Date posted: 8/5/2003 11:21:54 AM
Hey I'm the first to reply! Loved it, Tae, I like how you showed it from an anonymous dying Jedi's point of view. Very sad, very strong!
Date posted: 8/5/2003 11:58:32 AM
Really enjoyed it. Plz write more.
Author: Diana Watson
Date posted: 8/5/2003 12:09:19 PM
Diana Watson's Comments:
A very elegant and sensitive piece about making one's transition.
Date posted: 8/5/2003 12:12:14 PM
nice !! I like it very much
Author: Darklord Brunn
Date posted: 8/5/2003 9:09:19 PM
Darklord Brunn's Comments:
very nicely written, liked the fact that it showed the arena battle through the eyes of another less recognized jedi. sad though
Date posted: 8/6/2003 10:50:51 AM
I loved it.
keep up the awesome work.
Date posted: 8/6/2003 1:14:34 PM
How refreshing to see a piece like this written form a new and unexpected point of view. Very touching; very well done.
Date posted: 8/8/2003 8:34:27 AM
Eirtae, Eirtae. ;) Lovely.
It's an interesting thing to tackle, that you've done here - I never even really thought about the Jedi that were killed on Geonosis. What a wonderful insight to the Jedi of that time, of how it must have been to be in that battle.
Very nice job. :)
Date posted: 2/3/2004 8:08:42 AM
Sweeet! It was great! I got goosebumps at the end! Keep it up. Totally loved the breaking down of the well known sayings!
Author: Lina Skye
Date posted: 2/8/2004 6:42:41 PM
Lina Skye's Comments:
Great! I loved it. It gives so much more depth to the battle that the Jedi fought. It gives a name to those anonymous faces in the crowd. Great job.
Date posted: 5/4/2004 5:17:24 PM
Very well written. I have considered trying to write a story from a character's point of view on the subject, maybe Mace, or Yoda, or Ani, heck even Padme. But this is exceptionally well written. Very sad too. Keep up the great work.
Date posted: 11/12/2004 10:02:06 AM
I really liked this story. it was very good, and very touching. Keep up the good work.
Author: Lokia-Jedi Knight
Date posted: 12/11/2004 6:40:22 PM
Lokia-Jedi Knight's Comments:
Date posted: 6/2/2005 7:34:42 AM
wow. i luved it. thank you for writing it.