ny

Author: Jedi Anakin Solo  (signed)
Date posted: 7/8/2003 11:11:06 AM
Jedi Anakin Solo's Comments:

This was great. Starfighters of Adumar is my absolute favorite Star Wars book, and I love seeing a missing moment like this. The bond between those four friends is really cool, and I like seeing it in a vignette. Nice job :).

Author: Brightbear
Date posted: 12/1/2003 9:13:55 PM
Brightbear's Comments:

That was very sweet. I liked the way you captured the pilot's personalities :)

Author: firebird
Date posted: 4/24/2007 2:27:20 PM
firebird's Comments:

Love it - I'm completely addicted to the Xwing bits, and nothing makes me happier than a really well written missing scene - perfect! Well done :-)