Date posted: 7/8/2003 12:20:25 AM
really great story. references to ep. V are good, and i never thought of how Ben was distracting him.
Author: Jedi Anakin Solo
Date posted: 7/8/2003 10:55:30 AM
Jedi Anakin Solo's Comments:
It got in!!!!!!!! I knew you could do it, Sach :). I love how we finally find out some of Vader's thoughts on finding out about Luke. Well done :).
Author: Mcily Nochi
Date posted: 7/8/2003 11:20:16 AM
Mcily Nochi's Comments:
Oy . . . I realized I hadn't read anything here for about half a year and came to see if there was anything that looked interesting. Wow, Sache! That's . . . it's . . . really, really good. Excellent.
Oooof. Very freaky. Sorry about my incoherence. Morning. You understand.
Date posted: 7/8/2003 11:23:48 AM
Wow nice missing scene! It almost makes you feel sorry for Vader, he always loses out when it comes to Kenobi. Very onimous, makes you just want to find out what happens next (even if you already know!)
Author: Kyp Karrde
Date posted: 7/8/2003 12:21:43 PM
Kyp Karrde's Comments:
Two thumbs up (or whatever you use for digits in this galaxy, be it Verpine legs, Wookiee climbing claws, or other assorted extremities.)
Date posted: 7/8/2003 12:29:13 PM
Yay, Saché! Mesa soo proud of you!
This is a wonderful story! You portray Darth Vader so well!
Hey! What if you ARE Darth Vader? ;) :p J/k.
Date posted: 7/9/2003 5:33:48 PM
I'm so glad to see this here, Sache! Still one of my favorites, definitely. This is a wonderful interpretation of Vader's discovery, and very eloquently written. I love getting into Vader's head like this. Beautifully done.
Author: X-Wing Pilot 5
Date posted: 7/10/2003 11:04:30 AM
X-Wing Pilot 5's Comments:
Excellent fic. I've always wanted to see that scene where Vader discovered it was Luke who destroyed the Death Star... and ironically, how I imagined it was very similar to how you portrayed it - though one detial (how Vader finds out) is better in yours than in mine.
X-Wing Pilot 5
Author: darth carious
Date posted: 7/10/2003 7:10:10 PM
darth carious's Comments:
impressive, most impressive....... the force is with you young sache.....
Date posted: 7/11/2003 3:37:52 AM
Just excellent story. It really could have gone this way.
Date posted: 7/11/2003 7:09:18 AM
Excellent account of how Vader may have found out about Luke. Vader's thoughts about Obi-Wan and his determination to make his son into his own Sith apprentice are very believable. Well done.
Date posted: 7/11/2003 8:11:54 AM
The feel was great-
Only one thing I really have a complaint about-Vader using the force to remember something? Take it out and its fine-Red43j
Date posted: 7/11/2003 10:36:42 AM
It's pretty good, but I thought that the fact that Vader was pondering who his apprentice was going to be at the exact moment the lieutenant came up to him to tell him Skywalker destroyed the death star was a stretch. I know that the author would argue that it's the will of the force but I think he could have constructed that part of the story better.
Author: Dath Deciduous
Date posted: 7/11/2003 12:18:05 PM
Dath Deciduous's Comments:
This is the best Fan Fic short story I have read yet. Good job.
Date posted: 7/11/2003 1:32:51 PM
Very nice story, I enjoyed the 'bridge' between two movies. The only thing wrong I find is that you suggest Vader knew that he had a son. That still may be a slight possibility, but most evidence claims Vader never knew. Good though
Date posted: 7/11/2003 1:49:13 PM
Very well written shortie.... excellent pace and atmosphere. Excepcionally executed and interesting. I wish it could be a bit longer due to its superb quality, but it does deliver anyways!!!
Author: Zane Marit
Date posted: 7/11/2003 2:34:06 PM
Zane Marit's Comments:
Great read...I actually can see that happening.
Date posted: 7/11/2003 8:31:36 PM
totally crazy.. this makes that whole scene with ben and vader fight more understandable.. i was always like.. why did he let himself die like that man?! but now i sorda think there's a better reason.. to let luke slip away.. and that he WASNT the last jedi hope.
Date posted: 7/11/2003 9:55:11 PM
Very Nice! Very well put together- A nice little portrait of what's ticking in Vader's lil' head.
Date posted: 7/12/2003 8:03:25 AM
Nicley done. Well thought out. Jar Jar would be proud of you:-)
3rd wing 2nd bttln
Author: Jedi Phist
Date posted: 7/12/2003 1:16:47 PM
Jedi Phist's Comments:
Strong witht he force this story is, very strong. Keep it coming!
Date posted: 7/15/2003 7:27:26 PM
Nice job! It fits in so well with Vader's obsession with finding Luke in the next films. I like how you also put in how Obi-Wan really did beat Vader in the end. Evil never wins!
Date posted: 7/19/2003 5:57:00 PM
*bounces* I'm so glad this got in. Your writing is amazing, Sach. This piece gave me chills. I imagine Vader finding out Luke would have been a very powerful thing, and you wrote it as such. I also liked the explanation for why Ben sacrificed himself, and how he did it in such a way that Vader was distracted from Luke. It made a lot of sense.
Date posted: 8/23/2003 2:46:09 PM
that was great! i think you have vader's frame of mind nailed.
Author: Mark Jade
Date posted: 1/13/2004 10:06:30 PM
Mark Jade's Comments:
loved this line
You knew. You always knew. She told you the day you left.
It goes well with Leia's line in ROTJ.. I know.. somehow I have always known.... the skywalker clan is definately intuative.
Date posted: 3/2/2004 3:39:15 PM
Good story. You kept Vader in character better than anyone else I have seen, yet we did find out how Vader discovered the truth. Although it never happened like this, it is certainly plausible. The way you wrote it was excellent. Nicely done.
Author: Darth Haem
Date posted: 8/22/2004 4:33:33 PM
Darth Haem's Comments:
Nicely done. Obi wan really got last laugh on many levels that day, he distracted vader allowing Luke not to be sensed by him, he became a spirit of the force that couls guide Luke anywhere, and he also made sure it was set firmly in Lukes mind the image of Vader killing him. Vader was left with a hollow victory and no body to gloat over, dissapearing with a wry grin
Great story 9/10
Date posted: 11/12/2004 11:40:48 AM
That was very good! I have wanted to read about that moment in time for a while. Thank you for writing it!
Author: Dark Empress
Date posted: 5/22/2005 6:07:27 PM
Dark Empress's Comments:
A simple write. Good way to present it... you have the characters images down. You give the readers what they want. Very good.