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Author: Darth_Pepsi
Date posted: 9/9/2003 7:31:34 AM
Darth_Pepsi's Comments:

HA HA HA HA!!!! I loved this! The little line at the end was perfect!
We're doomed, heh heh heh...

Author: Quiller  (signed)
Date posted: 9/9/2003 7:39:31 AM
Quiller's Comments:

I'm so glad to see this up at the archive. Not many humourous stories can make me laugh out loud, but this one did. Great job, Jane!

Author: Gina  (signed)
Date posted: 9/9/2003 12:26:55 PM
Gina's Comments:

Very humorous! I loved this!

Author: obaona  (signed)
Date posted: 9/9/2003 2:35:43 PM
obaona's Comments:

Very enjoyable story. I especially liked how you wove in angst/drama in with the humor - Pash's musings on how his squadron thinks they are invulnerable because they're in *his* squadron. And his punishment for the pranksters was particularly evilly devious. Palpatine has nothing on him. :p

Anyway, it made me grin. :D Nice job!

Author: Destiny  (signed)
Date posted: 9/11/2003 11:36:24 AM
Destiny's Comments:

This was soooo funny, Jane. :D This was my favorite part:

"Captain, that -- that is cruel and unusual punishment!" Ficult protested. "Couldn't you court martial us instead?"

"Or just kill us and get it over with?" Solut pleaded.

"Send us into Imp territory with a crippled ship and no weapons?"

"Surely there's a Saarlac pit on Tatooine with our name on it."

*laughs* Poor Threepio - it would seem nothing is less desirable than his presence.

Great job! :p

Author: L-Klure
Date posted: 9/12/2003 3:33:59 PM
L-Klure's Comments:

good job.

Author: Darth Minus  (signed)
Date posted: 9/13/2003 12:51:22 AM
Darth Minus's Comments:

I just wanted to thank Jane Jinn for writing a wonderful story that really inspires and Boushh for being infinately patient and everything in between.
(They're green not orange! Duhh...)

Author: Y-Wing Ace  (signed)
Date posted: 12/3/2003 10:05:51 PM
Y-Wing Ace's Comments:

This is great. Really reminiscent of the X-Wing series in style, and that was as good as any prank Wes Janson ever came up with. (Yub, Yub, Commander!)

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